Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cümle yapısını ve dilbilgisini düzeltin; sayı ve ölçü birimlerini net ve doğal ifade edin. Cümleleri birleştirirken bağlaç kullanın ve gereksiz tekrarları kaldırın. Örneğin "my home have" yerine "my building has" ve "approximately 100M" yerine "about 100 meters" kullanın.

Example: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home. For example, my building has 25 floors and is about 100 metres high.

Suggestion: Doğal ifadeler kullanın ve fiil yapılarını düzeltin (ör. "I don't prefer taking photos of buildings"). Bağlaçlarla cümlenizi akıcı hale getirin ve nedenini daha açık verin; örneğin hangi doğal manzaraları sevdiğinizi belirtin.

Example: I don't usually take photos of buildings; I prefer photographing natural landscapes such as mountains and forests because I find their colours and textures more attractive.

Suggestion: Cümleyi daha net ve doğru kurun: yer ile ilgili ifadenin başına "there are" veya "I'd like to visit" gibi yapı koyun. Gereksiz "uh" ve belirsiz kelimelerden kaçının. Spesifik bir örnek verin (hangi şehir veya bina).

Example: Yes. I would like to visit Japan because it has many beautiful tall and historical buildings, such as Tokyo Skytree and Kyoto's temples.

Suggestion: Olumsuz yanıtınızı daha kibar ve akıcı ifade edin. Dilbilgisi ve kelime seçimlerini düzeltin (ör. "it offers" ve "breathe fresh air"). Nedenlerinizi bağlaçlarla bağlayarak genişletin ve daha spesifik detay ekleyin.

Example: No, I wouldn't. I prefer living in a village because it offers natural beauty, such as forests and trees, and I can breathe fresh air there.

× For example, my home have 25 floor.

✓ For example, my home has 25 floors.

The noun phrase 'my home' is singular so the verb must be 'has' (subject-verb agreement). Also 'floor' should be plural 'floors' when referring to a count greater than one. Suggestion: use singular/plural agreement and add plural -s for countable nouns when the count is more than one.

× And it's approximately 100M.

✓ And it's approximately 100 m high.

Write units properly and include a measurement adjective and a space before the unit: '100 m' and add 'high' to describe the height of a building. Also use lowercase 'm' for meters in sentence text. Suggestion: write measurements as '100 m high' or 'about 100 meters high.'

× Actually I don't prefer take photo on buildings.

✓ Actually I don't prefer to take photos of buildings.

After 'prefer' we use the infinitive with 'to' (prefer to do something) or the -ing form (prefer doing something). Also use the plural 'photos' and the preposition 'of' to indicate what is being photographed, not 'on.' Suggestion: say 'I don't prefer to take photos of buildings' or 'I prefer taking photos of nature.'

× I prefer landscape of nature like mountain forest.

✓ I prefer landscapes of nature, like mountains and forests.

Use plural forms 'landscapes', and 'of nature' is acceptable but better 'landscapes of nature.' Use plural nouns 'mountains and forests' and separate items with 'and.' Suggestion: pluralize countable nouns and list items correctly.

× It is more attractive than buildings for me.

✓ They are more attractive to me than buildings are.

'It' is unclear when referring to plural 'landscapes'; use 'they' to match plural. Use 'attractive to me' rather than 'for me' and include a comparative structure 'than buildings are' for clarity. Suggestion: match pronoun number to the noun and use 'attractive to me.'

× Actually in Japan there are most beautiful tall building and historical building and I want to visit there, uh.

✓ Actually, in Japan there are many beautiful tall buildings and historical buildings, and I want to visit them.

Plural forms needed for 'buildings.' Use 'many' to indicate quantity and 'them' to refer back to the buildings rather than 'there.' Also add commas and remove filler word 'uh.' Suggestion: use plural nouns, appropriate quantifiers, and clear pronouns.

× Definitely no.

✓ Definitely not.

In response to a yes/no question, use 'definitely not' rather than 'definitely no' for a natural negative reply. 'No' as a standalone can be used, but 'definitely not' fits the sentence better. Suggestion: use 'definitely not' or 'no, I don't.'

× I want to live in village because it's offer natural beauty like forest or tree.

✓ I want to live in a village because it offers natural beauty, like forests and trees.

Include the article 'a' before 'village.' Use the third-person singular verb form 'offers' to agree with 'it.' Use plurals 'forests and trees' and commas to separate clauses. Suggestion: use articles with singular countable nouns and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× I want to breed fresh air.

✓ I want to breathe fresh air.

The correct verb for using air is 'breathe,' not 'breed' (which means to reproduce). Use 'breathe fresh air' to express inhaling clean air. Suggestion: choose correct verb collocations; 'breathe fresh air' is the standard expression.