Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Keep answers concise and directly relevant. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (use 'scenery' not 'sensory'), and avoid redundant or unclear phrases like 'reflecting why I'm looking'. Use one or two supporting details and a linking word. Focus on accurate verb forms and word choice.

Example: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy watching changing landscapes. For example, seeing fields and houses helps me relax and think about local life.

Suggestion: Be more fluent and avoid hesitations. Give a direct answer then add a clear reason and one specific example. Avoid awkward phrasing like 'in one place by a couple of hours' — instead say 'stuck in a car for hours.' Use linking words such as 'because' or 'so' appropriately.

Example: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside the car window because it helps me relax. For instance, I like capturing sunsets or interesting buildings when we are stuck in traffic for long periods.

Suggestion: Answer directly and correct common grammar mistakes: use 'it feels like freedom' or 'it feels freeing', 'fresh air', and past habits use 'took us to the sea' not 'troubled'. Provide one clear personal reason and a supporting memory with correct tense and reduced hesitations.

Example: I prefer the sea because it feels freeing and the air is fresher. It also reminds me of my mother, who often took us to the beach when I was a child, so I have many happy memories there.

× Of course I look out of the window at the sensory when I travel by bus or car 'cause I love to reflecting why I'm looking out the window.

✓ Of course I look out of the window at the scenery when I travel by bus or car because I love reflecting on why I'm looking out the window.

The original sentence uses 'sensory' instead of the correct noun 'scenery' (word choice/adjective issue). Also 'to reflecting' is incorrect: use the verb 'reflect' with 'love' + gerund or 'reflect on' with gerund. Use 'because' instead of informal 'cause. Suggestion: use 'scenery' for views, 'love reflecting on' or 'love to reflect on'. Keep consistent verb forms.

× A window, yes. I often take photos of the scenery outside the car window 'cause it's my favorite, uh, way to relax while we're traveling cause it's so stressful to be in one place by a couple of hours.

✓ Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside the car window because it's my favorite way to relax while we're traveling, since it's so stressful to stay in one place for a couple of hours.

Change 'A window, yes.' to 'Yes,' for natural response. 'cause' should be 'because' or 'since'. 'To be in one place by a couple of hours' is ungrammatical: use 'to stay in one place for a couple of hours'. Also remove unnecessary comma before 'uh' and 'my favorite, uh, way' simplifies to 'my favorite way'. This fixes article/phrase and preposition misuse.

× I prefer the sea 'cause it's feels like an freedom, like an fresh air.

✓ I prefer the sea because it feels like freedom, like fresh air.

Errors: 'it's feels' mixes contraction + verb; use 'it feels'. 'an freedom' and 'an fresh air' misuse indefinite article with uncountable nouns; use no article: 'freedom' and 'fresh air'. Also 'because' is more formal than 'cause'. Suggestion: use 'it feels like freedom' and 'like fresh air'.

× And it's always remind me about my mom.

✓ And it always reminds me of my mom.

Subject-verb agreement and wrong preposition: 'it's always remind' should be 'it always reminds' (third person singular + s). Also English uses 'remind someone of something' not 'remind someone about'. Fixes pronoun/verb agreement and preposition usage.

× She's always, uh, troubled us to the sea.

✓ She always took us to the sea.

'Troubled us to the sea' is incorrect collocation and tense. 'Trouble' does not mean 'take' in this context. Use 'took us to the sea' for past habitual action; if intended habitual past, 'used to take us to the sea' is also possible. Remove filler 'uh' and use correct verb and tense.