Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve clarity, grammar and organization. Start with a clear topic sentence answering directly, then give one specific supporting detail using linking words. Avoid filler sounds and repetitions. Correct key grammar: use past/present forms and count nouns (e.g. "storey buildings").

Example: No, there are no tall buildings near my home. I live in a village where most houses are only two or three storeys, so the nearest tall buildings are in the nearby city about 20 minutes away.

Suggestion: Be direct and concise. Begin with a clear statement about your habit, then give one or two specific reasons and an example. Use correct tense and article usage, and avoid repeating the same idea. Use linking words like "when" or "because".

Example: I don't usually photograph buildings, but when I see an unusually beautiful or historic building I often take a photo because I appreciate its design. For example, I once photographed a colonial-era courthouse because of its ornate façade.

Suggestion: Provide a concise topic sentence and add one or two specific reasons with linking words. Correct article usage ("the Taj Mahal") and reduce hesitation. Mention a personal reaction or expectation to add depth.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit the Taj Mahal because it is an outstanding example of Mughal architecture. I want to see its detailed marble inlay and experience the atmosphere that inspired its famous romantic history.

Suggestion: Answer directly and give two clear, well-linked reasons with correct grammar. Avoid filler words and unclear phrases. Use comparisons correctly ("more spacious" vs "less spacious") and state personal preference succinctly.

Example: No, I wouldn't like to live in a tall building because apartments often feel less spacious and quieter than houses. I prefer a house because it offers a garden and more privacy, which suits my lifestyle.

× If I belong to village area, so there is, there are not any kind of tall building near my hometown, but uh, I can say there are two or three Storey Brig houses are there.

✓ If I belong to a village area, there are no tall buildings near my hometown, but there are two- or three-storey brick houses.

Problems: incorrect conjunction use ('If... so' is redundant) and sentence structure issues and article and plural forms. Use 'If I belong to a village area' is unnatural; better 'If I live in a village area' but to keep meaning: 'If I live in a village area, there are no tall buildings...' 'There are not any kind of tall building' should be 'there are no tall buildings' (plural) and 'two or three Storey Brig houses are there' should be 'two- or three-storey brick houses'. Also add indefinite article 'a village' and correct capitalization and word order. Suggestion: simplify clauses and use correct plural forms and adjective order.

× But apart from that, uh, however, uh, the near nearest city that have a tall building.

✓ But apart from that, the nearest city has tall buildings.

Problems: redundant connectors ('apart from that' and 'however'), incorrect word order 'near nearest' -> 'nearest', subject-verb agreement 'city that have' -> 'city has', and missing noun completion. Use 'the nearest city has tall buildings.' Remove filler words and redundant conjunctions.

× Not at all. But whenever I see the building that have a good, uh, design or historical architecture or it's look like a unique and stylist, at that time, I, uh, used to, uh, take a photos of the building.

✓ Not at all. But whenever I see a building that has a good design or historical architecture or looks unique and stylish, I take photos of it.

Problems: plural and article errors 'take a photos' -> 'take photos' or 'take a photo'; subject-verb agreement 'building that have' -> 'building that has'; incorrect pronoun 'it's look like' -> 'looks'; adjective form 'stylist' -> 'stylish'; unnecessary past habit form 'used to' when meaning present habit -> 'I take photos'. Also replace 'of the building' with pronoun 'of it' for conciseness.

× Apart from that, whenever I see some amazing building at that time, I use a background of my picture of particular building.

✓ Also, when I see an amazing building, I use it as the background of my picture.

Problems: redundant phrases 'apart from that' and 'at that time', article errors 'some amazing building' -> 'an amazing building', incorrect phrasing 'use a background of my picture of particular building' -> 'use it as the background of my picture'. Simplify the sentence and correct article and preposition usage.

× Yes, uh, I would like to visit a Taj Mahal because it is a unique design and beautiful historical architecture, Even uh, the craftsmanship and uh, particular uh, design I like to uh, see in person.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit the Taj Mahal because it has a unique design and beautiful historical architecture. I would like to see the craftsmanship and specific details in person.

Problems: article misuse 'a Taj Mahal' -> 'the Taj Mahal' (proper name with definite article), awkward noun phrases 'unique design and beautiful historical architecture' better 'has a unique design and beautiful historical architecture', run-on and repetition. 'particular design' -> 'specific details' for clarity. Use consistent tense and remove fillers.

× No, I don't like to live in a tall building because, uh, uh, it is not a more spacious and peaceful as compared to a houses.

✓ No, I don't like to live in a tall building because it is not as spacious or peaceful as a house.

Problems: comparative structure wrong 'not a more spacious and peaceful as compared to a houses' should be 'not as spacious or peaceful as a house'. Article/plural errors 'a houses' -> 'a house'. Use correct comparative 'as... as' and parallel adjectives 'spacious or peaceful'.

× I like to live in a houses because it's a comfortable most beaches and peaceful even I can, uh, I, I stay in a home so I can, uh, comfortable with.

✓ I like to live in a house because it is comfortable and peaceful; I can relax at home.

Problems: article/plural 'a houses' -> 'a house'; incorrect phrase 'comfortable most beaches' is unclear and incorrect—likely meant 'comfortable and peaceful'. Redundant and broken phrasing 'even I can... I stay in a home so I can comfortable with' should be simplified to 'I can relax at home' or 'I feel comfortable at home'. Remove repeated fillers and ensure correct adjective use and verb forms.

× I prefer that kind of environment.

✓ I prefer that kind of environment.

This sentence is grammatically correct. It appropriately expresses preference and requires no change.