Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Keep answers concise and directly relevant. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Use correct grammar (prepositions, articles, plural forms) and simpler vocabulary if unsure. Use linking words like “because” or “so” correctly and avoid redundancy.

Example: Yes. I often look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy watching changing landscapes. For example, I like seeing fields and small villages pass by, which helps me relax and think quietly.

Suggestion: Answer directly and avoid overly long sentences. Use correct verb forms and article usage, and give one specific example of when or what you photograph. Replace vague phrases with concrete details and link ideas with words like “because” or “for example.”

Example: Yes, I often take photos through the car window because I find mountain and river views very captivating. For example, last month I photographed a river valley at sunset; the light and reflections looked beautiful in the pictures.

Suggestion: Give a clear preference in one sentence, then support it with specific reasons and one example. Use correct subject-verb agreement and simpler, natural phrasing. Avoid repetition and awkward phrases like “having enjoying.” Use linking words such as “because” and “for example.”

Example: I prefer the seaside because I enjoy the fresh air and open views over the water. For example, I often walk along the beach at sunset to relax and breathe deeply, which helps me feel refreshed.

× I often look out of the window to look a beautiful views like a landscape while I'm travelling by a bus or either by a car because these view are such a fascinating meaning and in that way I can't control myself and I'm going to a deep in thoughts and it really.

✓ I often look out of the window to see beautiful views, like landscapes, while I'm travelling by bus or by car because these views are so fascinating that I can't control myself and I go deep in thought.

Multiple issues: incorrect prepositions and articles (look out of the window -> correct but 'to look a beautiful views' should be 'to see beautiful views'; 'by a bus'/'by a car' should be 'by bus'/'by car' because we omit articles with modes of transport); singular/plural agreement ('a beautiful views' and 'these view' -> 'beautiful views' and 'these views'); word choice and structure ('such a fascinating meaning' is incorrect; use 'so fascinating that' to show cause); verb tense/phrase ('I'm going to a deep in thoughts' -> 'I go deep in thought'); punctuation and clarity improved. Suggestion: simplify sentences, ensure subject-verb agreement, use correct prepositions with transport, and use 'see' rather than 'look' when describing perceiving views.

× Yes, I do take pictures of the beautiful view outside the window of my car because these are the views really captivating and make me go into a deep thoughts that I can't blink my eyes when I seize the landscapes like having a mountains and river such a fantastic.

✓ Yes, I do take pictures of the beautiful view outside my car window because the views are really captivating and make me go into deep thought; I can't blink my eyes when I see landscapes, such as mountains and rivers, which are so fantastic.

Problems include incorrect use of present participle and gerund forms and noun forms: 'these are the views really captivating' should be 'the views are really captivating' (word order); 'go into a deep thoughts' -> 'go into deep thought' (no plural); 'seize the landscapes' is incorrect verb choice — use 'see landscapes'; 'having a mountains and river' has article and number errors -> 'mountains and rivers' or 'a mountain and a river'; 'such a fantastic' requires noun after 'fantastic' or use 'so fantastic'. Suggestion: use correct verb forms ('see' not 'seize'), correct noun plurality, and natural collocations like 'deep thought' and 'such as' for examples.

× Being a travel free persons are usually preferred to on a seaside because I think it's a really fantastic view over the seas.

✓ People who enjoy travelling freely usually prefer the seaside because I think it's a really fantastic view over the sea.

Errors: pronoun and noun form 'Being a travel free persons' is ungrammatical; restructure to 'People who enjoy travelling freely' or 'Free travellers'; subject-verb agreement: 'persons are usually preferred to on a seaside' is incorrect — correct is 'usually prefer the seaside'; preposition and article errors: 'on a seaside' -> 'the seaside' or 'the coast'; 'seas' -> 'sea' (context singular or 'the sea' as a general noun). Suggestion: use clear subject nouns, ensure verb agrees with subject, and use correct articles with 'seaside' and 'sea'.

× There is a huge amount of water around you and you can take a deep breath while having enjoying the fresh air around you.

✓ There is a huge amount of water around you, and you can take a deep breath while enjoying the fresh air.

Errors: incorrect verb combination 'having enjoying' -> choose one: 'enjoying'; unnecessary repetition 'around you' at end is redundant after previous clause; 'a huge amount of water' is acceptable but 'a huge expanse of water' or 'there is a vast expanse of water around you' may be more natural. Suggestion: remove redundant words and use correct gerund form 'enjoying' after 'while'.