Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Améliorez la grammaire et la précision lexicale. Utilisez une phrase d'ouverture claire et corrigez les erreurs de temps et de structure (par exemple «I do look» ou «I usually look»). Évitez les mots incorrects («summary») et réduisez les répétitions en donnant un détail précis. Utilisez une ou deux phrases supplémentaires avec un mot de liaison pour enrichir la réponse.

Example: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car. I enjoy watching the landscape because it helps me relax and notice small details like old houses or people going about their day.

Suggestion: Corrigez l'utilisation des articles et les accords pluriels, et réduisez les hésitations. Nommez précisément ce que vous photographiez et expliquez brièvement pourquoi, en utilisant un connecteur logique (par exemple «because» ou «so»). Remplacez expressions maladroites («legged cabs») par le vocabulaire correct et évitez commencer des phrases par «Because» sans suite complète.

Example: Yes, I often take photos from the car window, especially when I spot striking buildings or colourful street scenes. I take pictures because I want to remember interesting places and share them with friends later.

Suggestion: Clarifiez votre préférence principale et organisez la réponse : donnez une phrase d'ouverture déclarant votre choix, puis deux raisons précises avec un lien logique. Corrigez le vocabulaire inapproprié («sleep» → «the sea») et les incohérences (dolphins are at sea, sheep are in the mountains). Évitez les idées contradictoires en une seule phrase et soignez la ponctuation pour la clarté.

Example: I prefer the sea because I love watching sunrises and seeing marine life like dolphins. Also, the coastal atmosphere relaxes me more than mountains, which I find quieter and less exciting.

× Yes, I too looking out of a window at summary when travelling.

✓ Yes, I also look out of the window at the scenery when travelling.

The original uses an incorrect -ing form 'looking' after a simple present context. Use the base verb 'look' for habitual actions. Also 'too' should be 'also', 'a window' to 'the window' for specific reference, and 'summary' is wrong word choice; use 'scenery'. Suggestion: use simple present for habits and choose correct nouns.

× I too looking out of a window at summary when travelling.

✓ Yes, I also look out of the window at the scenery when travelling.

Using 'out of' is acceptable but 'look out of a window at summary' is awkward; 'look out of the window at the scenery' is natural. Replace 'a' with 'the' for a specific window in the vehicle and 'summary' with 'scenery'.

× It's common for me because I like it.

✓ This is common for me because I enjoy it.

'It's common for me' is understandable but slightly unnatural; use 'This is common for me' or 'This is something I often do.' Also 'like it' is fine but 'enjoy it' is more natural. Maintain simple present for habits.

× I always take photo of a scenery outside the car window, uh, especially when I see uh, interesting legged cabs.

✓ I always take photos of the scenery outside the car window, especially when I see interestingly shaped cabs.

'Photo' should be plural 'photos' to match 'always take' when referring to repeated action. 'A scenery' is incorrect; 'scenery' is uncountable. 'Legged cabs' is incorrect word choice; likely intended 'unusual' or 'interestingly shaped cabs.' Replace with clear adjective. Use simple present for habitual action.

× I always take photo of a scenery outside the car window, uh, especially when I see uh, interesting legged cabs.

✓ I always take photos of the scenery outside the car window, especially when I see interestingly shaped cabs.

'A scenery' is wrong because 'scenery' is uncountable and does not take 'a'. Also 'interesting legged cabs' misuses words; correct article usage and adjectives.

× Because when I see something beautiful or attractive, I want to take a pictures.

✓ Because when I see something beautiful or attractive, I want to take pictures.

'A pictures' mixes singular article with plural noun. Use either 'a picture' or 'pictures'. Here plural 'pictures' fits the general habit of photographing.

× I prefer sleep because I can see many animals like sheep and dolphin, I can see the sunrise on the sea and it's so beautiful and like a few mountain it's so boring for me but it is a rare.

✓ I prefer the countryside because I can see many animals like sheep and dolphins; I can see the sunrise over the sea and it is very beautiful. Mountains are a bit boring for me, and they are rare here.

The original mixes incorrect nouns and tenses. 'Prefer sleep' is wrong; likely 'prefer the countryside' or 'sleep' typo. Use 'dolphins' plural. 'Sunrise on the sea' should be 'sunrise over the sea'. 'Like a few mountain it's so boring' is grammatically incorrect — separate into sentences and use plural 'mountains' and appropriate articles. Maintain present simple for preferences and facts.

× I prefer sleep because I can see many animals like sheep and dolphin, I can see the sunrise on the sea and it's so beautiful and like a few mountain it's so boring for me but it is a rare.

✓ I prefer the countryside because I can see many animals like sheep and dolphins; I can see the sunrise over the sea and it is very beautiful. Mountains are a bit boring for me, and they are rare here.

Pronoun and noun agreement errors: 'dolphin' should be 'dolphins' to agree with plural 'many animals'. 'It is a rare' incorrectly uses pronoun 'it' and 'rare' without a noun. Clarify meaning: 'they are rare here.' Also split into clear sentences.