Part 1
Examiner
Do you look out the window at the scenery when travelling by bus or car?
Candidate
Yes, I always did these things because I like watch some like tree or mountain and maybe you also can see some person and on the road and maybe they will work. They are walk. It's a beautiful space.
Examiner
Do you take photos of the scenery outside the car window?
Candidate
Yeah, I actually I don't like do this be before, but now I think something is exchange. So I like take a photo and I think it, uh, recalled my traveling. So yes, I like do this.
Examiner
Do you prefer the mountains or the sea?
Candidate
I prefer the sea because it like it looks like widely and many and blue, uh, actually I like blue, Yeah. So I like sea bigger than the mountains.
Do you look out the window at the scenery when travelling by bus or car?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: 在回答中要更直接地回应问题,使用清晰的主题句并保持句子简短。注意时态一致(现在习惯用现在时),并减少重复词。可以加入一两个具体细节并使用连接词(例如: because, so, and)使句子连贯。注意代词与名词的一致性和正确的动词形式(例如 “I like watching trees” 而不是 “I like watch some like tree”)。
Example: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy watching the passing landscape. For example, I often see trees, mountains and people working by the roadside, which makes the journey feel peaceful.
Do you take photos of the scenery outside the car window?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: 回答要更有条理,先用一句主题句直接回答,然后用一两句具体原因或例子支持。注意语法(过去习惯用 'didn't like',现在改为 'I like taking photos'),减少语音填充词(uh, um)。用清晰的连接词(e.g. but, so, because)来表达变化原因。
Example: I didn't used to take photos from the car, but now I enjoy doing it because photos help me remember trips. For example, I often photograph interesting buildings or landscapes to look back on later.
Do you prefer the mountains or the sea?
Score: 58.0Suggestion: 先简明回答(I prefer the sea),然后给出具体、连贯的理由并用合适词汇描述(e.g. 'vast', 'blue', 'calming')。避免重复词和语音停顿,用比较句子清楚表达喜好原因。可加入一两句支持细节。
Example: I prefer the sea because it looks vast and calming, with its wide blue expanse. I also find the sound of waves relaxing, which is why I enjoy spending time at the seaside more than in the mountains.
× Yes, I always did these things because I like watch some like tree or mountain and maybe you also can see some person and on the road and maybe they will work. They are walk. It's a beautiful space.
✓ Yes, I always do these things because I like watching trees or mountains, and maybe you can also see people on the road who are working. They're walking. It's a beautiful scene.
错误类型:动词后接 -ing 形式问题。说明:中文解释:在表示喜好(like)或习惯动作时,动词后通常接动名词(-ing)而不是不定式;例如 'like watching' 而不是 'like watch'。另外,名词单复数需一致:trees, mountains, people。短语 'they are walk' 应使用进行时态的动词形式 'they are walking' 或缩写 'they're walking'。'space' 在此上下文应为 'scene'(场景)更自然。建议多练习主谓结构和动名词用法,记住常见动词后接 -ing(like/enjoy/avoid等)。
× Yeah, I actually I don't like do this be before, but now I think something is exchange. So I like take a photo and I think it, uh, recalled my traveling. So yes, I like do this.
✓ Yeah, actually I didn't like doing this before, but now I think something has changed. So I like taking photos and I think they recall my travels. So yes, I like doing this.
错误类型:动词后接 -ing 形式和时态问题(复合)。说明:'don't like do' 应为 'didn't like doing'(过去否定喜好用动名词);'be before' 用法不当,应使用 'before' 与过去时连用。'something is exchange' 应为 'something has changed'(词汇和完成时);'like take a photo' 与前面相同,应为 'like taking photos';'recalled my traveling' 应改为 'they recall my travels'(recall 用一般现在描述现在感觉,traveling 名词化及复数用 travels 更自然)。建议:注意喜欢、避免等动词后接-ing,并区分时态和常用搭配。
× I prefer the sea because it like it looks like widely and many and blue, uh, actually I like blue, Yeah. So I like sea bigger than the mountains.
✓ I prefer the sea because it looks wide and very blue. Actually, I like blue. So I prefer the sea to the mountains.
错误类型:现在时/表达问题。说明:'it like it looks like widely and many and blue' 是错误重复和词类用法不当。'widely' 是副词,应改用形容词 'wide' 来描述 'it'(the sea);'many' 用法不当,描述颜色要用 'very' 或 'quite';比较结构 'I like sea bigger than the mountains' 应用 'prefer A to B' 或 'like A more than B',因此改为 'I prefer the sea to the mountains'。建议:学习形容词/副词区别(描述名词用形容词),以及常用比较和偏好表达(prefer... to... / like ... more than ...)。