Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific detail. Fix grammar (e.g., 'there are not many tall buildings', 'my house has only two or three floors') and avoid repetition. Use linking words like 'however' or 'in fact' only if adding a contrasting point.

Example: No, there aren't many tall buildings near my home because I live in a rural area. In fact, most houses around me are only two or three storeys high, so there are no skyscrapers nearby.

Suggestion: Avoid filler words and contradictions. Begin with a direct answer, then give a clear reason and one brief exception if needed. Use precise vocabulary ('prefer', 'landscapes', 'occasionally').

Example: No, I usually don't take photos of buildings because I prefer photographing natural landscapes like forests and rivers. Occasionally I will photograph an interesting building to share with friends.

Suggestion: Make the response grammatically correct and clearer. Start with the building name as the topic sentence, then describe one or two specific attractions using linking words like 'because' or 'for example'. Correct nouns and phrasing ('carved' → 'carving' or 'sculpture').

Example: Yes, I would like to visit UH House, which is near my village, because it has an interesting feature on the terrace — a huge carved car sculpture that attracts many visitors.

Suggestion: Correct pronunciation and grammar; give a concise reason and one supporting detail. Avoid repetition and use linking words like 'because' and 'so'. Use correct terms ('live in a tall building', 'ground floor').

Example: No, I wouldn't want to live in a tall building because I'm afraid of heights. For example, I feel anxious on balconies of high-rises, so I prefer a ground-floor home where I feel safe and comfortable.

× Not much so because I live in a in a rural area and there are not much tall buildings near my house.

✓ Not much, because I live in a rural area and there are not many tall buildings near my house.

Countable noun 'buildings' requires the quantifier 'many' (not 'much'). Also remove duplicate 'in a' and add comma for clarity.

× There are buildings near My house has just two to three floors, not more than that.

✓ The buildings near my house have just two to three floors, not more than that.

Original sentence mixes two structures. Use plural verb 'have' to match plural noun 'buildings' and lowercase 'my'.

× So that is no such a skycaper buildings in my.

✓ So there are no skyscraper buildings near me.

Sentence had incorrect word order and articles. Use existential 'there are' for existence and 'skyscraper' as adjective; 'near me' is natural. Removed unnecessary 'such a' with plural noun.

× Of course not. I don't like to take photos of buildings because I like to take photos of, uh, natural scenery.

✓ Of course not. I don't like to take photos of buildings because I prefer to take photos of natural scenery.

Use 'prefer' to express general preference instead of repeating 'I like to take photos of'. This is stylistic and avoids hesitation fillers.

× So it it's nature.

✓ It's nature.

Remove redundant words 'so it' and duplicate contraction. Short clear sentence 'It's nature' is acceptable, or better 'I prefer nature.'

× So I sometime take photos of buildings for snapping and sharing to others.

✓ So I sometimes take photos of buildings to snap and share with others.

Use adverb 'sometimes' (not 'sometime') and infinitive 'to snap' for purpose. Use 'share with others' (preposition correction).

× Of course there is a building that I would like to visit is UH House, which is located near by my village and the house more main attraction is that on the terrace of the building there is a huge car carved.

✓ Of course. The building I would like to visit is UH House, which is located near my village. The house's main attraction is a huge carved car on the terrace of the building.

Original combined multiple clauses awkwardly. Split into sentences, use 'the building I would like to visit' and 'near my village' (not 'near by'). Use possessive 'house's main attraction' and clearer noun order 'a huge carved car on the terrace.' Also 'carved' may need context but kept literal.

× No, I wouldn't want to leave in the tall patient because I'm afraid of height.

✓ No, I wouldn't want to live in a tall apartment building because I'm afraid of heights.

Incorrect verb 'leave' should be 'live'. 'Tall patient' is wrong word; likely 'tall apartment' or 'tall building'. Use 'afraid of heights' plural for the idiom.

× So when whenever I go to the balcony or terrace of a high rise I feel very anxious.

✓ Whenever I go to the balcony or terrace of a high-rise building, I feel very anxious.

Remove redundant 'so' and 'when', place 'whenever' at start, add hyphen in 'high-rise' and comma before main clause for clarity.

× So I prefer to live in a ground floor where I feel very comfortable and safe.

✓ So I prefer to live on the ground floor where I feel very comfortable and safe.

Use preposition 'on' with 'ground floor' (not 'in'), and no article 'a' before 'ground floor' when referring to the specific floor in a building.