Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct and clear: start with a topic sentence answering the question, then give one or two specific supporting details. Use correct grammar and simple linking words (for example, 'because', 'so', 'and'). Avoid redundancy and long pauses. Mention concrete details (how many, what type, where they are).

Example: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home. I live in Tokyo, and a high-rise apartment complex stands right across from my building, so I can see its windows and lights from my own apartment.

Suggestion: Answer the question directly, then give a clear reason with one supporting detail. Avoid contradictory statements and irrelevant information. Keep sentences short and logical, using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. If mentioning past experience, clarify how it connects to your current preference.

Example: No, I don't usually take photos of buildings because I'm not very interested in architecture. When I was a child I lived in the countryside and I preferred nature photography, so I still focus on landscapes rather than buildings.

Suggestion: Give a clear yes/no answer and then explain your reason with a specific example. If you dislike something (like stairs), explain why and offer an alternative (e.g., you prefer visiting museums or parks). Use linking words such as 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas and avoid unfinished sentences.

Example: No, there isn't a particular building I want to visit because I dislike climbing many stairs; it makes me uncomfortable. Instead, I prefer visiting museums that have elevators and interesting exhibits.

Suggestion: Begin with a clear answer, then give balanced supporting details: one reason you wouldn't want to live there and one reason you find them interesting. Use correct grammar and avoid mixing ideas without connectors. Be specific (e.g., mention elevators, views, architecture, nearby facilities).

Example: No, I wouldn't like to live in a tall building because I dislike climbing many stairs and prefer easy access to the street level. However, I am curious about tall buildings because of their modern architecture and great city views, and I enjoy visiting those that contain museums or galleries.

× If they are because I'm living in Tokyo and then scenic city, it's across from my apartment and then arrive seeing building from my windows in my apartment.

✓ I live in Tokyo, which is a scenic city; there are tall buildings across from my apartment that I can see from my windows.

Original sentence has incorrect tense ('If they are' unnecessary) and awkward structure. Use simple present 'I live' for habitual/state, use relative clause 'which is a scenic city', use 'there are' to state existence of buildings, and 'that I can see' for ability. This corrects tense and sentence structure. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× No, I don't because I don't. I'm not interested in the buildings because I don't like, uh, countryside because I live in, live in countryside in my childhood.

✓ No, I don't. I'm not interested in buildings because I didn't like the countryside when I lived there in my childhood.

The sentence mixes present and past inappropriately. Preference about past experience requires past tense 'didn't like' and 'lived' for childhood. Remove redundant 'I don't'. Clarify 'the countryside' with article 'the' and use past tense for past situation. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× No, I don't because I like, I don't like umm, steps in the buildings and then I. Move to.

✓ No, I don't, because I don't like stairs inside buildings and I prefer to move to lower floors.

Original fragmented and unclear. 'Steps in the buildings' should be 'stairs inside buildings'. 'I. Move to' is incomplete; clarify intent: 'I prefer to move to lower floors' or similar. This fixes sentence fragments and clarifies meaning. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× No I don't because as far as I mentioned I don't like steps, but I'm curious about tall buildings because I like architectures and then most of buildings has museum in the.

✓ No, I don't, because, as I mentioned, I don't like stairs, but I'm curious about tall buildings because I like architecture, and most buildings have museums in them.

Multiple errors: 'architectures' should be uncountable 'architecture'; subject-verb agreement 'most buildings has' should be 'most buildings have'; fix articles and prepositions: 'museums in them'. Also punctuation and phrasing improved for clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 2