Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cevap daha akıcı ve doğru gramerle verilmelidir. Konuya doğrudan başlayın, tekrarları ve gereksiz dolgu kelimelerini (uh, I) kaldırın. Yer isimlerini doğru yazın ve ‘which is’ gibi yanlış uyumları düzeltin. Ayrıca bir veya iki bağlantı sözcüğü kullanarak (for example, especially) cümlenizi netleştirin. Örnek: kısa bir konu cümlesi + bir destekleyici detay + uygun bağlaç.

Example: No, I live in Bakırköy in Istanbul. The tall buildings are not near my district; they are mostly in areas like Maslak and some other business districts. For example, Maslak has many high-rises and modern offices.

Suggestion: Cevap daha düzenli ve dil bilgisi açısından doğru olmalı. ‘No’ ile başlayıp nedenini açıkça belirtin, kelime tekrarlarından ve yanlış telaffuzdan kaçının (Nat nature, spectacles). Destekleyici detaylarda bağlaç kullanın ve örnek verin. Maksimum 3–4 kısa cümleyle ifade edin.

Example: No, I don't usually photograph buildings. I prefer taking pictures of seascapes and sunsets because I find natural scenery more relaxing. For instance, I often shoot photos of forests and mountain views during trips.

Suggestion: Cevabınızı daha açık ve gramer olarak doğru kurun. Gereksiz duraklamaları çıkarın ve ‘I really wonder’ yerine doğru yapı kullanın (I would like to visit / I wonder what it would be like). Bir örnek ve neden ekleyin (architecture, skyline).

Example: Yes, I would love to visit the buildings in New York, especially along Fifth Avenue. I am curious about the architecture and the skyline, and I think it would be impressive to see landmarks like the Empire State Building in person.

Suggestion: Cevabı daha doğal ve doğru gramerle verin. Deprem riskini belirtirken ‘I am afraid of earthquakes’ gibi doğru ifadeler kullanın. Tercihinizi net bir konu cümlesiyle başlatın ve kısa destekleyici nedenler verin. Önerilen çözüm veya alternatifleri bağlaçla bağlayın.

Example: No, I wouldn't like to live in a tall building because Istanbul is prone to earthquakes and I am afraid of that risk. I prefer living in a villa or a low-rise, well-built apartment in a village-like area where I feel safer.

× the buildings which are, which is tall, are done nearby my, uh, province, but especially in Muslak and the other, uh, areas that have a little, they have numerous, uh, tall buildings in there.

✓ the buildings which are tall are located near my province, especially in Maslak and other areas that have many tall buildings.

The student used 'which is tall' instead of 'which are tall' because 'buildings' is plural so verbs/pronouns must be plural (subject-verb agreement/third person plural). 'Are done nearby my province' is incorrect verb choice; use 'are located near my province'. 'Have a little, they have numerous' is contradictory and awkward; use 'have many tall buildings'. Also corrected place name spelling to Maslak. Suggestion: match plural subjects with plural verbs ('buildings... are'), use appropriate verbs like 'located', and avoid redundant phrases. Grammar problem type ID: 2

× I prefer seasides or sunsets.

✓ I prefer the seaside or sunsets.

'Seasides' is uncommon in this context; 'the seaside' or 'seaside views' is natural. Also adding article 'the' clarifies preference. Suggestion: use 'the seaside' or 'seaside scenery' when speaking about coastal views. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× Spectacles, especially coastal buildings not really impress me.

✓ Buildings, especially coastal ones, don't really impress me.

'Spectacles' is the wrong word; 'buildings' or 'sights' fits. Word order and negation were incorrect: use 'don't really impress me'. 'Coastal buildings' can be shortened to 'coastal ones'. Suggestion: use appropriate nouns ('buildings' or 'sights') and correct negation structures ('do not/ don't'). Grammar problem type ID: 13

× I like Nat nature, forests, mountains or.

✓ I like nature, such as forests and mountains.

Sentence was incomplete and had a typo 'Nat nature'. Rephrase to 'I like nature, such as forests and mountains.' Suggestion: avoid repetition and finish the list; use 'such as' to introduce examples. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× I really want to see, uh, New York's buildings, uh, uh, for example, 5th Ave. buildings.

✓ I really want to see New York's buildings, for example those on 5th Avenue.

Redundant commas removed and '5th Ave. buildings' is informal; use '5th Avenue' and optionally 'those on' to clarify. Article and phrasing adjusted for clarity. Suggestion: use full place names and clear noun phrases. Grammar problem type ID: 22

× I really wondering if I were there.

✓ I would really wonder if I were there. OR I would really like to see what it is like if I were there.

The student omitted auxiliary verb for continuous or conditional: 'I really wondering' is ungrammatical. Use 'I am really wondering' for present, or 'I would really wonder' / better 'I would really like to see what it is like' for hypothetical. Suggestion: include appropriate auxiliary verbs and choose phrasing that fits the conditional context. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× In Istanbul they have a a lot of risks for a earthquake and I really scare of it.

✓ In Istanbul there is a high risk of earthquakes and I am really scared of them.

Multiple issues: 'a a lot of risks' incorrect quantifier and repetition; use 'a high risk' or 'many risks'. 'for a earthquake' wrong article; 'an earthquake' if singular, but better 'risk of earthquakes'. 'I really scare of it' should be 'I am really scared of them' or 'I am really frightened by them'. Also changed subject structure to 'In Istanbul there is...' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: use correct articles ('an'), correct collocations ('risk of earthquakes'), and correct passive/active adjectives ('scared', not 'scare'). Grammar problem type ID: 1

× I prefer villas or some villages, maybe some strong apartment, some resilience apartments also.

✓ I prefer villas or houses in villages, maybe strong, earthquake-resistant apartments as well.

'Some villages' is odd after 'prefer villas or', so changed to 'houses in villages'. 'Strong apartment' and 'resilience apartments' are incorrect collocations; use 'strong' and 'earthquake-resistant' or 'resilient apartments'. 'Also' moved to 'as well' for natural flow. Suggestion: use common collocations ('earthquake-resistant', 'resilient') and match noun types ('houses' vs 'apartments'). Grammar problem type ID: 13