Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct and clear: start with a concise topic sentence that answers the question, avoid irrelevant or inaccurate words (e.g. "stupid" about a city) and correct basic grammar (word order, articles, plurals). Add one or two specific supporting details using linking words (e.g. "because", "so"). Keep it to max 3–4 short sentences.

Example: No, there are not many tall buildings near my home. I live in the outskirts of Ankara, so the area is mostly low-rise houses and farms. Because it's on the city’s edge, the skyline is quite open and peaceful.

Suggestion: Answer directly then give a brief reason and an example. Avoid filler words and vague phrases like "probabilities". Use linking words (e.g. "but", "however") to contrast ideas. Keep sentences short and natural.

Example: Sometimes I take photos of buildings, especially when I first visit a place. For example, I photographed several unusual facades when I toured the old town because I liked their shapes and colors, but I don't take photos of buildings every day.

Suggestion: Start with a clear statement naming a specific building you want to visit. Avoid confusing or unclear phrases. Give a concrete reason and one detail about what you would do or see, using linking words (e.g. "because", "so that"). Keep sentences simple and coherent.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit the Rockefeller Center in New York because it has an observation deck with great views over Central Park. I would stand on the top floor to see the park and the city skyline, and maybe take some photos from there.

Suggestion: Give a clear preference first (yes/no/maybe), then explain with specific reasons and a short example. Correct common mistakes ("waiting" → "building", "up too high"). Use linking words like "but" or "however" to show contrast and keep sentences concise.

Example: I don't mind living in a tall building, but it's not essential for me. However, I would enjoy it if the apartment had a high floor and a good view, because a nice landscape makes the flat feel more spacious and relaxing.

× Not too much actually. I'm living in a bit stupid capital Ankara, Turkey, but I my home is countryside of the city center, so near my home there is not too much sole buildings.

✓ Not too many actually. I live in the rather dull capital, Ankara, Turkey, but my home is in the countryside of the city center, so there are not many tall buildings near my home.

Errors: incorrect use of continuous present 'I'm living' for a permanent situation (use simple present 'I live'); wrong quantifier 'Not too much' should be 'Not too many' for countable plural 'buildings'; missing or misplaced words 'I my home' corrected to 'my home is'; incorrect adjective 'stupid' changed to 'dull' for appropriateness; 'sole buildings' likely intended 'tall buildings'. Suggestion: use simple present for permanent states, match quantifiers to countable/uncountable nouns, keep word order 'my home is in...', and choose correct adjectives and nouns.

× Naturally, when I first came to the answer, uh, I saw the probabilities and uh, I was excited to see them and I took some photos of them, but other than that, not really.

✓ Naturally, when I first arrived here, I saw the buildings and I was excited to see them, so I took some photos, but other than that, not really.

Errors: 'came to the answer' is incorrect phrasing; 'came' should be 'arrived' and not followed by 'to the answer'; 'saw the probabilities' is incorrect word choice and noun; unnecessary repeated 'uh'. Use past simple 'arrived', 'saw', 'took' for completed actions. Suggestion: use clear verbs for arrival and seeing, keep tense consistent (past simple) for past events, and avoid fillers.

× There's not an exact failing that I want to visit at its scenery, its scenery.

✓ There isn't a specific building that I want to visit because of its scenery.

Errors: awkward phrase 'exact failing' and repetition 'its scenery, its scenery' cause sentence structure problems. Use 'specific building' and a clear reason clause 'because of its scenery'. Suggestion: choose precise nouns and avoid repetition; structure reasons with 'because' or 'for'.

× I can see the Central Park in New York than I would want to see that building and stand on our floor that I can see this whole park and I know that's the basket is.

✓ I can see Central Park in New York, so I would like to visit a building where I could stand on a high floor and see the whole park.

Errors: wrong preposition 'the Central Park' should be 'Central Park' (no definite article for the park name); 'than' is wrong connector, use 'so' or 'therefore'; 'stand on our floor' should be 'stand on a high floor'; 'that's the basket is' is unintelligible and removed. Suggestion: use correct article usage for proper nouns, use logical connectors, and choose correct prepositions for location ('on a floor'). Keep sentences concise and coherent.

× I'm not looking for a tall waiting. It doesn't really matter to me that if I have to I would love to because if the floor is up to high and you just if there's a good landscape then I would like to live in a building.

✓ I'm not looking for a tall building. It doesn't really matter to me, but if I had to choose, I would like one if the views were good and the floor wasn't too high.

Errors: 'tall waiting' is incorrect word choice; should be 'tall building'; tense and conditional issues: use conditional 'if I had to choose, I would like' for hypothetical; 'up to high' is incorrect — use 'too high' or 'not too high'; 'landscape' better as 'views'. Suggestion: use correct nouns, form conditional sentences with past-tense in the if-clause for hypothetical situations, and use natural collocations like 'good views' or 'nice views'.