Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 発音と文法の誤り、冗長な表現を直し、意味を明確に伝える練習をしてください。具体的には「go on trouble overseas」は不自然なので「travel abroad」など正しい語句に替え、複数形・冠詞（a/the）や語順に注意しましょう。また、回答は直接的な主題文（topic sentence）を先に述べ、その後で1〜2文で具体例や理由を付け足す練習をして下さい。リンク語（because, so, and, which）を使って文のつながりを明確にするとより自然に聞こえます。

Example: Yes, I do. I often travel abroad, so I enjoy looking out of the window because I can see beautiful scenery that I can't find in Japan.

Suggestion: 不自然な前置詞や不定詞の使い方を修正し、語彙の選択（sceneries → scenery）に注意してください。答えは簡潔にし、理由を述べる場合は接続詞（because, so that）でつなぎ、目的や受け手（friends and family）について具体的に説明すると良いです。音声面では自然なリズムと適度な間を入れて話す練習をしましょう。

Example: Yes, I do. I usually bring a camera to take photos of the scenery because I want to share them with my friends and family.

Suggestion: 過去の習慣を述べる際の時制と表現（used toの二重使用や前置詞の誤り）を直してください。また、名詞の数（seas → the sea）や動詞の形（went swimming）を正しく使い、文を簡潔にまとめましょう。理由を述べるときは一文で主張＋一文で具体例（誰と、いつ、どんな活動）を加えると自然です。発音と流暢さにも気を付けて、語彙は具体的な記憶や感情を表す単語を使うと良い印象になります。

Example: I prefer the sea because I used to live near the coast and have many happy memories there. For example, I often went swimming with my grandmother when I was a child.

× Yes I do. I often go go on trouble overseas and there are beautiful scenery that I can't see in Japan.

✓ Yes, I do. I often go on trips overseas, and there is beautiful scenery that I can't see in Japan.

The sentence contained a repeated word 'go go' and an incorrect noun phrase 'on trouble' (should be 'on trips'). 'Scenery' is uncountable and should use 'is' not 'are'. The relative clause should use 'that I can't see in Japan.' Suggestion: remove the duplicate word, use 'go on trips' for traveling, treat 'scenery' as uncountable and use singular verb 'is'.

× Yes I do, I have a camera for to take a photo of sceneries because I want show my friends and my family.

✓ Yes, I do. I have a camera to take photos of the scenery because I want to show them to my friends and family.

Avoid 'for to' — use 'to' plus base verb for purpose. 'Sceneries' is incorrect; 'scenery' is uncountable, use 'photos of the scenery' or 'photos' plus 'the'. Also need 'to' before 'show' and use an object pronoun 'them' for 'photos'. Omit redundant 'my' before 'family' or keep 'my family'. Suggestion: use 'to take photos of the scenery' and 'to show them to my friends and family'.

× I prefer the sea because I used to used to live in near the sea and I have beautiful memories about seas.

✓ I prefer the sea because I used to live near the sea, and I have beautiful memories of it.

The phrase 'used to used to' duplicates 'used to' — keep only one. 'Live in near the sea' has an extra preposition; use 'live near the sea'. 'Memories about seas' is awkward; use 'memories of it' or 'memories of the sea'. Suggestion: remove duplicate 'used to', use 'live near the sea', and express memories with 'memories of'.

× I often went to swimming with my grandmother.

✓ I often went swimming with my grandmother.

Use 'went swimming' (verb 'go' + gerund) not 'went to swimming'. The preposition 'to' is unnecessary before the gerund here. Suggestion: say 'went swimming' or 'used to go swimming' depending on context.