Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence. Avoid repetition and incorrect pronouns. Use 2–4 supporting details and linking words (e.g., “but”, “however”, “because”). Be concise and grammatical. For example, say whether tall buildings are near your home, then add distance or where they are relative to your house.

Example: There aren’t many tall buildings right next to my house because I live in a residential neighborhood. However, if I walk five minutes to the town center, I can see several high-rise offices and apartments.

Suggestion: Start with a direct short answer, then give concise reasons and an example. Use correct plurals and remove repeated words. Use linking words like “but” and “because” to connect ideas. Be specific about how often and what you prefer to photograph.

Example: Yes, I sometimes photograph buildings, but not often because I prefer nature photography. For example, I usually take pictures of flowers and landscapes when I visit parks on weekends.

Suggestion: Give a clear direct answer naming one building you would like to visit and add a reason. Avoid vague phrases like “I can't remember.” Use linking words (e.g., “for example”, “because”) and provide one specific detail about the building's appeal (style, history, location).

Example: Yes, I would like to visit the Sagrada Família in Barcelona because I am fascinated by Gaudí's unique architectural style and the cathedral’s intricate details.

Suggestion: Answer directly and complete the thought: give one or two specific reasons and a contrasting idea if relevant. Use correct terms (e.g., “apartment” or “house”) and finish sentences. Include linking words such as “because” and “so” to make your reasoning clear.

Example: No, I wouldn’t want to live in a tall building because I worry about safety during emergencies, like earthquakes or fires. I prefer a low-rise apartment or a house where evacuation would be easier.

× He has They are the place I'm living right now is the middle of the residence area by residence area.

✓ The place where I'm living right now is in the middle of a residential area.

The original sentence mixes subjects and clauses ('He has They are') and lacks correct relative clause structure. This is a sentence structure error: use 'The place where I'm living right now' to introduce location and 'is in the middle of a residential area' for the predicate. Use 'a residential area' instead of 'residence area' for natural collocation.

× However, when I take a few minutes walk there is a middle center of the city which has.

✓ However, a few minutes' walk away is the city center.

The original uses wrong word order and prepositions. Use the possessive form 'a few minutes' walk' and the preposition 'away' to indicate distance. 'Middle center of the city' is redundant; use 'city center'. The clause should be inverted: 'A few minutes' walk away is the city center.'

× Yes, I sometimes take photos of building, but not so much compared to the other view like nature view or like some flowers view flowers picture because I'm not so interested in architecture.

✓ Yes, I sometimes take photos of buildings, but not as often as I photograph natural scenes or flowers because I'm not very interested in architecture.

Errors include singular/plural ('building' should be 'buildings'), awkward comparative phrasing ('not so much compared to'), and unnatural noun phrases ('nature view', 'flowers picture'). This is an incorrect use of quantifiers and comparisons. Use 'not as often as' for comparison and plural 'buildings', and more natural phrases 'natural scenes' and 'flowers'.

× It's difficult question because there are so many buildings that I want to go someday, for example.

✓ That's a difficult question because there are so many buildings I would like to visit someday.

The original has awkward structure ('It's difficult question') and wrong verb choice ('want to go') for visiting buildings. This is a sentence structure error: use 'That's a difficult question' and 'I would like to visit someday' for polite future desire. Remove 'for example' which is left hanging.

× I can't remember, but there was architecture made.

✓ I can't remember any specific ones, but there are many interesting examples of architecture.

The original fragment 'there was architecture made' is ungrammatical and vague. This is a sentence structure error. Provide a clear noun phrase and correct verb: 'there are many interesting examples of architecture' or 'I can't remember specific names'.

× No, I don't think I want to live in a tall building because I think that is not safe when some disaster happens.

✓ No, I don't think I want to live in a tall building because I don't feel it would be safe during a disaster.

The original repeats 'I think' and uses awkward phrasing 'when some disaster happens.' This is a sentence structure issue. Use a conditional/modal construction 'would be safe during a disaster' to express hypothetical concern and avoid repetition.

× If I live in a single apartment or.

✓ If I lived in a single-level apartment, I would feel safer.

This is an incomplete sentence fragment lacking a main clause and wrong tense for hypothetical situation. Use conditional structure: 'If I lived..., I would...' and clarify 'single-level apartment' instead of 'single apartment' for clarity.