Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct and grammatically correct: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect words (e.g. "plant" and repeated "outside").

Example: Yes, I always look out of the window when I travel by bus or car. For example, I enjoy watching passing streets, parks and buildings because they give me a sense of the city’s character, and sometimes I spot interesting street performances or cafés.

Suggestion: Answer directly, correct vocabulary and grammar, and give a brief reason. Use a linking word to add contrast when mentioning your mother.

Example: No, I usually don't take photos of the scenery from the car window because the images are often blurred. However, my mother sometimes takes pictures, especially when the view is particularly beautiful.

Suggestion: Give a clear preference sentence, then add specific reasons with linking words and concrete details. Avoid vague adjectives like "very" repeated; instead describe activities or feelings.

Example: I prefer the mountains because I enjoy hiking and the fresh air. For instance, I like climbing trails to reach viewpoints where I can see valleys below, and the peaceful atmosphere helps me relax.

× Yes I have, I always look outside and see everything outside when I go to bus or plant it. Very fun and great.

✓ Yes, I do. I always look outside and see everything when I go by bus or by plane. It is very fun and enjoyable.

Errors: incorrect use of 'I have' to answer a habitual question (should use simple present 'I do'); incorrect prepositions and nouns ('go to bus or plant it' is incorrect). Use 'go by bus' or 'by plane' for transport; 'plant' likely intended 'plane'. Also short sentence fragments 'Very fun and great' needs a full sentence and better word choice 'enjoyable'. Suggestion: Use 'I do' for habitual actions, use 'go by bus/plane' and write complete sentences.

× No, I never take photos of the sanctuary outside the car window, but my mom sometimes do it.

✓ No, I never take photos of the scenery outside the car window, but my mom sometimes does.

Errors: 'sanctuary' is the wrong noun; context requires 'scenery' (incorrect word choice). Subject-verb agreement: 'my mom sometimes do it' should be 'my mom sometimes does' because singular third-person requires '-s'. Also 'do it' is unnecessary; shortening to 'does' is natural. Suggestion: choose correct vocabulary and match verb form to the subject.

× I like mountain because it's very tall and big, I can climb on it and it's very fun and great.

✓ I like the mountains because they are very high and large; I can climb them and it is very fun and enjoyable.

Errors: 'I like mountain' needs definite article and plural 'the mountains' for general preference (article error and singular/plural). 'It's' referring to 'mountain' conflicts with plural; change pronouns accordingly. 'Very tall and big' is redundant; 'high' and 'large' are better collocations for mountains. 'Climb on it' is unidiomatic; use 'climb them' or 'climb a mountain'. Also 'very fun and great' is informal/redundant; use 'very fun' or 'enjoyable'. Suggestion: use correct article/plural when speaking about a category, ensure pronoun agreement, and choose natural collocations.