Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and coherent: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, use linking words, and provide one specific detail. Correct grammar (e.g., "more than three stories" → "over three stories"). Aim for 2–3 sentences. Example improvements: use 'because' to explain why tall buildings are uncommon and give one concrete detail about your area.

Example: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home; most houses are no more than three stories. Because Belize has a lot of small family-run farms and businesses, the area is mostly low-rise and it’s rare to find skyscrapers.

Suggestion: Use a clear topic sentence and smoother grammar. Avoid filler words and use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to explain reasons. Be more specific about what kinds of buildings you photograph and give a brief example. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Example: Yes, I often photograph buildings, especially ones with unusual architecture. If I see a building with bold colors or unique shapes, I take a photo to capture the moment because I appreciate creative design.

Suggestion: Start with a direct answer and avoid vague or irrelevant comments. Fix grammar and factual phrasing ("one of the tallest buildings on the planet"). Give one clear reason why you want to visit and an example of what you’d do there. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit the Burj Khalifa because it is one of the tallest buildings in the world and I want to see the view from the observation deck. I would enjoy taking photos of the skyline and learning about its engineering.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence expressing your preference, then give specific reasons with correct vocabulary (e.g., 'evacuation', 'landslide', 'fire'). Use linking words like 'because' and avoid unclear phrases. Limit to 2–3 sentences and correct grammar.

Example: No, I wouldn't want to live in a very tall building because evacuation during a natural disaster like an earthquake or tsunami would be difficult. I prefer a low-rise home where escape routes and emergency access feel safer.

× There are no more tall buildings near my home.

✓ There are no tall buildings near my home.

'No more' implies a cessation from a previous amount and is unnatural here; 'no' correctly negates existence. Use 'no tall buildings' to indicate absence. Suggestion: say 'There are no tall buildings near my home.'

× More than three stories.

✓ None of them are more than three stories high.

This fragment lacks a subject and verb, making it an incomplete sentence. To correct, include a subject ('none of them') and a verb phrase ('are ... high') and unit ('stories high'). Suggestion: combine with prior sentence or make complete clause: 'They are not more than three stories high.'

× So it's really hard to see tallest building in my area.

✓ So it's really hard to see a tall building in my area.

'Tallest' is a superlative and requires a comparison group; the intended meaning is a nonspecific tall building, so use 'a tall building'. Also include article 'a'. Suggestion: use 'a tall building' or 'the tallest building' with clarification.

× Yes, I do take photo building.

✓ Yes, I do take photos of buildings.

Word forms and prepositions are incorrect. Use plural 'photos' to match general action and the preposition 'of' to link 'photos' and 'buildings'. The auxiliary 'do' is optional: 'Yes, I take photos of buildings.' Suggestion: 'I take photos of buildings.'

× nowadays people prefer to make with a different kind of architecture, so if I feel some buildings is different than I regularly see, then it goes to capture the moment.

✓ Nowadays people prefer different kinds of architecture, so if I find a building that is different from what I regularly see, I take a photo to capture the moment.

Multiple issues: 'make with' is wrong preposition and verb choice — use 'prefer different kinds of architecture.' 'Some buildings is' has subject-verb agreement and article issues; use 'a building that is' or 'buildings that are'. 'Different than' should be 'different from' or 'different to'. 'It goes to capture the moment' is ungrammatical; use 'I take a photo to capture the moment.' Suggestion: simplify to 'If I see a building that is different from what I usually see, I take a photo.'

× Yes, there are a few buildings on my mind, but for now, like, uh, I mostly like to visit Burj Khalifa.

✓ Yes, there are a few buildings in my mind, but for now I would most like to visit the Burj Khalifa.

'On my mind' is informal; 'in my mind' or 'I have in mind' is better. Use conditional/modal 'would like to' for preference. 'Burj Khalifa' usually takes the definite article 'the'. Suggestion: 'I would most like to visit the Burj Khalifa.'

× This is one of the tallest building in the planet and most of the people are going to celebrate their honeymoons.

✓ It is one of the tallest buildings on the planet, and many people go there to celebrate their honeymoons.

'One of the tallest building' needs plural 'buildings' after 'one of the'. Use preposition 'on' with 'the planet'. 'Most of the people are going to celebrate their honeymoons' is awkward; use 'many people go there to celebrate their honeymoons.' Suggestion: 'It is one of the tallest buildings on the planet, and many people go there for their honeymoons.'

× But the celebrities are so.

✓ But celebrities also visit it.

'But the celebrities are so' is incomplete and unclear. Provide a full clause explaining what about celebrities (e.g., they visit, they stay there). I inferred intended meaning that celebrities also go there. Suggestion: 'But celebrities also visit it.'

× In my opinion, I don't want to live in the tallest building because there may be high protection,

✓ In my opinion, I don't want to live in a very tall building because there may be safety issues,

'The tallest building' implies a specific single building; likely the speaker means 'a very tall building'. 'High protection' is unnatural; use 'safety issues' or 'risks'. Suggestion: 'I don't want to live in a very tall building because of potential safety issues.'

× but if we get natural disaster at that time, it's really hard to escape from there natural disasters like firing Landslow for earthquake or tsunami.

✓ but if a natural disaster occurs, it would be really hard to escape from there during events like fires, landslides, earthquakes, or tsunamis.

Original sentence has multiple problems: wrong verb forms ('get natural disaster'), missing articles ('a natural disaster'), wrong word order ('escape from there natural disasters'), and incorrect or misspelled hazard words ('firing Landslow'). Correct with 'if a natural disaster occurs' and list hazards correctly. Use conditional 'would be' to match hypothetical. Suggestion: 'But if a natural disaster occurs, it could be very difficult to escape, for example during fires, landslides, earthquakes, or tsunamis.'