Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the answer more grammatical, concise and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Reduce fillers (uh) and correct verb forms and articles (e.g., "when I travel", "the big cities", "the natural scenery").

Example: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car. For example, when I travel through big cities I enjoy watching both urban scenes and natural views, such as forests and the sea. This helps me relax and notice local differences.

Suggestion: Make the response clearer and avoid repetition. Begin with a direct answer, then give a concise reason and a specific example. Use correct nouns and collocations (e.g., "a memory", "photo album", "scenery").

Example: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside the window because they serve as memories. For instance, I usually photograph coastal views or interesting buildings so I can look back at the trip later in a photo album.

Suggestion: Provide a clear choice and justify it with specific reasons and correct grammar. Avoid unclear references like "C" or "she"; use full nouns ("the sea", "Cox's Bazar"). Limit to one or two supporting sentences and include linking words (e.g., "because", "for example").

Example: I prefer the sea because I enjoy swimming and relaxing on the beach. For example, I have visited Cox's Bazar four times; its long sandy beaches and calm atmosphere make it my favorite place to unwind.

× When I traveling the big cities along uh, so far, I always uh, look at the window and uh, see the natural view like the forest and like the sea.

✓ When I travel through big cities, I always look out the window and see natural scenery like forests and the sea.

The original sentence uses 'traveling' incorrectly where the simple present 'travel' is required to match 'When I... I always'. Also 'along' is incorrect preposition for moving through cities; use 'through'. 'Look at the window' is natural as 'look out the window'. 'The natural view' is uncountable/plural here, so 'natural scenery like forests and the sea' is clearer. Improve by using simple present for habitual actions and correct prepositions and plural nouns.

× When I traveling the big cities along uh, so far, I always uh, look at the window and uh, see the natural view like the forest and like the sea.

✓ When I travel through big cities, I always look out the window and see natural scenery like forests and the sea.

The verb 'traveling' is a present participle; the sentence needs the base form 'travel' for a habitual present statement ('When I travel... I always...'). Avoid unnecessary filler words and use correct noun plurality and preposition.

× I always uh, look at the window and uh, see the natural view like the forest and like the sea.

✓ I always look out the window and see natural scenery like forests and the sea.

Using 'the' before 'forest' is inappropriate when speaking generally about types of scenery; omit the article or pluralize ('forests'). 'Natural scenery' is a better uncountable noun. Also 'look out the window' is the idiomatic phrase.

× Yes, some of the time I like to take photos because it is a memory for me and traveling always enjoyable and take photos, uh, are are the album of the memories.

✓ Yes, sometimes I like to take photos because they are memories for me, and traveling is always enjoyable; photos become an album of memories.

This sentence contains several tense and structure errors. Use 'sometimes' instead of 'some of the time' for naturalness. 'It is a memory' is incorrect because 'photos' are plural—use 'they are memories'. 'Traveling always enjoyable' lacks the verb 'is'. 'Take photos are are the album...' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'photos become an album of memories'. Ensure subject-verb agreement and include linking verbs.

× Yes, some of the time I like to take photos because it is a memory for me and traveling always enjoyable and take photos, uh, are are the album of the memories.

✓ Yes, sometimes I like to take photos because they are memories for me, and traveling is always enjoyable; photos become an album of memories.

Mismatch between plural subject 'photos' and singular 'it is'. Also missing 'is' after 'traveling'. Correct subject-verb agreement by matching plural/singular and include necessary linking verbs.

× That's why I always take photos from the scenario.

✓ That's why I always take photos of the scenery.

'From the scenario' is incorrect: 'scenery' is the correct noun, and the preposition 'of' is used with 'take photos of'. 'Scenario' has a different meaning (a scene or situation) and is not used for landscape views.

× I would prefer C because I love C and in our PO popular CBS is Cox's Bazar and I was go there uh last four times because I love to see she is the most enjoyable tourist attraction is the another level.

✓ I would prefer C because I love it, and in our area the most popular beach is Cox's Bazar. I have gone there four times because I think it is an incredibly enjoyable tourist attraction.

Replace 'C' reference with clear pronoun 'it'. 'In our PO popular CBS' is unclear; rephrase to 'in our area the most popular beach'. Use present perfect 'I have gone' for experience up to now rather than 'I was go'. 'She' is incorrect for a place—use 'it'. 'Is the another level' is ungrammatical; 'an incredibly enjoyable tourist attraction' expresses degree correctly.

× I was go there uh last four times because I love to see she is the most enjoyable tourist attraction is the another level.

✓ I have gone there four times because I think it is an incredibly enjoyable tourist attraction.

'I was go' is not a correct past form. For repeated visits up to now, use present perfect 'I have gone'. Also correct pronoun for place ('it') and use proper comparative expression; 'the another level' is incorrect—use an adverb or adjective like 'incredibly enjoyable'.

× I would prefer C because I love C and in our PO popular CBS is Cox's Bazar and I was go there uh last four times because I love to see she is the most enjoyable tourist attraction is the another level.

✓ I would prefer C because I love it, and in our area the most popular beach is Cox's Bazar. I have gone there four times because I think it is an incredibly enjoyable tourist attraction.

Using 'C' repeatedly is unclear; refer to 'it' for clarity. 'She' is incorrectly used for a place; use 'it'. Ensure pronouns clearly refer to the correct noun and match gender/number (places use 'it').