Building— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve grammar and clarity: start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then give specific examples and a brief opinion. Use correct verb forms and singular/plural, and avoid unnecessary repetition. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and use linking words (for example, besides, also).

Example: Yes, there are some tall buildings near my home. For example, there is a large shopping complex called Lobbying Mall right beside my house, and a big bank building across the street. Besides these, there are a few residential apartment blocks. Overall, I prefer low-rise houses to these tall structures.

Suggestion: Give a direct yes/no answer then explain with specific conditions and one example. Use correct tense and simpler sentence structures. Use linking words like "when" or "if" to connect ideas and avoid hesitations (umm).

Example: Yes, I sometimes take photos of buildings, but only when I find them interesting. For example, I photograph buildings with unusual architecture or creative engineering designs. If a facade or structure looks unique, I will take a picture to remember it.

Suggestion: Answer directly and provide brief supporting details: the name, why you want to visit, and one detail about its importance. Correct grammar (singular/plural) and reduce filler words like "uh". Use linking words such as "because" or "because of" to explain reasons.

Example: Yes, I would like to visit the Dharahara, also known as the White Tower. It is a very historical monument in my country, and I want to explore its architecture and learn about its history. Because it has survived many events, I think visiting it would be fascinating.

Suggestion: Start with a clear direct answer, then give two specific reasons with linking words like "because" and "for example." Use natural phrasing (I prefer, I enjoy) and avoid repetition. Keep it concise (2–3 sentences).

Example: No, I prefer not to live in a tall building. I prefer a small house with a garden and a peaceful environment because I enjoy quiet outdoor space and a sense of privacy. For example, a small home with a backyard would let me grow plants and relax away from crowds.

× Is there are many tall buildings near my home?

✓ Are there many tall buildings near my home?

The sentence incorrectly combines 'Is' and 'are'. For asking about existence with plural 'many tall buildings' use 'Are there'. Remove 'Is' to form the correct subject-verb inversion for plural nouns.

× Such as there are large shopping complex called lobbying mall beside my homes.

✓ For example, there is a large shopping complex called Lobbying Mall beside my home.

The phrase 'Such as' is not appropriate at the sentence start here and 'there are' conflicts with the singular 'complex'. Use 'For example' and 'there is' because 'a large shopping complex' is singular. Also use singular 'my home' and capitalize the proper noun 'Lobbying Mall'.

× There is also large bank and other some residential home.

✓ There is also a large bank and some residential houses.

Missing article 'a' before 'large bank' and incorrect word order 'other some'. Use 'some' before a plural noun: 'some residential houses' or 'other residential homes'. Adjust plurality to match meaning.

× Honestly I don't like tall building.

✓ Honestly, I don't like tall buildings.

Use plural 'tall buildings' when speaking generally. Also add a comma after 'Honestly' for clarity.

× Is I used to take photos of building not for all, but if I really like the buildings, umm architectures and they if they built by differently different engineering designs and if I like really, then I used to.

✓ I used to take photos of buildings not of all, but if I really like the architecture or if they were built with different engineering designs, then I would take photos.

Remove incorrect initial 'Is'. Use plural 'buildings'. 'Used to' describes past habit; to clarify conditional preference, use 'would take photos' or 'I would'. 'Architecture' is an uncountable noun; rephrase 'built with different engineering designs'. Fix word order and redundancy ('differently different' incorrect).

× Is, uh, there is a buildings that I would like to visit.

✓ There is a building that I would like to visit.

Remove the extra 'Is' and use singular 'a building' (not 'a buildings'). The correct existential form for singular is 'There is a ...'.

× The name of this building is Dharara is known as the White Tower.

✓ The name of this building is Dharara; it is known as the White Tower.

Two independent clauses need separation and a pronoun 'it' to refer back to 'Dharara'. Use a semicolon or conjunction to join them correctly.

× This is very historical place and I really want to go and explore this building and the other.

✓ This is a very historic place and I really want to go and explore this building and others.

Use 'a' before 'very historic place' and prefer 'historic' over 'historical' for places. 'The other' is unclear; use 'others' to indicate other buildings.

× Honestly, I don't like or I don't love tall building.

✓ Honestly, I don't like tall buildings.

Avoid redundant 'don't like or don't love'. Use plural 'tall buildings' for general dislike.

× I want to live in small homes if they are very small, garden, small farm and peaceful environment.

✓ I want to live in a small home with a small garden or farm and a peaceful environment.

Match singular/plural: 'a small home' (singular) and use preposition 'with' to link features. Reorder modifiers: 'small garden or farm' and 'a peaceful environment' need articles. Remove repetition of 'small' where unnecessary.

× I love this side of place, not the crowded tall building.

✓ I love this kind of place, not crowded tall buildings.

Use 'this kind of place' or 'this side of town' for natural phrasing. Match plurality: 'tall buildings' and remove 'the' before plural in this general statement.