Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the answer more natural and grammatically correct by using a clear topic sentence, fixing grammar (e.g. "There aren't"), and avoiding redundancy. Add a linking phrase to contrast local situation with your country and keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Example: There aren't any tall buildings near my house. However, in my home country we have the Patronus Twin Towers, which are very tall — each has 88 floors. They are famous for their striking architecture and even have a sky bridge connecting them.

Suggestion: Be concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a specific reason and an example. Fix awkward phrasing ("the they are like the they are like") and use linking words such as "because" or "so" to show purpose.

Example: Yes, I often photograph buildings, especially historic sites. I do this because they feel like time machines, and taking photos lets me remember the visit later and study architectural details I might otherwise forget.

Suggestion: Avoid repeating phrases like "I would like to" and "amazed/ amazing." Give one clear reason and a specific detail about what interests you. Use linking words such as "because" to join ideas, and keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Example: I would like to visit Angkor Wat in Cambodia because I studied it in secondary school and was fascinated by its unique temple architecture. I especially want to see the bas-reliefs and the vast temple complex in person.

Suggestion: Organize the response with one clear reason and a specific example. Correct grammatical errors ("a low-rise house", "escape routes feel"). Use linking words such as "for example" or "therefore" appropriately and keep it concise.

Example: No, I wouldn't want to live in a tall building because I'm afraid of heights and would feel unsafe so high up. For example, in a fire I worry I couldn't reach the ground quickly, so I prefer a low-rise house with easier escape routes.

× They aren't any tall buildings nearby my house but in our home country we have Patronus Twin tower which are very tall.

✓ There aren't any tall buildings near my house, but in our home country we have the Patronus Twin Towers, which are very tall.

Use 'There aren't any' with 'near' instead of 'nearby' preceding a noun phrase; include the definite article 'the' for a specific named landmark and pluralize 'Towers' to match two towers; add commas and 'which' clause punctuation for clarity.

× Each tower has 88 floors and it is famous for its striking architecture and there is a sky bridge to connect them.

✓ Each tower has 88 floors and they are famous for their striking architecture, and there is a sky bridge connecting them.

Subject 'Each tower' pairs with singular 'has' (correct) but the phrase refers to both towers being famous, so use plural 'they are' or rephrase. 'to connect them' is better as 'connecting them' for concise participle use.

× Yes, I often take photos of the buildings, especially those ancient historic sites.

✓ Yes, I often take photos of buildings, especially ancient historic sites.

Remove 'the' before plural general noun 'buildings' and avoid placing 'the' before 'ancient historic sites' when speaking generally; order 'ancient historic' is acceptable but could be 'historic ancient' depending on emphasis.

× I enjoy them because they are like the they are like time machines to me and taking photos of them allows me to refer back to it later on and remember the visit I have there.

✓ I enjoy them because they are like time machines to me, and taking photos allows me to refer back to them later and remember my visit.

Remove repeated phrase 'they are like'; use 'them' consistently for plural 'photos/sites'; change 'it' to 'them'; use 'my visit' instead of 'the visit I have there' for natural English and concise sentence structure.

× I learned about this place in my secondary historic class and I would like to visit this place because I was amazed by the amazing architecture and I would like to see it myself personally.

✓ I learned about this place in my secondary history class, and I would like to visit because I was amazed by its architecture and want to see it for myself.

Use 'history class' not 'historic class'; avoid repeating 'amazed' and 'amazing' by using 'was amazed by its architecture'; 'see it for myself' is more natural than 'see it myself personally'.

× I wouldn't like to live in a tall building because I'm afraid of heights and feel unsafe up so high.

✓ I wouldn't like to live in a tall building because I'm afraid of heights and feel unsafe so high up.

Move 'up' after 'high' for natural adverb placement; 'wouldn't like' is acceptable for hypothetical preference.

× For example, in case of emergency like fire, I think I wouldn't be able to get down to safe ground in time.

✓ For example, in case of an emergency like a fire, I don't think I would be able to get down to safe ground in time.

Add articles 'an' and 'a'; change 'I think I wouldn't' to 'I don't think I would' for more natural phrasing and correct conditional/modal sequencing.

× Therefore I prefer low rise house where escape route feel more manageable.

✓ Therefore, I prefer a low-rise house where escape routes feel more manageable.

Use the article 'a' before singular noun 'low-rise house'; hyphenate 'low-rise'; pluralize 'escape routes' to match general meaning; use 'feel' with plural subject 'routes'.'