Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise and directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect phrasing. Also correct basic grammar (plural/singular, verb forms) and remove unclear phrases (e.g. “make me not don't have the car seats”).

Example: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car. For example, I enjoy watching city streets and countryside fields because they help me relax and pass the time. Also, I sometimes notice interesting landmarks that I wouldn’t see from inside a building.

Suggestion: Good idea and structure, but make your answer more fluent and reduce repetition. Use linking words (for example, but, however) and give one clear condition and a short reason. Correct small grammatical issues and avoid repeating phrases like “different things.”

Example: Yes, I do, but it depends on the view. If I see an especially beautiful landscape or an interesting building, I’ll take a photo to remember it. However, I usually don’t photograph ordinary scenes like rows of trees because they look the same to me.

Suggestion: Start with a direct answer (preference) and briefly explain the reasons with specific sensory details. Use linking words (for example, because or whereas) and complete your final sentence. Avoid unfinished thoughts and simple repetitive vocabulary.

Example: I would choose both the mountains and the sea because they offer very different experiences. For instance, the mountains make me feel refreshed and calm due to the fresh air and greenery, whereas the sea gives me a sense of freedom from the sound of waves and the salty smell.

× I always look out the window at the scenery when traveling by bus or cars because I can see views and make me not don't have the car seats for example if I look into the bus or in the car it just make me have the car saved and also I think why not because I.

✓ I always look out the window at the scenery when traveling by bus or car because I can see the view and it makes the journey more comfortable; for example, when I look out of the bus or car it helps me relax.

Original sentence uses inconsistent plural forms ("cars","views","car seats") and unclear phrases. 'Bus or cars' should be 'bus or car' (parallel singular) or 'buses or cars' (both plural); here 'bus or car' is natural. 'Views' should be 'the view' as a general concept. 'Make me not don't have the car seats' is ungrammatical and unclear; replaced with a clear meaning: 'it makes the journey more comfortable' and 'helps me relax'. Suggestion: keep parallel forms, use singular or plural consistently depending on meaning, and replace unclear fragments with concise phrases. Grammar problem type ID:1

× Yes, I do. It depends. If that view is wonderful, yeah, I will pick my phone and then take the photos of that view.

✓ Yes, I do. It depends. If the view is wonderful, I will take out my phone and take photos of it.

The original is mostly correct but slightly wordy and uses 'that view' repeatedly. 'Pick my phone' is colloquial; 'take out my phone' or 'use my phone' is more fluent. Also 'take the photos of that view' can be simplified to 'take photos of it'. Use concise, natural phrasing. Grammar problem type ID:10

× But sometimes if just the trees, so the trees are everywhere. So I just don't take the photos.

✓ But sometimes, if there are only trees everywhere, I don't take photos.

Original has fragmented structure and omitted necessary verb 'are' in 'if just the trees'. Correct form requires 'if there are only trees' to express existence and quantity. Also combine clauses to avoid repetition. Suggestion: use 'there are' to state presence and avoid redundant sentences. Grammar problem type ID:26

× But I like to look at the different things, different things.

✓ But I like to look at different things.

Original repeats 'different things' unnecessarily, creating redundancy. Remove repetition for clarity and conciseness. Use a single phrase 'different things'. Grammar problem type ID:26

× If I could choose, I would choose both of mountains and sea, because both of them give me different feelings.

✓ If I could choose, I would choose both the mountains and the sea, because each gives me different feelings.

Original 'both of mountains and sea' is incorrect; use 'both the mountains and the sea' or 'both mountain and sea'. Also 'both of them give me different feelings' is acceptable but 'each gives me different feelings' is clearer and matches singular agreement. Ensure correct use of 'both' with parallel nouns. Grammar problem type ID:1

× If I look at the mountains, I will feel fresh from the nature, from green.

✓ If I look at the mountains, I feel refreshed by nature and the greenery.

Original mixes conditional future 'will feel' with a general statement; using present simple 'feel' is more natural for habitual or general reactions. 'Fresh from the nature, from green' is unidiomatic; use 'refreshed by nature and the greenery'. Suggestion: use natural collocations like 'refreshed by' and 'greenery'. Grammar problem type ID:6

× If I look at the sea, I will smell it and then I will.

✓ If I look at the sea, I can smell the sea air and feel calm.

Original ends abruptly with 'and then I will' which lacks a verb/completion. Complete the idea by specifying the resulting sensation, e.g., 'feel calm'. Also prefer 'can smell the sea air' or 'I smell the sea' for clarity. Ensure each clause has a main verb and completes the thought. Grammar problem type ID:23