Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail. Avoid repetition and incorrect word forms (e.g., "cities city center" and "I feel very interesting"). Use linking words like "because" or "so" correctly.

Example: Yes. There is a very tall building near my home because the city center is close to my hometown. It has a glass façade and dramatic lighting at night, so I often notice it when I visit the market.

Suggestion: Organize your answer with one clear statement and one or two specific reasons. Correct noun forms and verb tenses ("buildings", "well-designed"). Reduce fillers like "uh" and avoid repeating adjectives. Use a linking word such as "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

Example: Yes, I often photograph buildings because I appreciate their architecture. For example, I like to capture tall, well-designed façades and interesting shapes, especially during sunset when the light highlights details.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer then one specific detail about the building and a reason for visiting. Fix grammar (e.g., "built over five years ago", "well designed by an architect") and avoid extra words. Use linking phrases like "because" or "so" to explain your interest.

Example: Yes. I would like to visit a recently built concert hall near my hometown because it was completed about five years ago and has striking modern architecture. I want to see the interior and the auditorium design because articles say the acoustics are excellent.

Suggestion: Answer directly and clearly, then give one or two concrete reasons. Correct mistakes ("definitely I would live", "living standard", "the view at night"). Avoid comparing unrelated concepts (hotel vs town) without explanation. Use linking words like "because" and "so" for coherence.

Example: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because the views at night are beautiful and the facilities tend to be modern. For instance, a high-rise apartment might offer a balcony with city lights and better security, which appeals to me.

× Yes, there is a tall building near my home because cities city center is nearest to my hometown and there's a very beautiful and very tall building out there which I saw and I feel very interesting and fascinating.

✓ Yes, there are tall buildings near my home because the city center nearest to my hometown has a very beautiful and very tall building that I saw and found very interesting and fascinating.

Errors: 'there is a tall building' vs context implies multiple buildings and later 'cities city center' is incorrect. Use 'there are' for plural; 'city center' needs article 'the'; 'which I saw and I feel very interesting' is incorrect: use 'that I saw and found very interesting' because 'feel interesting' is unnatural here and 'found' fits past observation. Suggestions: determine singular/plural, use 'there are' for plural, add 'the' before 'city center', replace redundant words and use appropriate verbs (saw/found).

× Yes, I often take photos of building because it is very beautiful and uh, some buildings are very tall and uh, very design make good, make very beautiful in a very beautiful design and I uh, whenever I see I uh, took a photo.

✓ Yes, I often take photos of buildings because they are very beautiful. Some buildings are very tall and have beautiful designs, and whenever I see one I take a photo.

Errors: 'photos of building' should be 'photos of buildings' (plural). 'it is very beautiful' should be 'they are very beautiful' to match plural. 'very design make good' is ungrammatical: use 'have beautiful designs'. Tense inconsistency: 'whenever I see I took a photo' should be present habitual: 'whenever I see one I take a photo'. Suggestions: match noun number, use consistent present tense for habits, simplify redundant phrases.

× Yes, there is a building which I would like to visit near my hometown, very beautiful building which is built over five years ago when but I never went there.

✓ Yes, there is a building near my hometown that I would like to visit. It was built over five years ago, but I have never been there.

Errors: run-on sentence and misuse of 'there is' vs punctuation. 'which is built over five years ago' mixes present passive with a past time marker; use past passive 'was built' or present perfect 'has been built' depending on meaning. 'I never went there' should be present perfect 'I have never been there' to indicate experience up to now. Suggestions: split into two sentences, use 'that' or 'which' appropriately, use 'was built' with past time reference and 'have never been' for life experience.

× It is a very tall and very well designed by the artist and whenever I get a chance, I definitely go there to.

✓ It is very tall and was very well designed by an architect, and whenever I get a chance I will definitely go there.

Errors: 'very well designed by the artist' needs passive verb 'was designed' and 'artist' is better as 'architect' for buildings. 'I definitely go there to' is incomplete and awkward for future intention; use 'I will definitely go there'. Suggestions: use correct passive form 'was designed', choose accurate nouns, and use future tense/modal for intention.

× Yes, if I get a chance to live in a tall building, definitely I leave because the living standard of hotel building is also different, because in the night time, the view of hotel building is very beautiful and different has compared to the town uh, and I uh, captured the night.

✓ Yes, if I get a chance to live in a tall building, I would definitely live there because the standard of living in such buildings is different. At night the view from a tall building is very beautiful compared to the town, and I would capture the night views.

Errors: 'definitely I leave' misuses 'leave' instead of 'live' and wrong word order. Use conditional/modal 'would' to express hypothetical. 'living standard of hotel building' is unclear; use 'standard of living in such buildings'. 'different has compared' is ungrammatical; use 'different compared to' or 'compared with'. 'I captured the night' mixes tenses; use conditional 'I would capture the night views' for hypothetical. Suggestions: use correct verbs ('live' not 'leave'), proper word order, appropriate modals for hypothetical situations, and clearer noun phrases.