Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence that answers the question, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid fillers (umm, uh) and repetitive phrases. Use linking words (for example, however) if needed and keep the answer to 2–3 sentences.

Example: Yes — there are many tall buildings near my home. For example, my city centre has several high-rise office towers and modern apartment blocks, especially along the main avenue, so tall buildings are common in my neighbourhood.

Suggestion: Answer directly (Yes/No) and give a clear reason with one specific example. Correct grammar (I don't take photos) and avoid repetition. Use a linking phrase (because, for example) to connect your reason.

Example: Not usually — I only photograph buildings that catch my eye. For example, I took pictures of a uniquely designed library last year because of its curved glass façade and colourful interior.

Suggestion: Start with a clear statement naming a specific building or city, then give 1–2 reasons why you want to visit with a short example. Avoid vague phrases and filler words. Use linking words like because or for example.

Example: Yes — I would love to visit the Burj Khalifa in Dubai because it is the tallest building in the world and has impressive observation decks. For example, I want to see the city views from the top and experience its modern architecture in person.

Suggestion: Give a clear yes or no, then explain briefly with 1–2 specific reasons. Improve grammar (I live with my family, I prefer to buy my own private house) and avoid contradicting phrases. Use linking words like however or although if showing mixed feelings.

Example: I'm not sure — I prefer a private house to an apartment. Although I currently live in a low-rise apartment with my family and appreciate the convenience, in the future I would like to buy my own house for more space and privacy.

× That's a really good question.

✓ That's a really good question.

No grammatical error; sentence is correct. Kept for completeness.

× I have to think about that because, umm, what we are talking about, how long, how tall buildings we are talking about.

✓ I have to think about that because I'm not sure what we are talking about: how long or how tall the buildings are.

Original sentence has disordered clauses and incorrect word order. Reorder clauses to form a clear indirect question ('what we are talking about' → 'what we are talking about: how long or how tall the buildings are') and use correct adjective order with the noun ('the buildings'). Use contraction 'I'm' for natural speech.

× Because in my country, in my city, we have lots of tall buildings.

✓ Because in my country, in my city, we have a lot of tall buildings.

'Lots of' is informal but not wrong; changed to 'a lot of' for smoother spoken English. Tense is present and appropriate; article usage adjusted for naturalness.

× But to be honest, I'm really not sure.

✓ But to be honest, I'm not really sure.

Adverb placement: 'really' is more natural before 'sure' rather than before 'not' in this context. Meaning unchanged.

× But I will say, yeah, we have a lot of tall buildings.

✓ But I would say, yes, we have a lot of tall buildings.

'Would say' is more idiomatic for expressing an opinion; replace 'yeah' with 'yes' for slightly more formal register. Present tense 'we have' is correct.

× And I'm not sure I I'm do not take photos of billing if it's not interesting, if it's not influence me like take my attraction.

✓ I'm not sure. I don't take photos of buildings if they're not interesting or don't catch my attention.

Multiple problems: repeated fillers and word-order errors. Correct subject-verb agreement ('I don't take'), correct noun ('buildings'), correct relative clause with they're for plural, and use idiomatic phrase 'catch my attention' rather than 'take my attraction'.

× Like if it's not specifically designed then I'm not taking a photo of picture.

✓ If it's not specially designed, then I won't take a picture of it.

'Specifically designed' is awkward here; 'specially designed' or simply 'not designed' is better. Use future/modal to express habit in conditional: 'I won't take' or present simple 'I don't take' is also acceptable. Remove redundant 'photo of picture' and use 'take a picture of it'.

× I am not sure about this question, but yeah, I really want to visit uh and see another countries buildings types tiles yeah, I would love to see it.

✓ I'm not sure about this question, but I really want to visit other countries and see their building styles and tiles; I would love that.

Several errors: 'another countries' should be 'other countries'; possessive pronoun required 'their'; 'building styles' is clearer than 'buildings types'; 'tiles' kept but better integrated. Simplify filler words and use consistent pronouns.

× So yeah, like for example, in maybe a Dubai, there is a really interesting building.

✓ So, for example, in Dubai there is a really interesting building.

Remove unnecessary 'maybe' and article 'a' before 'Dubai' (proper noun of a city doesn't take 'a'). 'In Dubai' is correct preposition usage.

× I am not sure about that because tall buildings are apartments.

✓ I'm not sure about that because tall buildings are often apartments.

Generalization benefits from an adverb like 'often' to indicate frequency. Contraction 'I'm' for natural speech; present tense is appropriate.

× So actually now I'm lay with my family in apartment house but it's not too much tall but I don't want it but I would love to.

✓ Actually, right now I'm living with my family in an apartment building; it's not very tall, and I don't dislike it, but I would like something different.

'I'm lay' is incorrect verb form; use 'I'm living'. Use article 'an' before 'apartment building'. 'Not too much tall' should be 'not very tall'. Clarify contradictory 'I don't want it but I would love to' to a coherent statement.

× But in my dream I prefer to buy own priority house so yes.

✓ But in my dream I would prefer to buy my own private house, so yes.

'Prefer to' should be followed by 'would' for hypothetical; use possessive 'my own', 'private house' instead of 'priority house'. This corrects adjective choice and word order.