Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, use correct plural/singular forms and numbers, and add one brief supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid repetition.

Example: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home. Most houses and shops around here are only two to four storeys high, so the skyline is quite low compared with the city centre.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer then explain briefly using clearer vocabulary and linking words. Use correct phrases (e.g., “stay away from the hustle and bustle”) and one supporting reason or example.

Example: Not really. I prefer to take photos in the countryside because I like to stay away from the hustle and bustle; the relaxed scenery makes for better pictures.

Suggestion: Use a clearer, more natural phrasing and give a short reason. Correct verb choice and article use (e.g., “visit the Star Casino” and “recently renovated”). Add one specific detail about why you want to visit.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit the Star Casino because it was recently renovated. I’m curious about the new architecture and the interior design.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific reasons using linking words. Correct phrasing (e.g., “I find them a bit scary” and “I prefer low-rise apartments”). Avoid unclear number expressions.

Example: To be honest, I wouldn’t want to live in a tall building because I find high floors a bit frightening and less stable. I prefer low-rise apartments of one to five floors for comfort and easier access.

× No, there are not any tall building near my home.

✓ No, there are not any tall buildings near my home.

The noun 'building' should be plural after 'any' and the plural verb 'are'; use 'buildings' to agree with 'any' and the plural subject. Suggestion: Use plural nouns with 'any' when referring to multiple items: 'any tall buildings'.

× Most of my homes are just two to 3/4 building and also some commercial area which is just two to 3/4.

✓ Most of the houses near my home are just two to three or four storeys, and there are also some commercial areas of the same height.

Multiple issues: 'homes' is awkward here—'houses' is better; 'building' needs plural or measure word; numeric expression 'two to 3/4' is unclear. Use plural nouns for 'commercial areas' and match plural verbs. Suggestion: Spell out numbers and use plural nouns and proper terms like 'storeys' or 'floors'. (This correction addresses singular/plural and clarity.)

× Not really, I prefer aware from hustle and business city to countryside to take a photo because of the scenario is more relaxed and peaceful.

✓ Not really. I prefer to get away from the hustle and bustle of the city and go to the countryside to take photos because the scenery is more relaxed and peaceful.

Several errors: 'prefer aware from' is incorrect; use 'prefer to get away from' or 'prefer being away from'. 'hustle and business city' should be 'hustle and bustle of the city'. 'to countryside' needs 'the' and a verb 'go to the countryside'. 'scenario' should be 'scenery'. Also plural 'photos' is natural. Suggestion: Use correct prepositions ('away from', 'of the city', 'to the countryside') and correct vocabulary ('scenery', 'bustle').

× Yeah, I would want to reset the Star Casino, which is just renovated in the new building.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit the Star Casino, which has just been renovated into a new building.

'Would want to reset' is incorrect collocation: use 'would like to visit'. 'Renovated in the new building' is wrong tense and preposition. Use present perfect passive 'has just been renovated' and preposition 'into' or 'as' to indicate conversion. Suggestion: Use 'would like to' for polite desire and correct passive form for recent renovation.

× To be honest I'm not interested in living in the tall building.

✓ To be honest, I'm not interested in living in a tall building.

Article error: 'the tall building' implies a specific building; use 'a tall building' for general preference. Also missing comma after introductory phrase. Suggestion: Use 'a' for nonspecific singular nouns and punctuate introductory phrases.

× I find out a bit scary and I feel not stable.

✓ I find them a bit scary and I don't feel stable living there.

'Find out' is incorrect; use 'find' or 'find something to be'. The sentence lacks a clear subject for 'scary'—use 'them' (tall buildings) or 'living there' as reference. 'I feel not stable' is unnatural; use 'I don't feel stable' or 'I feel unsafe'. Suggestion: Use correct verb 'find' with object and negative contraction 'don't'.

× I prefer like a low apartment.

✓ I prefer a low-rise apartment.

'Prefer like' is incorrect combination; use 'prefer' directly with the noun. 'Low apartment' is unnatural; use 'low-rise apartment' or 'a low apartment building'. Suggestion: Use 'prefer' + noun and appropriate adjective 'low-rise'.

× Lowest apartment like 1 to between averaged one to five floor.

✓ A low apartment with about one to five floors.

The phrase is ungrammatical: 'Lowest apartment like 1 to between averaged one to five floor' mixes forms. Use 'about one to five floors' and 'a low apartment' or 'a building with one to five floors'. Also plural 'floors' required. Suggestion: Use clear quantifiers like 'about' and plural nouns for countable items.