Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail. Avoid repetition and fix articles/plurals (a/an, singular/plural) and word order. Keep answer to 2–3 sentences and use a linking word if adding details.

Example: Yes. There are several tall buildings near my home. For example, I live in a 50‑storey apartment block and the surrounding buildings are of a similar height.

Suggestion: Make the answer grammatically correct and more focused. Use a clear main sentence, then give a specific reason and a brief example. Reduce fillers (uh) and avoid repeating words like 'love'. Use linking words such as 'because' or 'for example' to connect ideas.

Example: Yes, I often photograph buildings. I do this because I admire historical architecture and craftsmanship; for example, I take photos when I visit museums or old monuments to capture details of their design.

Suggestion: Answer directly and use correct names and facts. State the building clearly, give one or two concise reasons, and avoid unclear phrases. Keep sentences short and use linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

Example: Yes. I would like to visit the Burj Khalifa in Dubai because it is the tallest building in the world and I am fascinated by its design. Therefore, I am planning to visit it next year to see the views from the observation deck.

Suggestion: Give a clear opinion first, then list one specific benefit with a brief explanation. Correct grammar (subject‑verb agreement, 'photography' instead of 'picture queue'), remove fillers, and keep it within 2–3 sentences. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'also'.

Example: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it offers excellent city views. For example, I enjoy night photography, so living high up would give me many opportunities to take and post night‑time city photos.

× Yes there are tall buildings near my home because I am also living in a apartment which is a multi Storey and there are 50 floors in that that building.

✓ Yes, there are tall buildings near my home because I am also living in an apartment which is a multi-storey building and there are 50 floors in that building.

Use 'an' before a vowel sound (article error). 'apartment' requires 'an'. 'multi-storey' should be hyphenated and followed by 'building' for clarity. Remove duplicate 'that'. Add commas and correct capitalization for fluency.

× A nearby buildings are also same same height and there are also multi.

✓ Nearby buildings are also the same height and there are also many multi-storey buildings.

'A nearby buildings' mixes singular article with plural noun; remove 'a' or use singular. 'same same' is repetition; use 'the same'. 'multi' is incomplete; expand to 'multi-storey buildings' and use 'many' for countable plural.

× I love to take photos of buildings when I went to a museum or any architecture.

✓ I love to take photos of buildings when I go to a museum or see any architecture.

Tense mismatch and wrong verb forms: 'went' is past tense but sentence is general habit, so use present 'go'. 'any architecture' is awkward; use 'see any architectural site' or 'see any architecture'. Also 'love to take' is acceptable but 'when I go' fits habitual action.

× So I always love to admire our ancestors, uh, work and craft, uh, craftsmanship because they did, uh, really great architecture and a great monuments in the past.

✓ So I always love to admire our ancestors' work and craftsmanship because they created really great architecture and many great monuments in the past.

Possessive form needed: 'ancestors' work' requires an apostrophe. 'Did' is informal and vague; use 'created'. 'a great monuments' mixes singular article with plural noun; change to 'many great monuments'. Remove filler 'uh' for clarity.

× So I always love to explore it.

✓ So I always love exploring them.

Consistency and reference: 'them' refers to buildings/monuments (plural). 'love to explore it' is awkward; 'love exploring them' is natural for habitual action.

× I prefer to visit bodically fine Dubai because it is awarded as the tallest building in the world and uh, it is uh, out of seven wonders.

✓ I would prefer to visit the iconic Burj Khalifa in Dubai because it was awarded as the tallest building in the world and it is one of the Seven Wonders.

Original sentence is unclear: 'bodically fine' is incorrect adjective usage; likely meant 'iconic' or 'beautiful'. 'Dubai' is a city, not a building; specify 'Burj Khalifa'. 'awarded as the tallest' is acceptable but 'was awarded' fits past recognition. 'out of seven wonders' should be 'one of the Seven Wonders'. Capitalize proper nouns. Use 'would prefer' for polite preference.

× So it become, I am very fascinated to show that building uh, in my near future and I am planning to visit it next year.

✓ So it became famous; I am very fascinated by that building and I am planning to visit it next year.

'become' should be past 'became' if referring to past recognition. Sentence structure was fragmented; separate ideas. Use 'fascinated by' (correct preposition) and maintain present continuous for future plan 'I am planning to visit'.

× Well, I love to visit and live in a tall building because the high rise building has their own benefits.

✓ Well, I would love to visit and live in a tall building because high-rise buildings have their own benefits.

Subject-verb agreement and pronoun mismatch: 'the high rise building has their own benefits' mixes singular subject with plural pronoun; use plural 'buildings have' or singular pronoun 'its'. Also 'would love' is more natural for hypothetical desire. Hyphenate 'high-rise'.

× Uh, one is that one can experience the, the whole city view in the day as well as during the night, Uh, as I am a picture queue and uh, I love to take picture during the night time and post.

✓ One advantage is that you can experience the whole city view during the day as well as at night. As I am a picture-lover, I love to take pictures at night and post them.

Fix adverb/preposition usage: 'in the day' -> 'during the day'; 'during the night' -> 'at night'. 'picture queue' is incorrect word choice; use 'picture-lover' or 'photography enthusiast'. 'take picture' -> 'take pictures'. Add 'them' to indicate posting the photos. Remove fillers and duplicate words for clarity.