Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words and correct verb forms. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases (e.g., "it's in enhance your horizon").

Example: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus. I find watching the passing scenery relaxing, especially when I listen to music, and it helps me notice local life and landscapes.

Suggestion: Answer directly and avoid hesitation. Use a clear topic sentence and give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Fix tense and phrasing (e.g., "If I will be" → "If I'm").

Example: No, I usually don't take photos out of car windows because the view is often blurred and uninteresting. However, if I stop somewhere or sit outside, I will take pictures of interesting scenes.

Suggestion: Give a clear, grammatical preference sentence, then support it with two specific reasons using linking words. Correct pronoun and verb errors ("see" → "sea", "she is the part" → "it is part").

Example: I definitely prefer the sea because I have lived near the coast for ten years. As a result, I often spend weekends swimming and relaxing on the beach, so the sea feels like part of my life rather than the mountains.

× Yes, I do, yes I do as it's in enhance your horizon and it's really fun to look outside what happening here and mostly I like do it when I travel by bus listening to music and watch through the window.

✓ Yes, I do, because it enhances your horizons and it's really fun to look outside and see what's happening. Mostly I like to do this when I travel by bus, listening to music and looking through the window.

Errors include incorrect verb tense and form (enhance -> enhances), incorrect noun form (horizon -> horizons), missing infinitive marker (like do it -> like to do this), incorrect clause order and missing auxiliary in a question/relative clause (what happening -> what's happening), and inconsistent verb forms (watch -> looking). Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement (enhances), use plural for general 'horizons', use 'to' before verbs after 'like', contract and rearrange to form 'see what's happening', and maintain parallel gerund forms (listening and looking).

× Mostly no, because I don't see the reason to take photos of the scenery outside the car window.

✓ Mostly no, because I don't see a reason to take photos of the scenery outside the car window.

Use of article: 'the reason' often becomes 'a reason' in negative general statements. This is an article choice (related to problem type 22) but primarily a prepositional/usage nuance. Suggestion: use 'a reason' when speaking generally and keep 'outside the car window' as the correct prepositional phrase.

× If I will be in the, uh, inside the car I'd like to take photos, but outside, no, not my type.

✓ If I am inside the car, I'd like to take photos, but outside, no; it's not my type.

In conditional clauses using 'if' for present/future situations, do not use 'will' in the if-clause. Use present simple (I am). Also remove filler 'the' before 'inside the car', and clarify 'not my type' with 'it's' for grammatical completeness. Suggestion: use 'If I am' or 'If I'm' in real conditional sentences referring to future preference.

× Definitely see because I live in near to the sea and I have been living here for 10 years.

✓ Definitely the sea, because I live near the sea and I have been living here for 10 years.

Pronoun and word choice: 'see' is a misspelling/incorrect word for 'sea'. Also incorrect preposition order 'in near to' should be 'near' or 'near the sea'. Suggestion: use correct noun 'sea' and the correct preposition 'near the sea' or 'by the sea'.

× That's why she is the part of my life, going to the sea and have good fun days here.

✓ That's why it is a part of my life: going to the sea and having good fun days here.

Incorrect pronoun 'she' used for 'the sea' — use 'it'. Article and noun phrase errors: 'the part of my life' -> 'a part of my life'. Verb forms need parallel gerund '-ing' forms: 'going' and 'having' (not 'have'). Suggestion: use 'it is a part of my life' and keep verbs in parallel gerund form.

× It's really better than go to the mountains.

✓ It's really better than going to the mountains.

After 'better than' compare two activities using gerund form 'going' rather than base verb 'go'. Suggestion: use parallel structures in comparisons: 'better than going to the mountains'. Would also consider 'I prefer the sea to the mountains' for a more natural sentence.