Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more accurate and concise: correct grammar (tenses, articles) and word choice (use 'scenery' not 'scanner'). Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Avoid repetition and limit to 2–4 sentences. For example, say when and why you look out, and give a short specific memory or feeling to enrich the answer.

Example: Yes, I do. I often look out of the car window when I listen to music because the views help me relax. For instance, seeing familiar streets or countryside sometimes reminds me of childhood trips, which makes the journey more enjoyable.

Suggestion: Improve grammar and clarity: use full sentences, correct verb forms, and precise vocabulary ('scenery' and 'outside the window'). Start with a direct answer, then give a clear reason and a brief example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' to connect ideas and avoid filler words.

Example: Yes, I do. I like taking photos whenever the scenery is attractive because I enjoy documenting moments from my life. For example, if I see a striking sunset or a picturesque village from the car, I will quickly take a photo to remember it.

Suggestion: This answer is good but can be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific reasons linked with connectors (for example, 'because' and 'so'). Correct minor grammar issues (use 'I prefer the mountains' and avoid repeating words). Add a brief personal example to make it specific and varied vocabulary like 'panoramic views' or 'fresh air'.

Example: I prefer the mountains because I enjoy hiking and climbing, which let me stay active. Also, reaching the summit offers panoramic views and fresh air, so I often take photos and feel refreshed after a long hike.

× Yeah, absolutely. I often look out the window at the scanner when I traveling by car because I I often listen music and when I look out the window I can review some old things. Yeah.

✓ Yeah, absolutely. I often look out the window at the scenery when I travel by car because I often listen to music, and when I look out the window I can remember old things.

Multiple errors matching listed types: 'scanner' is a wrong word choice but not in list, however 'scenery' correction kept. Identified mistakes: (5) Past tense issue not applicable; (6) Present tense issue: 'I traveling' should be 'I travel' (present simple for habitual action). (11) Incorrect use of prepositions: 'listen music' needs 'listen to music'. (1)/(27) Singular/plural and subject-verb agreement: 'I I' is duplicated; removed duplicate. Suggested improvement: Use simple present for habitual actions (I travel, I often listen to), include correct preposition 'to' with 'listen', and proofread to remove duplicated words.

× Yeah, sure, because I also like take photos in anytime because I I'd like to record the life and if outdoors scanner is so beautiful, I will take photos of the scanner, yeah.

✓ Yeah, sure, because I also like to take photos anytime since I like to record life, and if the outdoor scenery is beautiful, I will take photos of it.

Errors matched to (8) Verb + -ing not needed here and (11) Incorrect use of prepositions and (1) Singular/plural minor: 'like take' should be 'like to take' (use infinitive after 'like'). 'in anytime' is incorrect preposition and word order; use 'anytime' or 'at any time'. 'I I'd' duplication corrected to 'I' and 'record the life' should be 'record life'. 'outdoors scanner' incorrect; correct to 'outdoor scenery' and replace redundant 'of the scanner' with 'of it'. Suggestion: After 'like' use 'to' + base verb or gerund consistently, remove extra words, use 'outdoor scenery' for landscape.

× I prefer the mountains because my hobby is hiking and climbing. When you get the top of the mountains, you can see very beautiful scenery and take photos. Yeah, sure. So I I prefer mountains.

✓ I prefer the mountains because my hobby is hiking and climbing. When you reach the top of the mountain, you can see very beautiful scenery and take photos. Yeah, sure. So I prefer the mountains.

Errors matched to (1) Singular and plural issue and (27) Subject-verb agreement and (26) Sentence structure: 'get the top of the mountains' should be 'reach the top of the mountain' or 'reach the tops of the mountains' for natural phrasing; using singular 'the top of the mountain' is better. 'I I' duplication removed and 'prefer mountains' changed to 'prefer the mountains' to use the definite article correctly (17). Suggestion: Use 'reach' for arriving at a summit, keep article 'the' with 'mountains', and avoid word duplication.