Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct with a clear topic sentence, use correct grammar and concise supporting detail. Avoid fillers and unclear fragments. For example, say you live in a low-rise residential area, state typical building heights, and give one brief reason why there are no tall buildings (e.g. zoning or suburban location).

Example: No, there are no tall buildings near my home. I live in a suburban residential area with mostly two-storey houses, so the skyline is low. Because the area is zoned for low-rise housing, you rarely see apartment blocks or offices.

Suggestion: Start with a clear present-tense answer, avoid past tense mix-ups and hesitations. Use one linking phrase to add specific examples and a short reason for taking photos. Keep to two or three sentences and finish your thought.

Example: Yes, I sometimes take photos of buildings to remember places I visit. For example, I photograph museums and historic houses because their architecture and details are interesting to me.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence naming one specific building you want to visit. Use linking words to explain why and add one concrete reason or detail. Avoid vague words and hesitations. If you mean a famous historic site, use the correct name and a brief reason (architecture, history, culture).

Example: Yes, I would like to visit the Sagrada Família in Barcelona. I want to see its unique architecture and learn about Gaudí’s design, because it looks very different from other churches.

Suggestion: Answer directly and use correct grammar to express preference and reason. Use one linking word to add a specific safety concern and a brief supporting detail (e.g. earthquake risk or difficulty evacuating). Keep it to two sentences.

Example: No, I would prefer to live in a low-rise building because I worry about safety during earthquakes. High-rise buildings can sway more and are harder to evacuate quickly, so low buildings feel safer to me.

× No, not at all because my hometown is a residential area so there is only houses SO which is second floor and but my MMM so.

✓ No, not at all. My hometown is a residential area, so there are only houses, mostly two-storey ones.

The original sentence has multiple structure problems: run-on fragments, unclear words, and subject-verb agreement. Classify as sentence structure errors (ID 26). Corrections split into clear sentences, replace 'there is only houses' with 'there are only houses' to match plural subject, and clarify 'second floor' to 'two-storey'. Suggestion: break long thoughts into separate sentences, ensure subjects and verbs agree, and avoid fillers like 'so' and 'MMM'.

× Yes, sometimes I took photos for my memory, uh, when I visit special areas such as our museum or uh, residential, uh, famous people's ancient house because it was very.

✓ Yes, sometimes I take photos to remember places when I visit special areas such as our museum or famous old houses.

The sentence mixes past tense 'took' with present 'visit' and leaves 'because it was very' incomplete. Classified as past tense issue (ID 5). Use present simple 'take' to match habitual action and 'visit'. Remove filler words and finish the idea. Suggestion: use consistent tense for habitual actions (present simple), avoid unnecessary fillers, and complete descriptions (e.g., 'famous old houses').

× Yes, I have a lot of, uh, praise that I want to go to because for example, uh, especially in foreign countries, uh, I want to go world historical buildings such as Santa Monica.

✓ Yes, there are many places I want to visit, especially historical sites in foreign countries, such as Santa Monica.

Original is ungrammatical and unclear: 'have a lot of praise that I want to go to' is incorrect and wordy. Classified as sentence structure errors (ID 26). Correction clarifies meaning: 'many places I want to visit' and uses 'historical sites' rather than 'world historical buildings'. Suggestion: express desire with 'want to visit', remove fillers, and use clear nouns ('sites' or 'buildings').

× No, I would rather live in the safety a lower wise buildings because I worried about the safety during the earthquake because the high heights might sway will be big so.

✓ No, I would rather live in lower, safer buildings because I am worried about safety during earthquakes since tall buildings may sway a lot.

Multiple issues: awkward ordering, incorrect modal/auxiliary forms, and tense inconsistency. Classified as modal verb usage (ID 4) because of 'might sway will be big' and also sentence structure problems. Correction uses 'may sway a lot' for possibility and 'I am worried' for present concern. Suggestion: use 'would rather' + base verb or simple preference structure, keep verb forms consistent, and use modal verbs correctly ('may' or 'might' plus base verb) and concise phrasing.