Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (use articles, singular/plural agreement, prepositions) and avoid filler words (uh).

Example: Yes. There are several tall buildings near my home because I live in a large city. For example, many new apartment towers have been built recently due to rapid industrial growth, and they provide convenient housing for workers.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer, avoid repeating the same idea, and use accurate vocabulary (e.g. ‘photographer’ or ‘I enjoy photography’). Limit to two to three sentences and include a brief specific detail (what you photograph or why).

Example: Yes, I enjoy photography, so I often take pictures of tall buildings. For instance, I like to photograph modern glass towers and old clock towers because I appreciate their shapes and details.

Suggestion: Answer directly and use clear vocabulary. Say which type of building you would like to visit, then give one specific reason and an example. Avoid vague phrases and incorrect word forms (e.g. 'historyicles'). Keep to two or three sentences.

Example: I would like to visit museums because they teach me about the country's history. For example, a national history museum would let me see artifacts and learn how people preserved important objects.

Suggestion: Be concise and use correct grammar. State your preference clearly, give one or two concrete reasons with linking words (for example, 'because' and 'however'), and avoid contradictory or unclear phrases. Use proper tense and pronouns.

Example: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it would offer great views and modern facilities. However, I am comfortable in my current house, so I would only move if the apartment offered better convenience and safety.

× Yes, there are number of tall buildings are near to my home because I live in a big city in their uh.

✓ Yes, there are a number of tall buildings near my home because I live in a big city.

The phrase 'are number of' is incorrect; use 'a number of' with plural noun. Also remove the extra 'are' and the unnecessary preposition 'to' after 'near'. Remove 'in their uh' as unclear. Use concise phrasing.

× Industrialization is increasing day by day, so there are number of vertical buildings are available in there for the convenience of the people accommodation.

✓ Industrialization is increasing day by day, so a number of tall buildings are available there for people’s accommodation.

Replace 'there are number of' with 'a number of' and remove the extra 'are' redundancy. 'Vertical buildings' is awkward; 'tall buildings' is better. Change 'in there' to 'there' and use the possessive 'people’s accommodation'.

× Yes, I'm a photogenic person, so I like to click photos of the tall buildings because I collecting a different kind of pictures in my mobile phone.

✓ Yes, I'm a photogenic person, so I like to take photos of tall buildings because I collect different kinds of pictures on my mobile phone.

Use simple present 'collect' instead of incorrect continuous 'I collecting'. Use 'take photos' rather than 'click photos' for natural English. 'Different kind of pictures' should be 'different kinds of pictures' and 'in my mobile phone' becomes 'on my mobile phone'.

× So it's habit, it's my habit to collecting these kind of pictures and I usually click the pictures of vertical buildings in my collection.

✓ So it's my habit to collect these kinds of pictures, and I usually take photos of tall buildings for my collection.

'To collecting' is incorrect after 'to' — use base form 'collect'. 'These kind of' should be 'these kinds of'. Replace 'click the pictures' with 'take photos' and 'vertical buildings' with 'tall buildings'. Ensure parallel structure.

× In my perspective, the building kind of museums is proved to be beneficial for me and I like to visit these kind of horizontal buildings in which I grab the knowledge about the histories as well as the how they preserve the essential things of the country as well as I get a lot of knowledge about the historyicles.

✓ From my perspective, museums are beneficial for me, and I like to visit such buildings because I learn about history and how they preserve important cultural items.

Original sentence has many structural and word-choice issues: 'building kind of museums' is incorrect — use 'museums'. 'Is proved to be' is awkward; use 'are beneficial'. 'These kind of horizontal buildings' is unclear — 'such buildings' suffices. 'Grab the knowledge about the histories' should be 'learn about history'. Remove repetition and the nonword 'historyicles'. Simplify for clarity.

× Yes, definitely I love to live in a tall building because it it helps me to get a good view from the window as well as living in apartment is good form of richness as well as it giving the advantages of technology.

✓ Yes, definitely I would love to live in a tall building because it gives me a good view from the window, and living in an apartment is a sign of wealth and offers technological advantages.

Use conditional 'would love' for preference. Remove duplicated 'it it'. 'Helps me to get' is simplified to 'gives me'. 'Living in apartment is good form of richness' is unidiomatic — use 'a sign of wealth'. 'It giving' is incorrect; use 'offers'.

× But now I'm we live in a house in which I'm quite comfortable but if I get chance to live in a tall building I never get to.

✓ But now we live in a house where I'm quite comfortable, and if I get the chance to live in a tall building, I would definitely take it.

Original mixes 'I'm we live' — choose 'we live'. Use 'where' instead of 'in which' for natural speech. 'If I get chance' should be 'if I get the chance'. 'I never get to' is unclear and incorrect; use 'I would definitely take it' to express willingness.