Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Focus on clear, direct sentences. Start with a topic sentence answering the question, then give one or two brief, specific reasons using correct tense and simple linking words (e.g., because, so). Avoid redundant fragments and incorrect word forms. Work on basic grammar: use present simple for habitual actions and correct verbs (e.g., 'get carsick', 'sleep').

Example: No, I usually don’t look out of the window when I travel by car because I often get carsick. Therefore I prefer to close my eyes and rest so I feel more comfortable.

Suggestion: Answer directly, then give a concise, specific reason. Use correct collocations (e.g., 'get carsick', 'take photos') and simple linking words (because, so). Keep sentences short and check word order. Avoid repeating the same idea twice.

Example: No, I usually don’t take photos from a moving car because I get carsick. So I prefer to close my eyes and rest instead of looking out or taking pictures.

Suggestion: Begin with a clear preference sentence, then give two concise, specific reasons linked with words like 'because' and 'whereas'. Use correct expressions (e.g., 'take my breath away' instead of 'makes me breathtaking', 'long trip' -> 'a long trip'). Avoid unfinished sentences.

Example: I prefer the sea because the scenery takes my breath away and helps me relax. Whereas going to the mountains usually means a long journey, and I often get carsick, so I avoid mountain trips.

× No, I didn't look out the window at the scenery when I traveling by the car I used to I usually. Sleep by the in the car because I would gather carsick so I can the Galloway window or I will feel uncomfortable.

✓ No, I didn't look out the window at the scenery when I was traveling by car. I usually slept in the car because I would get carsick, so I closed the window or I would feel uncomfortable.

Multiple past tense errors: 'traveling' needs past continuous 'was traveling' to match 'didn't look'; 'Sleep by the in the car' should be past 'slept'; 'gather carsick' is incorrect verb choice and tense — use 'get carsick'; 'can the Galloway window' is unclear and should be 'closed the window'. Suggestion: keep verbs consistent in past tense and use correct verb forms (was traveling, slept, get carsick, closed).

× Usually not because I will get a car seat while I watch outside the window and what I do is just close my eyes and sleep.

✓ Usually not because I get carsick when I look out the window; what I do is just close my eyes and sleep.

Incorrect future 'will get' and wrong noun 'car seat' instead of adjective 'carsick'. The question asks about general habit so use present simple 'I get carsick' and 'look out the window'. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual actions and correct adjective 'carsick'.

× Let me feel more comfortable to myself and avoid looking at the scenery.

✓ This makes me feel more comfortable and helps me avoid looking at the scenery.

Awkward structure 'Let me feel more comfortable to myself' is not natural. Use a clear subject and verb: 'This makes me feel more comfortable' and add purpose/result 'and helps me avoid'. Suggestion: express cause and effect with subject 'this' and verbs 'makes' and 'helps'.

× I prefer the sea because the view makes me breathtaking and let me escape my real life, whereas mountains need to get a long trip and I will feel carsick so I don't like to go to the.

✓ I prefer the sea because the view takes my breath away and lets me escape my real life, whereas visiting the mountains requires a long trip and I get carsick, so I don't like going there.

Several tense and verb form issues: 'makes me breathtaking' is incorrect — use idiom 'takes my breath away'; 'let me' should be 'lets me' to agree with singular subject 'the view' (present tense third-person). 'Need to get a long trip' should be 'requires a long trip' and use present simple 'get carsick' for habitual reaction. 'Go to the.' incomplete — use 'going there'. Suggestion: use correct idioms, subject-verb agreement, and present simple for preferences and habitual reactions.