Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail. Use singular/plural forms and correct articles. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'also' to connect ideas.

Example: Yes. There are many tall buildings near my home in South Korea. For example, several large apartment blocks are right in front of my house, so I can see many buildings from my windows.

Suggestion: Answer directly, use present tense consistently and give a specific reason or occasional exception. Add a linking phrase to explain further.

Example: Not really. I see buildings every day, so I rarely feel the need to photograph them. However, I sometimes take pictures of an unusual or historic building when I travel.

Suggestion: Provide a clearer topic sentence and expand with a brief reason. Use linking words like 'because' or 'but' and avoid vague phrasing.

Example: Not really. I am not especially interested in visiting buildings because I prefer natural sights. That said, I might visit a famous landmark if it had historical significance.

Suggestion: Use formal contractions and correct grammar: 'I don't want to live in a tall building.' Give balanced points with linking words and one specific reason. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Example: I don't want to live in a tall building because I find it inconvenient and uncomfortable, especially the elevators and noise. Although tall buildings often offer nice views, I prefer a quieter, low-rise neighborhood.

× Yes, in our countries in South Korea nowadays there are so many tall building and also in front of my house there is so many apartment, so I could see many buildings inside a home.

✓ Yes. In my country, South Korea, nowadays there are so many tall buildings, and also in front of my house there are many apartments, so I can see many buildings from my home.

The sentence uses incorrect singular/plural forms: 'countries' should be 'country' when referring to one nation; 'building' and 'apartment' should be plural when modified by 'so many'; 'there is so many apartment' has mismatched verb and noun number. Also 'inside a home' is awkward; 'from my home' is clearer. Suggestion: match nouns and verbs in number (singular/plural) and use consistent referents (my country vs our countries).

× Not really. In our country I can see the building every day, so I didn't feel I have to take a picture of building.

✓ Not really. In my country I see buildings every day, so I don't feel I have to take pictures of buildings.

Tense and aspect are inconsistent: 'can see' is acceptable but 'didn't feel I have to' mixes past and present incorrectly. Use present simple for habitual actions and present tense for current feelings: 'I see' and 'I don't feel'. Also pluralize 'building' when general ('buildings') and 'pictures' for count noun. Suggestion: keep present tense for habitual and current opinions and match plural forms when speaking generally.

× I don't have any interest of a building, so not really.

✓ I don't have any interest in buildings, so not really.

The correct preposition after 'interest' is 'in', not 'of'. Also use plural 'buildings' when speaking generally. Suggestion: use 'interested in' or 'have an interest in' + noun; consider 'I'm not interested in buildings.'

× I don't wanna living a tall building. It's really inconvenience and uncomfortable. There is advantage we can see. Uh. Landscape, but I don't like.

✓ I don't want to live in a tall building. It's really inconvenient and uncomfortable. One advantage is that we can see the landscape, but I don't like it.

Several issues: 'wanna living' is incorrect; after 'want' use the base verb 'to live' (infinitive without 'to' in colloquial 'want to' construction: 'want to live' or 'want to' + base). Preposition 'in' is needed for residing 'in a building'. 'Inconvenience' is a noun; the adjective is 'inconvenient'. 'There is advantage we can see' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'One advantage is that we can see the landscape'. Add 'it' after 'don't like' for clarity. Suggestion: use correct verb forms (want to + base verb), choose correct adjective forms, include necessary prepositions, and form complete clauses.