Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it is slightly repetitive and has some grammar issues (article use and word choice). Make a concise topic sentence, then add one specific detail using a linking word. Avoid repeating phrases like "a lot" and correct small errors (e.g., "a mega city" → "a megacity" or "a large city").

Example: Yes. I live in Shenzhen, which is a large city with many skyscrapers near my home. For example, there is a cluster of modern office towers next to a public garden that I can see from my bedroom window.

Suggestion: Your response addresses the question but is fragmented and contains grammar and vocabulary errors (e.g., "shelters A meaningful history"). Combine short fragments into coherent sentences, use linking words (e.g., "especially", "because") and provide a clear reason or example.

Example: Sometimes. I especially like photographing historic buildings because they have interesting details. For example, I often take pictures of the Forbidden City since its traditional roofs and courtyards reflect centuries of Chinese history.

Suggestion: Good content and clear intention, but the answer is slightly long-winded and has tense/number errors (e.g., "where the royal family live"). Start with a direct topic sentence, then add two specific supporting details using linking words like "because" or "for example".

Example: Yes, I would like to visit the Forbidden City because it is a famous historic landmark in Beijing. For example, I want to see the imperial palaces and the jade artifacts and paintings that illustrate life in the royal court.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but wordy and contains grammar issues (article use and awkward phrasing like "stay there quiet"). Give a direct yes/no, then one clear reason with a linking word, and try to use concise, natural phrasing.

Example: Yes, I would. I prefer living in a tall building because, for instance, higher floors are usually quieter and farther from street noise, which helps me relax after work.

× there's a lot of skyscrapers and a lot of gardens beside my home and I usually see it from my window of my bedroom.

✓ there are a lot of skyscrapers and a lot of gardens beside my home, and I usually see them from the window of my bedroom.

Use plural verb 'are' with plural noun 'skyscrapers'; 'there's' (there is) is singular. Pronoun must agree in number: use 'them' to refer to plural 'skyscrapers and gardens'. Also 'the window of my bedroom' is more natural as 'the window of my bedroom' or 'my bedroom window'. Suggestion: Use 'there are' for plural and match pronouns to plural nouns.

× Actually, it depends. On different occasions.

✓ Actually, it depends on the occasion.

The fragment 'On different occasions.' is a sentence fragment lacking a clear connection; combine with previous sentence to form a complete thought. 'It depends on the occasion' is a concise, grammatically complete expression. Suggestion: Avoid sentence fragments by connecting short related phrases.

× I usually take photos of some special buildings, especially the historic buildings like the Forbidden City and so on.

✓ I usually take photos of special buildings, especially historic ones like the Forbidden City.

Redundant wording 'some special buildings' and 'the historic buildings' is awkward. Use 'special buildings' and replace repeated noun with pronoun 'ones' or omit article. 'The Forbidden City' is an example, so 'historic ones like the Forbidden City' is concise and correct. Suggestion: Use concise adjective-noun combinations and replace repeated nouns with 'ones' when appropriate.

× It is shelters A meaningful history and it's very spectacular.

✓ It has a meaningful history and it's very spectacular.

Original mixes words incorrectly ('shelters A meaningful history' is ungrammatical). Use verb 'has' to indicate possession: 'It has a meaningful history.' Keep consistent capitalization and article use. Suggestion: Use 'has' to express that a place possesses a history.

× Yes, I would like to visit the Forbidden City and it's a very famous landmark in China, which has a lot of palaces and artifacts such as the jade or some paintings, which is spectacular and it is where the royal family live.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit the Forbidden City. It's a very famous landmark in China, with many palaces and artifacts such as jade and paintings; it is spectacular and it is where the royal family lived.

Several issues: 'which has a lot of palaces and artifacts' is acceptable but 'the jade or some paintings' is incorrect article/pronoun use; use uncountable 'jade' and plural 'paintings'. 'Which is spectacular' should refer properly; better to combine sentences. Most importantly 'the royal family live' is subject-verb disagreement with collective noun: in American English, 'the royal family lives' (singular); in British English either is possible, but here 'lived' may be needed if speaking historically. Since Forbidden City was the residence historically, past tense 'lived' is appropriate. Suggestion: Ensure noun-verb agreement for collective nouns and use correct tense (past) for historical facts; use correct articles and pluralization for nouns like 'paintings'.

× Actually, I would like to live in the tall building because it means that I can stay there quiet because I would not be disturbed by the noise beside the resident hall area.

✓ Actually, I would like to live in a tall building because I could stay there quietly and would not be disturbed by noise near the residential area.

Multiple article and word-choice issues: 'the tall building' implies a specific building; use 'a tall building' for a general preference. 'stay there quiet' -> adverb 'quietly'. 'the noise beside the resident hall area' is awkward: use 'noise near the residential area' or 'residential hall' unclear; 'residential area' is better. Also avoid repeating 'because'. Suggestion: Use 'a' for non-specific nouns, adverbs for verbs, and standard phrases like 'residential area'.