Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and organized. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then add one or two specific details. Avoid filler words (uh) and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas (for example, however, because).

Example: Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home because I live in a large, crowded city. For example, there are several high-rise office towers and apartment blocks within a ten-minute walk. However, I prefer smaller cities because they have shorter buildings and more green spaces, so I can see trees from my window.

Suggestion: Give a direct topic sentence then support with a specific reason and brief example. Correct grammar (use present simple consistently) and avoid repetition. Use a linking word to introduce the example or reason (because, so, for example).

Example: No, I usually don't take photos of buildings because I prefer photographing natural scenes. For example, when I go to the park I take pictures of trees and flowers rather than streets or architecture.

Suggestion: Answer clearly and add precise details: name the building, explain why you want to visit, and give a short example of what you expect to see. Use linking words (for instance, because, such as) and avoid vague phrases like 'that much'.

Example: Yes, there is a famous tower in Jeddah called the [name of tower]. I would like to visit it because it looks stunning from the outside and I want to see the interior design. For instance, I heard there are several rooftop restaurants and observation decks, so I would go there to enjoy the view and try a local restaurant.

Suggestion: Provide a clear topic sentence and support with a concise reason and a personal detail. Remove fillers and correct small grammar points (e.g., 'phobia of heights'). Use a linking word to add the personal reason (because, as').

Example: No, I don't want to live in a tall building because I prefer a small apartment in a quieter city. I also have a fear of heights, so a low-rise building with a view of trees would be much more comfortable for me.

× I'm living in a big and crowded city, so it means nearby my home are a lot of tall buildings, sky, uh, creepers, and high, uh, rise offices.

✓ I live in a big, crowded city, so there are a lot of tall buildings, sky scrapers, and high-rise offices near my home.

Use simple present 'I live' for general facts rather than 'I'm living'. The phrase 'there are' is the correct 'there be' construction to state existence. Word order should place 'near my home' after the noun phrase. Also 'skyscrapers' and 'high-rise' are the correct forms. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× I love more small cities because the buildings are, uh, shorter and more green areas you can have.

✓ I prefer small cities because the buildings are shorter and there are more green areas.

Use 'prefer' rather than 'love more' for comparative liking. The sentence originally mixes structures; 'there are more green areas' correctly uses the 'there be' structure with plural noun. Adjective placement: 'more green areas' is correct but needs 'there are'. Grammar problem type ID: 13

× I love to see trees from my windows, so I.

✓ I love to see trees from my windows, so I prefer living on a low floor.

The original sentence is incomplete ('so I.'), creating a sentence structure error. Complete the thought to match context; here adding 'I prefer living on a low floor' makes the sentence grammatically complete and coherent. Grammar problem type ID: 26},{