Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Keep answers natural, concise, and organized. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + brief reason). Then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler sounds (uh, umm), repeated words, and incomplete phrases. Pay attention to grammar (prepositions: look out of the window; enjoy seeing) and word choice (‘‘scenery’’ or ‘‘landscape’’).

Example: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel because I enjoy seeing the changing landscape. For example, I like spotting small villages and different types of vegetation as we drive, which makes the journey more interesting.

Suggestion: This answer is fairly clear and relevant but can be tightened and made more fluent. Begin with a direct response, then give a concise reason and one specific condition when you take photos. Remove hesitations and repetitive phrases. Use linking words like ‘however’ or ‘but’ to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Sometimes I take photos of the scenery, but I rarely do when I drive because it's unsafe. However, when I'm a passenger and the view is beautiful—like a dramatic sunset or a mountain range—I usually take several pictures.

Suggestion: Good direct answer with personal reason and supporting detail. Improve by reducing repetition and refining sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific reasons or an example, linked clearly (e.g., ‘because’, ‘so’, ‘for example’). Vary vocabulary (e.g., ‘satisfying’ → ‘rewarding’).

Example: I prefer the mountains because I enjoy hiking and the rewarding views from the summit. For example, last year my friends and I hiked a nearby peak and the panoramic scenery at the top made the climb feel really worthwhile.

× I love to look out on the window to see the scenery because I enjoy to, to see what happens or what kind of, uh, nature that, uh, have outside decor.

✓ I love to look out of the window to see the scenery because I enjoy seeing what happens and what kind of nature is outside.

Use 'look out of the window' (preposition 'out of' with window). Also replace 'enjoy to see' with 'enjoy seeing' (gerund after 'enjoy'). Fix clause 'what kind of nature that have outside decor' to 'what kind of nature is outside' for correct verb and clearer expression. ID:11 - Incorrect use of prepositions.

× And of course I love to see, umm, side at the side of the window in my.

✓ And of course I love to look at the view from the side of the window.

Original has misplaced pronoun/phrase and incomplete structure. Use 'look at the view' and 'from the side of the window' for correct prepositional phrase and remove the stray 'in my'. This fixes improper pronoun/phrase placement and incomplete sentence. ID:12 - Incorrect use of pronouns.

× Yeah, sometimes I take the photos of the scenery, but umm, I usually I don't take because I usually drive, so it's hard to take the photo during driving.

✓ Yeah, sometimes I take photos of the scenery, but usually I don't because I drive, so it's hard to take photos while driving.

Remove redundant 'I usually' and use parallel structures: 'take photos' (no article) and 'while driving' (correct adverbial clause). This corrects awkward repetition and improves sentence structure. ID:26 - Sentence structure errors.

× But when I am the passenger, of course when there is a bit of a scenery, I would love to take the photos.

✓ But when I am the passenger, and there is a nice view, I would love to take photos.

Replace 'a bit of a scenery' with 'a nice view' or 'some scenery' for natural English. Use 'take photos' (no article). Simplify conjunctions for clarity and correct pronoun/reference. ID:12 - Incorrect use of pronouns.

× I prefer the mountains because I really love hiking, so to see the nature from the top of the mountain is really, really satisfying.

✓ I prefer the mountains because I really love hiking, so seeing nature from the top of a mountain is really satisfying.

Use gerund 'seeing' after 'so' for natural result clause. Replace 'the top of the mountain' with 'the top of a mountain' (general statement about mountains), fixing article/quantifier usage. ID:14 - Incorrect use of quantifiers.

× And usually I go hiking with with my friends and to to see nature with them, to enjoy the nature with them is really lovely.

✓ I usually go hiking with my friends, and seeing or enjoying nature with them is really lovely.

Remove duplicated words ('with with', 'to to'), combine clauses properly, and use gerund 'seeing' or 'enjoying' to form a correct noun phrase as the subject/complement. This corrects repetition and sentence structure. ID:26 - Sentence structure errors.