Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (umm), correct word order and form, and add one specific supporting detail with a linking word. Keep it to 2–3 sentences. For example, say you like the window seat because it helps you relax and give a specific reason (e.g., watching passing landscapes helps you reflect).

Example: I usually sit by the window when I travel because it helps me relax and think. For instance, watching the changing landscape gives me time to reflect on my plans and reduces stress.

Suggestion: Improve clarity and coherence: give one clear reason and a specific example, avoid repetition and incorrect words (e.g., 'Skype' is irrelevant). Use linking words to connect ideas. Keep answers natural and under five sentences.

Example: Yes, I often take photos of the view because I love nature, especially the sky. For example, I photograph dramatic sunsets while travelling to remember how peaceful they made me feel.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence stating your general preference, then explain with specific reasons and use linking words. Correct vocabulary mistakes (e.g., 'Caesar' wrong; say 'the sea' or 'the coast'), and avoid repetition. Two to three sentences are enough.

Example: It depends on my mood, but generally I prefer the sea in summer because I enjoy sunbathing and relaxing on the beach. In contrast, I like the mountains in winter for hiking and the peaceful snowy scenery.

× I'm really overthinker person and I like to umm sit in a window side because it helped me to umm sit alone with my thoughts and think about my umm life and it really improve my mental health.

✓ I'm really an overthinker, and I like to sit by the window because it helps me be alone with my thoughts and think about my life, and it really improves my mental health.

Errors: missing article before 'overthinker' and wrong word order ('overthinker person' should be 'an overthinker'), incorrect preposition ('in a window side' -> 'by the window'), tense mismatch ('helped' -> 'helps' to match present habitual action), wrong verb form ('improve' -> 'improves' to agree with singular subject). Suggestions: use the article 'an' before nouns with vowel sounds, use 'by the window' for sitting next to a window, keep present simple for habitual actions, and ensure subject-verb agreement by adding -s for third person singular verbs.

× I usually do this because I really like nature and especially sky because it it makes me feel like I'm free and I it makes me feel like I'm not really relaxed. And I also like Skype because my favorite.

✓ I usually do because I really like nature, especially the sky, because it makes me feel free; although sometimes it doesn't make me feel relaxed. I also like the sea because it's my favorite.

Errors: missing article before 'sky' ('the sky'), repeated words ('it it'), unclear and contradictory phrasing ('I'm not really relaxed' likely meant 'it doesn't make me feel relaxed'), wrong noun 'Skype' used instead of 'sea', and sentence fragmentation. Suggestions: add 'the' before 'sky', remove duplicated words, clarify contrast with 'although' or 'but', use 'doesn't make me feel relaxed' for negative present simple, and use 'sea' instead of 'Skype'. Also combine ideas into clearer sentences and use contractions or auxiliary verbs correctly ('it's my favorite').

× It depends on my mood but in the summer I prefer to the sea because I like I really like tanned skin and Caesar also really good to relax and mountains especially in the winter.

✓ It depends on my mood, but in the summer I prefer the sea because I like having tanned skin, and the sea is also really good for relaxing; I prefer the mountains in the winter.

Errors: unnecessary 'to' after 'prefer' ('prefer the sea' not 'prefer to the sea'), awkward repetition ('I like I really like'), wrong word 'Caesar' instead of 'the sea', incorrect preposition 'to relax' -> 'for relaxing' or 'to relax' with 'good for'. Suggestions: remove extra 'to', avoid repeating phrases, correct word choice to 'the sea', use 'good for relaxing' or 'good to relax', and reorganize the sentence into clearer clauses. Use present simple for habitual preferences.