Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Javobingiz tabiiy, lekin grammatik va aniqlik jihatidan yaxshilash kerak. Gaplarni to‘g‘ri fe’l shakllari bilan boshlang va ortiqcha so‘zlardan saqlaning. Bundan tashqari, fikrlarni bog‘lash uchun short linking words (for example, so, because, and) ishlating va supporting detail sifatida bitta aniq misol qo‘shing.

Example: To be honest, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because it helps me relax. For example, I enjoy watching trees and small villages pass by, which lets me think clearly and forget about work for a while.

Suggestion: Javobingiz aniq emas va 'depends' so‘zini noto‘g‘ri ishlatgansiz. Shartni aniqroq ifoda eting va nima uchun suratga olishni yoqtirishingizni sabab bilan tushuntiring. Ikkita qisqa gap bilan cheklang va misol keltiring.

Example: It depends on the view; I usually take photos when the scenery is especially natural or during interesting night scenes. For example, I once photographed a sunset over a field because the colours were beautiful and calming.

Suggestion: Fikr aniq, lekin grammatik xatolar va so‘z tartibini to‘g‘rilash kerak. Topic sentence bilan boshlang, keyin bitta yoki ikki qo'llab-quvvatlovchi jumla — sabab va aniq misol — qo‘shing. Linking words (because, for example) yordam beradi.

Example: Honestly, I prefer the mountains because I feel healthier and enjoy the fresh air. For example, walking in forested areas clears my mind and I find the cool, quiet atmosphere more relaxing than busy beaches.

× To be honest, I look out the window at the scenery when I traveling by bus or car.

✓ To be honest, I look out the window at the scenery when I travel by bus or car.

The error is using the present participle 'traveling' after 'when I' instead of the base form 'travel'. In English, after 'when' + subject we use the simple present to indicate habitual actions. Change 'traveling' to 'travel' to match the simple present tense and maintain subject-verb structure. Suggestion: Use the simple present after 'when' for habitual actions: 'when I travel'.

× That's helps me enjoy nature and also think about something and take a break from my mind.

✓ That helps me enjoy nature, think about things, and take a break from my thoughts.

'That's' (that is) plus verb 'helps' is incorrect because 'that' (not 'that's') is the subject; contraction 'that's' with 'is' makes grammar awkward. Also 'something' and 'my mind' are unnatural here. Use 'that helps' and plural 'things' and 'my thoughts' to be natural. Suggestion: Use 'That helps me...' without the contraction, and more natural nouns: 'think about things' and 'take a break from my thoughts'.

× Well, it depends. I take photos of the scenery outside the car window when it depends with nature or about nightlife.

✓ Well, it depends. I take photos of the scenery outside the car window when it shows nature or nightlife.

The phrase 'when it depends with' is ungrammatical. Use 'when it shows' or 'when it features' to indicate the scenery includes nature or nightlife. Also 'about nightlife' is awkward; use 'or nightlife' to list the types of scenery. Suggestion: Replace 'when it depends with nature or about nightlife' with 'when it shows nature or nightlife'.

× That's for me really calm and unusual.

✓ For me, that's really calming and unusual.

'Calm' is an adjective describing a person or thing; to describe the effect on the speaker we use the adjective 'calming'. Word order 'That's for me' is awkward; 'For me, that's...' is more natural. Suggestion: Use 'calming' to indicate the effect and start the sentence with 'For me, that's...'.

× Speaking honestly, I prefer the mountains because when you walking around the forests on in mountains you feel better and enjoy air fresh.

✓ Speaking honestly, I prefer the mountains because when you walk around the forests or in the mountains you feel better and enjoy the fresh air.

'You walking' incorrectly uses present participle; use simple present 'you walk' for general statements. 'On in mountains' is incorrect preposition use; use 'in the mountains' or 'around the mountains'. 'Enjoy air fresh' has wrong word order and missing article; use 'enjoy the fresh air'. Suggestion: Use simple present 'you walk', correct preposition 'in the mountains', and correct adjective-noun order 'the fresh air'.

× That's cool and for me it's better than the sea.

✓ That's cool, and for me it's better than the sea.

This sentence is mostly correct but needs a comma for clarity. Pronoun use 'it's' is acceptable. Maintain the contraction and add punctuation to separate clauses. Suggestion: Add a comma after 'cool' to improve readability.