Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details. Reduce fillers (uh) and avoid repeating words. Use correct collocations (e.g., "high-rise buildings", "designed by different architects").

Example: Yes. I live in Chinatown in downtown Vancouver, where there are many modern high-rise buildings. For example, the streets are lined with glass towers and heritage buildings, each designed by different architects, which gives the area a varied skyline.

Suggestion: Clarify and correct vocabulary, remove confusion ("technical proteins" is incorrect). Start with a direct answer, then give a specific reason and an example. Use linking words like "because" or "especially" and avoid long repetition and fillers.

Example: Yes, I often photograph buildings because architectural details and lighting interest me. For example, I especially enjoy night photography—when city lights highlight façades—and I sometimes shoot from rooftops to capture the skyline, which makes me feel happy and inspired.

Suggestion: Be more specific about why you want to visit and correct grammar (e.g., "several buildings", "Pacific Centre"). Provide one clear reason and an example of an activity. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

Example: Yes. One building I would like to visit is Pacific Centre because it has many shops and a large food court. For instance, I could go shopping with my parents and try different foods there, which would be a nice family outing.

Suggestion: Answer directly, correct word choice ("high-rise building", not "high risk"), and use a conditional sentence properly. Give one or two concrete reasons why you would or would not want to live in a tall building.

Example: Yes, I would like to live in a modern high-rise building if I could afford it because it would have better amenities and views. For example, a modern apartment might offer a gym and large windows overlooking the city, which would improve my quality of life.

× Yes, I live in Chinatown, which is uh, associated in Vancouver downtown there are a lot of modern high res, uh, buildings and uh, they are really exceptional and all are the different, uh, designed with different architect.

✓ Yes, I live in Chinatown, which is associated with downtown Vancouver; there are a lot of modern high-rise buildings, and they are really impressive and each is designed by a different architect.

Multiple preposition and word choice errors: 'associated in' should be 'associated with' (correct preposition), 'Vancouver downtown' should be 'downtown Vancouver' (correct word order), 'high res' should be 'high-rise' (correct form), 'all are the different, designed with different architect' is ungrammatical — use 'each is designed by a different architect' (correct passive structure and preposition). Suggest practicing common prepositions (in/with/by) and adjective order.

× For technical proteins are also my favorite hobby.

✓ Photography is also my favorite hobby.

The sentence uses incorrect words and form: 'For technical proteins' is nonsensical. The intended noun is 'photography'. Use the gerund/noun 'photography' to express a hobby. Practice using gerunds correctly for hobbies and activities.

× Yes, I frequently take picture, especially I love uh, night view uh, when the lighting, uh, uh, surrounding the area is lighting that time I take a picture even I love rooftop view.

✓ Yes, I frequently take pictures. I especially love the night view; when the area is lit, I take pictures. I also love rooftop views.

Plural/singular errors: 'take picture' should be 'take pictures' (plural when habitual). 'Night view' and 'rooftop view' are countable and often used in plural when general ('views'). Also wording about lighting: use 'the area is lit' instead of 'is lighting'. Practice subject-verb collocation and countable/uncountable usage.

× Uh, there's give me sense of feelings and happiness.

✓ They give me a sense of feeling and happiness.

Unclear structure: 'there's give me' is ungrammatical. Use subject 'they' (referring to views/pictures) and verb 'give' with an article: 'a sense of' + noun. Also 'sense of feelings' is redundant — 'a sense of happiness' or 'feelings of happiness'. Suggest reorganizing sentences to ensure a clear subject and verb.

× Yes, there are several building I prefer to visit more.

✓ Yes, there are several buildings I would prefer to visit.

Count noun error: 'several building' should be 'several buildings' (plural). Also 'prefer to visit more' is awkward — use 'would prefer to visit'. Practice plural forms with quantifiers (several, many).

× Uh, the building I love to visit is Pacific Center.

✓ The building I would like to visit is Pacific Centre.

Preposition issue minor: 'I love to visit' is acceptable but in this context 'I would like to visit' fits the question asking about a building you would like to visit. Also American/Canadian spelling: Pacific Centre is often 'Pacific Centre' (name). Suggest using conditional 'would like' for preferences about future visits.

× Uh, there are plenty of opportunity to do shopping and also, uh, there have a food court.

✓ There are plenty of opportunities for shopping, and there is also a food court.

Multiple errors: 'plenty of opportunity' should be 'plenty of opportunities' (plural) or 'plenty of opportunity' with different structure; 'to do shopping' is better as 'for shopping'; 'there have a food court' is incorrect — use 'there is a food court' (there be issue and subject-verb agreement). Practice the 'there is/there are' structure and correct prepositions after 'opportunity'/'opportunities'.

× I can spend some time with my parent and we have shared some, uh, delicious food.

✓ I can spend some time with my parents and we can share some delicious food.

Pronoun number error: 'my parent' should be 'my parents' if referring to both; context suggests plural. Also tense/modal: use 'we can share' or 'we have shared' depending on meaning; here future or habitual visit fits 'we can share'. Suggest checking singular/plural of family nouns and matching verb forms.

× Uh, obviously currently I live in a high risk building, but uh, it's not so well decorated.

✓ Obviously, I currently live in a high-rise building, but it's not very well decorated.

Word choice and hyphenation: 'high risk' is wrong for 'high-rise' (tall building). 'not so well decorated' is informal — 'not very well decorated' is more natural. No major third-person singular error here; primary issue is word choice and adverb. Suggest learning common compound adjectives like 'high-rise'.

× If I, uh, had a, if I have a lot of money in fuel cell, that time I wish to live in a modern high rise building.

✓ If I had a lot of money, I would wish to live in a modern high-rise building.

Conditional sentence error: mixed conditional tenses and extra words ('in fuel cell') make sentence ungrammatical. Use second conditional for unreal present: 'If I had a lot of money, I would live/would like to live in a modern high-rise building.' Suggest practicing conditional forms (if + past, would + base verb).