Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise and correct tense; start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear words (e.g. 'password car'). Use present tense for habitual actions.

Example: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by car. I do this because the views are often beautiful and watching them helps me pass the time. For example, on my last trip I enjoyed seeing rolling hills and small villages, which made the journey feel shorter.

Suggestion: Use consistent tense and avoid unclear or incorrect words (e.g. 'singer sound sound'). Give one clear reason and a short specific example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' but keep sentences natural and not repetitive.

Example: Yes, I often take photos of scenery from the car because I want to remember interesting views. For example, I recently photographed a sunset over rice fields, which looked peaceful and colourful, and I later shared the picture with my friends.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer (choose one or say you like both), then give one or two specific reasons using clear vocabulary and correct sentence structure. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words like 'however' or 'also' to compare.

Example: I prefer both, but if I had to choose I would pick the mountains because I enjoy hiking and the wide views from the peaks. However, I also like the sea for relaxing on the beach and taking photos of the water at sunrise.

× Yes, I always look out the window at the scenery when I was traveling by password car, because the scenery is magnificent and and it will be very interesting when I see the scenery, it can kill the time, so the journey won't be tedious. Yeah, that is my perspective.

✓ Yes, I always look out the window at the scenery when I travel by car because the scenery is magnificent and it is very interesting to see; it helps pass the time, so the journey is not tedious. That is my perspective.

The student mixed past tense 'was traveling' with 'always' which requires present simple to express habitual action. 'Password car' is incorrect vocabulary and was replaced with 'car'. Double 'and' removed and 'it will be very interesting when I see the scenery' was changed to 'it is very interesting to see' to use present tense and a natural gerund structure. 'Can kill the time' is an unnatural collocation; 'helps pass the time' is idiomatic. Use 'is not tedious' rather than contraction 'won't be tedious' to match habitual present. Suggestions: use present simple for habits (I travel, I look), avoid literal translations (password car), prefer idiomatic phrases ('pass the time').

× Yes, I took photos of the scenery outside the car window, because I think that this is very interesting and the singer sound sound scenery is memorable and I really enjoy taking photos about it because different scenery have different emotions, so I think that it will be enjoyful.

✓ Yes, I take photos of the scenery outside the car window because I think it is very interesting and the scenic views are memorable. I really enjoy taking photos because different scenes convey different emotions, so I find it enjoyable.

The student used past 'took' but then mixes present 'I think' and 'I really enjoy'; for habitual action use present simple 'I take'. 'Singer sound sound scenery' seems to be incorrect words; replaced with 'scenic views'. 'Taking photos about it' is ungrammatical; use 'taking photos'. 'Different scenery have' has subject-verb agreement error and number issue; 'scenery' is uncountable, use 'different scenes' or 'different types of scenery' and match plural verb 'convey'. 'Enjoyful' is not a standard adjective; use 'enjoyable' or 'I find it enjoyable'. Suggestions: keep tense consistent for habitual actions, choose correct vocabulary, and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× Yes, I like I prefer both mountains and the sea. I prefer it because in the mountain you can you can stand in the high and take the loss of scenery about the mountainous scenery and at the sea you can see the magnificent scenery and taking some blue photos and it can make me.

✓ Yes, I prefer both the mountains and the sea. I like the mountains because you can stand on high ground and enjoy the mountainous views, and I like the sea because you can see magnificent scenery and take photos of the blue water; both make me happy.

The original sentence has repetition ('I like I prefer'), missing articles ('the mountains', 'the sea'), awkward phrases ('stand in the high', 'take the loss of scenery', 'taking some blue photos') and an incomplete ending ('it can make me'). Corrections: use 'prefer' once, include definite article with specific places ('the mountains'), 'stand on high ground' is natural, 'enjoy the views' or 'mountainous views' replaces unclear 'take the loss of scenery', 'take photos of the blue water' is a clear phrase, and finish with 'both make me happy' to complete the thought. Suggestions: avoid repetition, use articles correctly, choose natural collocations (stand on high ground, enjoy the view), and complete sentences with clear objects/effects.