Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make your answer clearer and more grammatical: start with a direct topic sentence, avoid repetitions and filler words, and use one or two specific supporting details linked logically. Use simple linking words (for example, 'because' or 'so') to connect ideas.

Example: Yes. There are several tall buildings near my home. I sometimes go to the rooftop terrace to enjoy the sea view because the high position gives a wide panorama of the coast and the streets below. The view looks very beautiful, especially at sunset.

Suggestion: Be direct and concise: answer the question first, then give one clear reason with an example. Avoid unclear phrasing ('I left to') and repeat words. Use relevant vocabulary like 'architecture', 'skyscrapers', and 'design'.

Example: Yes, I often take photos of buildings. For example, when I visited Dubai I photographed the skyscrapers because I was fascinated by their modern architecture and the way the designers used glass and steel.

Suggestion: Provide a clear topic sentence and a specific reason. Avoid repetition and grammatical errors. Mention what exactly you want to see or do there to make the answer more informative.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit the Burj Khalifa because it is the tallest building in the world. I want to see the city from the observation deck and learn about the building's engineering and design, especially how the structure supports so many floors.

Suggestion: Answer directly and give one or two concrete reasons with coherent linking words. Reduce repetition and improve grammar (e.g. 'I would like' instead of 'I want'). Mention practical aspects if possible (noise, convenience) to add depth.

Example: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because the balconies offer great city and sea views. I also enjoy the privacy and fresh air at higher floors, although I would consider noise and convenience like lifts before deciding.

× Yeah, there is some uh, tall, tall buildings near my home.

✓ Yeah, there are some tall buildings near my home.

The subject 'buildings' is plural, so the verb must be 'are' not 'is'. Use 'some' with plural nouns. Suggestion: match plural subjects with plural verbs (there are + plural noun).

× I go there, I enjoy the sea from the sky.

✓ I go there and enjoy the sea view from above.

The original mixes simple present but repeats subjects awkwardly and uses 'from the sky' which is unnatural for viewing. Use concise present-tense coordination 'I go there and enjoy...' and 'sea view from above' for clarity. Maintain present tense for habitual action.

× When I was I was in a terrace, so we can see the refresher is coming from up and when when we looked down, we see the scenario roads.

✓ When I was on a terrace, we could see the breeze coming from above, and when we looked down, we saw the roads and the scenery.

Multiple issues: wrong preposition 'in a terrace' -> 'on a terrace'; tense inconsistency: 'was' (past) should pair with 'could' and 'saw' (past) not 'can/see'; 'refresher' is incorrect word choice for breeze; word order and nouns: 'scenario roads' -> 'roads and the scenery'. Suggestion: keep past tense consistently and use correct prepositions and vocabulary.

× It's look very beautiful from from the taller buildings.

✓ It looks very beautiful from the taller buildings.

Subject-verb agreement and adverb placement: 'It's look' is incorrect; should be 'It looks'. Also remove duplicated 'from'. Use present simple 'looks' if describing a general impression.

× Yeah, I left to take the photos of buildings like Dubai.

✓ Yeah, I went to take photos of buildings in Dubai.

'Left' is incorrect here; use 'went' for going somewhere. Preposition 'of buildings like Dubai' is wrong: use 'buildings in Dubai'. Also 'take the photos' -> 'take photos' for general action. Maintain past tense consistently.

× I left to see the building in Dubai that how they make the big, big taller buildings there in infrastructure and uh yeah, skyscapers, which look very, very beautiful to see the buildings uh and take your photos.

✓ I went to see the buildings in Dubai to admire how they construct such tall structures and skyscrapers; they look very beautiful and I like taking photos of them.

Awkward structure, wrong verb 'left', incorrect relative clause 'that how they make' -> 'to admire how they construct', repetition 'big, big taller', wrong noun 'skyscapers' -> 'skyscrapers', and unclear 'take your photos' -> 'taking photos of them'. Suggestion: simplify sentences, use infinitive 'to' to express purpose, correct spelling and word order.

× Yes, I like to visit, uh, when Burj Khalifa has called the tallest building in the world and the interest infrastructure, how they make it.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit the Burj Khalifa, which is called the tallest building in the world; I'm interested in its engineering and how it was built.

Incorrect tense and structure: 'has called' is wrong; use passive 'is called'. 'Interest infrastructure' is incorrect phrase; use 'interested in its engineering'. Also 'how they make it' should be past or passive: 'how it was built'. Suggestion: use relative clause 'which is called' and correct noun phrases.

× I want to see, uh, from the sky, how we see from the sky, from the tallest building.

✓ I want to see the view from the sky from the tallest building.

Redundant and repetitive phrasing 'from the sky, how we see from the sky'. Simplify to 'see the view from the tallest building'. Maintain present tense 'want to see' for desire.

× So yeah, I would like to visit the Burj Khalifa.

✓ So yeah, I would like to visit the Burj Khalifa.

This sentence is grammatically correct. Keep 'would like to' to express a polite desire.

× Yeah, I want to live in a tall, tall building because when we come to the balcony, we can see the Street View, the the city view.

✓ Yeah, I want to live in a tall building because when we go out onto the balcony, we can see the street view and the city skyline.

Avoid repetition 'tall, tall'. Use 'go out onto the balcony' rather than 'come to the balcony'. Capitalization 'Street View' unnecessary; use 'street view' and 'city skyline' for natural phrasing. Maintain present-tense desire 'want to live'.

× That's I like, I like so much.

✓ I like that very much.

Original repeats subject awkwardly and uses wrong word order. Use 'I like that very much' to express strong preference concisely.

× If there is a there is a sea in the front of my door, that tall building.

✓ If there is a sea in front of the door of that tall building.

Redundant 'there is a there is a' removed. Preposition order corrected to 'in front of the door of that tall building' or 'in front of the tall building'. Ensure article 'a sea' is acceptable; context may prefer 'the sea' if specific.

× So it's very good for me to see the sea from the sky.

✓ So it would be great for me to see the sea from above.

'It's very good for me' is awkward; use 'it would be great for me' to express preference and hypothetical benefit. 'from the sky' -> 'from above' sounds more natural. Maintain tense consistent with desire/hypothesis.