Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the response more natural and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms and remove repetition. For example, say why it calms you and give a brief example of a typical scene you notice.

Example: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because it helps me relax. For instance, I often watch the changing neighbourhoods and trees pass by, which clears my mind and makes the journey feel shorter.

Suggestion: Use correct verb forms and clearer linking words. Begin with a direct topic sentence (I don't usually take photos), then give a concise reason and a specific example. Avoid filler words and correct vocabulary (e.g. 'especially').

Example: No, I don't usually take photos from a moving vehicle because the images often come out blurry. Instead, I prefer to enjoy the moment — for example, I might remember a vivid sunset rather than try to photograph it.

Suggestion: Give a clear opinion in the first sentence and support it with two specific reasons using linking words. Fix grammar (I prefer the sea to the mountains; it has fresh air and a cooling breeze) and complete the final thought. Keep it within four sentences.

Example: I prefer the sea to the mountains because it has fresher air and a cooling breeze. Also, the sound of waves relaxes me, so I find seaside walks more refreshing than hiking in the hills.

× Yes, I usually look out the window during the traveling by bus or car.

✓ Yes, I usually look out the window while travelling by bus or car.

Use 'while' instead of 'during' before a verb-ing clause; 'traveling' can be treated as an uncountable activity so drop 'the'. Use single 'l' or double 'l' depending on variety; keep consistent (here 'travelling'). Recommendation: say 'while travelling by bus or car'.

× It's make me me feel calm and clear my mind.

✓ It makes me feel calm and clears my mind.

Subject 'It' requires third-person singular verb 'makes' not 'make'. Also 'clear my mind' needs to be in third-person singular form 'clears' to match subject 'It'. Remove duplicate 'me'. Recommendation: ensure verbs agree with subject and remove repeated words.

× Actually, I'm not usually take the photo outside the car or bus window.

✓ Actually, I don't usually take photos out of the car or bus window.

Use auxiliary 'do' for negative in present simple: 'I don't usually take'. 'Take the photo' is too specific; use plural 'photos' or 'a photo' depending on meaning. 'Out of' or 'from' the window is more natural than 'outside' here. Recommendation: use 'I don't usually take photos from the car or bus window.'

× Uh, escapely is really special or beautiful.

✓ Uh, especially if it is really special or beautiful.

Likely intended 'especially'. Use 'especially if it is' to introduce a condition. 'Escapely' is not a word. Recommendation: replace with 'especially if it is' or 'especially when it is'.

× I rather the moment than the take the photo.

✓ I'd rather enjoy the moment than take a photo.

Use the expression 'I'd rather' followed by the base verb 'enjoy'. Do not use 'the' before 'moment' or before 'take'. Remove extra article 'the' before 'take'. Recommendation: use 'I'd rather enjoy the moment than take a photo.'

× You can continue the weather.

✓ You can continue about the weather.

This sentence is unclear; likely the student meant 'You can continue' (no object) or 'You can continue with the weather'. 'Continue the weather' is incorrect collocation. Recommendation: say 'You can continue with the weather' or simply omit this sentence.

× I'm prefer the sea view than mountains because it's have fresh air and some cooling.

✓ I prefer the sea to the mountains because it has fresh air and is cooler.

Do not use 'I'm prefer'; 'prefer' is stative present: 'I prefer'. Use 'prefer A to B' not 'prefer A than B'. 'It's have' is incorrect; use 'it has'. 'Some cooling' is awkward; use 'is cooler' to compare. Recommendation: 'I prefer the sea to the mountains because it has fresh air and is cooler.'

× I like this feeling and when I walk the mountains it's.

✓ I like this feeling, and when I walk in the mountains, I feel the same way.

Fragment: 'when I walk the mountains it's' is incomplete and ungrammatical. Use 'walk in the mountains' and complete the clause with a subject and verb (I feel the same way). Recommendation: 'When I walk in the mountains, I feel the same way.'