Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details using linking words. Avoid hesitation words and incomplete phrases.

Example: Yes — there are several tall buildings near my home. For example, a 35‑storey residential tower stands directly opposite my apartment, and there are other high‑rise blocks along the street to the right.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be slightly expanded with a brief reason and a linking phrase to sound more natural.

Example: Not really — I'm not interested in architecture, so I rarely photograph buildings. Instead, I prefer taking pictures of nature because I enjoy capturing natural light and landscapes.

Suggestion: Good direct response; reduce hesitations and give one short, specific supporting detail. Use a linking word to connect the idea of preference to the reason.

Example: No, I don't have a particular building I want to visit. Instead, I prefer being outdoors — for example, I enjoy visiting the countryside to capture sunlight and wide landscapes.

Suggestion: Clarify and organize your answer: state your position clearly, then give one or two specific reasons. Remove repetitions and filler sounds.

Example: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building. For instance, I dream of living on a high floor so I can enjoy panoramic views every morning and feel more privacy and quiet.

× My home is surrounded by so many tall buildings. For example in front of my apartment there is a building, there is a 35 floor building and like sky high building and on the right of.

✓ My home is surrounded by many tall buildings. For example, in front of my apartment there is a 35-floor skyscraper, and there are tall buildings on the right.

Errors: run-on sentence, redundant phrases and missing plural agreement. Use parallel structure and correct noun forms: 'so many' can be simplified to 'many'; '35 floor' should be hyphenated as '35-floor'; 'sky high building' is informal—use 'skyscraper' or 'very tall building'; missing verb 'there are' before plural noun. Suggestion: break into two clear sentences, use hyphenation for compound adjectives and ensure subject-verb agreement. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I'm not interested in architecture like building architecture, so I don't usually take pictures of buildings.

✓ I'm not interested in architecture such as building architecture, so I don't usually take pictures of buildings.

Error: incorrect or awkward preposition/phrase 'like building architecture'. Use 'such as' to introduce an example. Alternatively rephrase to 'I'm not interested in building architecture.' Suggestion: simplify the phrase to 'building architecture' or use 'such as' for examples. Grammar problem type ID:11

× I prefer taking pictures of nature.

✓ I prefer to take pictures of nature.

Error: gerund vs infinitive preference. 'Prefer' can be followed by either gerund or infinitive, but in this context 'prefer to take' is slightly more natural. Suggestion: use 'prefer to take' for general preferences. Grammar problem type ID:12

× Actually, I don't have a specific building I'd like to visit. UMM. I don't really enjoy seeing buildings. I prefer being outdoors and capturing sunlight and mesmerizing landscapes, countryside landscapes instead.

✓ Actually, I don't have a specific building I'd like to visit. I don't really enjoy seeing buildings; I prefer being outdoors and capturing sunlight and mesmerizing countryside landscapes instead.

Errors: filler 'UMM' should be removed in written form; punctuation and redundancy issues: 'mesmerizing landscapes, countryside landscapes' is repetitive. Combine ideas with a semicolon and place adjective before noun: 'countryside landscapes'. Suggestion: remove fillers, avoid repetition, and use correct punctuation. Grammar problem type ID:26

× UMM living in a tall building is one of them, one of my dreams. I want to top off the sky high building and every morning and every morning I want to enjoy the UMM view from my apartment.

✓ Living in a tall building is one of my dreams. I want to live at the top of a skyscraper, and every morning I want to enjoy the view from my apartment.

Errors: filler 'UMM' and awkward phrasing 'one of them, one of my dreams'; 'top off the sky high building' is incorrect collocation; repeated phrase 'every morning' appears twice; 'UMM view' makes no sense. Suggestion: remove fillers, use natural collocations ('live at the top of a skyscraper'), avoid repetition and ensure clear noun phrases. Grammar problem type ID:26}]} PMID: Not applicable.