Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise, use correct tense and grammar, and give one clear reason with a linking word. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add a specific supporting detail. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases like “feel.”

Example: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home because I live in a rural area. For example, my village mainly has single‑storey houses and small farms, which I prefer because they feel peaceful and quiet.

Suggestion: Provide a clear topic sentence and one or two specific examples using linking words (e.g., for example, because). Replace informal words like “click” and filler “yeah.”

Example: Not really. I prefer photographing nature because I enjoy landscapes and sunsets; for example, I often take pictures of the nearby forest and river at dusk.

Suggestion: Directly answer the question and name a specific building. Use correct vocabulary and grammar, avoid hesitations, and give a short reason why you want to visit. Keep it to two or three sentences.

Example: Yes. I would like to visit the Burj Khalifa in Dubai because it is the tallest building in the world. I am curious about its observation deck and the city views from the top.

Suggestion: Reply directly, use correct grammar and concise structure. Give one clear reason with a specific supporting detail using linking words (e.g., because, therefore). Avoid vague phrases like “sunset screen.”

Example: No, I wouldn’t want to live in a tall building because I prefer rural life; therefore I enjoy walking around my village and watching sunsets over the fields, which I find relaxing.

× Not at all because I lived in rural areas so there wasn't a tall building, but I like to live in a small house which makes me happy and feel.

✓ Not at all, because I lived in a rural area, so there weren't any tall buildings; I liked living in a small house which made me happy.

The student mixes past and present inconsistently. Use past tense consistently when referring to past residence: 'lived' (past), 'weren't' (past plural), 'liked' and 'made' (past). Also 'rural areas' should be 'a rural area' or 'rural areas' with appropriate verbs; 'any' is needed with plural after negation. Improve coherence by keeping tense consistent and using appropriate quantifiers.

× Generally I like to click pictures of nature, like green forest, landscapes, sunsets, but I don't like to take a picture of buildings. Yeah.

✓ Generally I like taking pictures of nature, such as green forests, landscapes, and sunsets, but I don't like taking pictures of buildings.

After 'like' use the -ing form (gerund) for activities: 'like taking' rather than 'like to click' (although 'like to take' is possible). Also pluralize 'forest' to 'forests' and keep parallel structure ('taking pictures ... but I don't like taking pictures ...'). Use 'such as' for examples and omit filler 'Yeah' in formal answers.

× To be honest, I don't know, I don't know about the building but uh, I listen. Bush qualify in Dubai was so tallest building. So I like to prefer visit and explore or new country.

✓ To be honest, I don't know much about buildings, but I heard that the Burj Khalifa in Dubai is the tallest building, so I would like to visit and explore a new country.

Multiple issues: unclear phrases ('I listen', 'Bush qualify') and incorrect word order. Replace with 'I heard' for reported information. Correct the building name to 'Burj Khalifa' and use present tense 'is' for a fact. Use modal 'would like to' to express desire and correct noun phrases ('a new country'). This fixes sentence clarity and grammatical correctness.

× No because I live in rural areas in there. In this place the most of the buildings are short and I feel enjoy to live there and explore my village to see natural landscape sunset screen.

✓ No, because I live in a rural area. In this place most buildings are short, and I enjoy living here and exploring my village to see the natural landscapes and sunsets.

Use consistent present tense for current situation: 'live', 'are', 'enjoy'. Correct article usage: 'a rural area' and remove unnecessary preposition 'in there'. 'The most of the buildings' should be 'most buildings'. Use gerund 'enjoy living' rather than 'feel enjoy'. Fix noun forms to plural 'landscapes and sunsets' and remove 'screen', which is unclear.