Travelling— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
Do you look out the window at the scenery when travelling by bus or car?
Candidate
Yes, I usually look out of the window to ensure the ceiling because watching the changing landscape happens to relax and I also sometimes take photos. I record short videos to capture amazing scenes.
Examiner
Do you take photos of the scenery outside the car window?
Candidate
I usually take photos of the landscape outside the car because the scenery changes so we could also sometimes because Chris sees and can take Roman are people because those were changes shock you more interesting.
Examiner
Do you prefer the mountains or the sea?
Candidate
I referred the mountain because the atmosphere and also the feeling, uh, of the forest make me feel tanned and relaxed and I can feel the eggs.
Evaluation
Overall
Part 1
Do you look out the window at the scenery when travelling by bus or car?
Score: 42.0Suggestion: Cải thiện: Trả lời cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp trả lời "Yes" và giải thích ngắn gọn lý do. Tránh các cụm từ không đúng ngữ pháp như "to ensure the ceiling"; dùng từ chính xác (ví dụ: "to enjoy the view" hoặc "to relax"). Sử dụng liên từ để nối ý (e.g., "because", "and", "so") nhưng không lặp ý. Giữ tối đa 3-4 câu, thêm chi tiết cụ thể (khi nào, ai cùng đi, ví dụ cảnh bạn thích).
Example: Yes, I usually look out of the window to enjoy the changing landscape because it helps me relax. Sometimes I take photos or record short videos to capture interesting scenes, especially when I travel through countryside or mountains.
Do you take photos of the scenery outside the car window?
Score: 28.0Suggestion: Cải thiện: Cần tránh câu lộn xộn, thiếu cấu trúc và những mệnh đề không liên quan. Trả lời trực tiếp, nêu lý do rõ ràng và một ví dụ cụ thể. Dùng liên từ hợp lý và câu ngắn gọn. Không thêm tên người hoặc mệnh đề không rõ nghĩa nếu không cần. Kiểm tra ngữ pháp (thì, đại từ, trật tự từ).
Example: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside because it changes quickly and looks beautiful. For example, I like to photograph fields and rivers when we pass through rural areas.
Do you prefer the mountains or the sea?
Score: 30.0Suggestion: Cải thiện: Cần trả lời trực tiếp ("I prefer the mountains"), dùng từ chính xác (không dùng "referred" hay "feel the eggs"). Giải thích lý do cụ thể: không khí, hoạt động bạn thích, cảm xúc. Dùng 2–3 câu liên kết rõ ràng bằng liên từ như "because" hoặc "so". Thêm một ví dụ ngắn về hoạt động bạn làm ở núi (đi bộ, cắm trại).
Example: I prefer the mountains because the fresh air and forest atmosphere make me feel relaxed. I also enjoy hiking and camping there, which helps me unwind after a busy week.
Grammar
× Yes, I usually look out of the window to ensure the ceiling because watching the changing landscape happens to relax and I also sometimes take photos.
✓ Yes, I usually look out of the window because watching the changing landscape helps me relax, and I also sometimes take photos.
The phrase 'happens to relax' is unnatural and uses verb form incorrectly; use 'helps me relax' to express that watching causes relaxation. 'to ensure the ceiling' is incorrect and irrelevant; likely intended 'out of the window' only. Use parallel structure for verbs ('helps me relax, and I also sometimes take photos'). Suggestions: replace 'happens to relax' with 'helps me relax' and remove 'to ensure the ceiling'. Use simple present for habitual actions.
× I record short videos to capture amazing scenes.
✓ I record short videos to capture amazing scenes.
This sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. It uses the infinitive purpose structure correctly. Suggestion: maintain present simple for habitual actions.
× I usually take photos of the landscape outside the car because the scenery changes so we could also sometimes because Chris sees and can take Roman are people because those were changes shock you more interesting.
✓ I usually take photos of the landscape outside the car because the scenery changes; sometimes Chris or Roman also takes photos when they see interesting things.
Original sentence is ungrammatical and disorganized. Problems include incoherent clause sequencing and unclear subject references. I clarified by separating ideas with a semicolon and specifying subjects 'Chris or Roman' and correct verb agreement 'takes'. Removed redundant conjunctions and nonsensical phrases. Suggestions: break complex ideas into shorter sentences, ensure each clause has a clear subject and verb, and use correct subject-verb agreement.
× I referred the mountain because the atmosphere and also the feeling, uh, of the forest make me feel tanned and relaxed and I can feel the eggs.
✓ I prefer the mountains because the atmosphere and the feeling of the forest make me feel calm and relaxed.
Multiple errors: 'referred' is wrong verb; should be 'prefer'. 'The mountain' should be plural 'the mountains' or 'the mountain' with article, depending on meaning; 'prefer the mountains' is natural. 'Make me feel tanned' is incorrect contextually; likely meant 'calm'. 'I can feel the eggs' is meaningless; removed. Pronoun and noun choices were incorrect. Suggestions: use 'prefer' for preference, choose appropriate adjectives ('calm' not 'tanned'), and remove irrelevant phrases. Ensure verb tense matches the question (present simple for preference).
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