Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the response grammatically complete and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh), and add one or two specific supporting details linked logically. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' correctly.

Example: Yes, I always look out the window when I travel because I enjoy discovering new places. For example, when I visit another country I like to watch the towns and countryside pass by to learn about local architecture and landscapes.

Suggestion: Be more precise with vocabulary and avoid repeating incorrect words ('scenario' is wrong here). Give a short structured answer: state your position, then one or two specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'however'.

Example: It depends. If I'm on holiday abroad I usually take photos of the scenery because I want to remember interesting views. However, when I'm commuting to work I rarely take pictures because I'm busy or it's unsafe to use my phone in traffic.

Suggestion: Answer directly and give a specific reason with a linking phrase. Remove fillers and improve sentence flow; one topic sentence plus one supporting detail is enough.

Example: I prefer the sea because I enjoy warm weather and swimming. For example, I love spending summer days on the beach relaxing and swimming in the ocean.

× Definitely is my favorite thing to do because I like to see and explore new things, especially when I'm out of the, uh, country and I think it's best thing to do when you're traveling.

✓ Definitely, it is my favorite thing to do because I like to see and explore new things, especially when I'm out of the country, and I think it's the best thing to do when you're traveling.

The original sentence lacks an explicit subject for the verb 'is' (sentence structure error) and omits the definite article 'the' before 'best thing'. Insert 'it' as the subject after 'Definitely' and add 'the' before 'best thing'. Also remove the extra comma before 'country' and the filler 'uh' for clarity. Suggestion: Start with 'Definitely, it is...' or 'Definitely, watching the scenery is...'.

× I think it depends where I am. If I'm traveling out of the country, yes of course I want to take every kind of scenario. But if I'm going on work and I'm sitting on the traffic, no, I don't want to take any kind of scenarios outside the car window.

✓ I think it depends on where I am. If I'm traveling abroad, yes, of course I want to take photos of every kind of scene. But if I'm going to work and I'm stuck in traffic, no, I don't want to take any scenes outside the car window.

Multiple issues: 'depends where I am' needs the preposition 'on' (preposition error) and 'traveling out of the country' is better expressed as 'traveling abroad'. 'Every kind of scenario' is incorrect collocation; use 'every kind of scene' or 'all kinds of scenes' (quantifier/collocation). 'Going on work' should be 'going to work' (preposition). 'Sitting on the traffic' should be 'stuck in traffic' (preposition/idiom). Also make plural consistency 'any kind of scenarios' -> 'any scenes'. Suggestions: Use 'depends on', 'traveling abroad', 'stuck in traffic', and 'take photos of scenes'.

× It's very hard question for me because I love both of them, but I can choose the sea because, uh, it's in the summer and I love when it's hot.

✓ It's a very hard question for me because I love both of them, but I would choose the sea because I like summer and I enjoy when it's hot.

Missing article 'a' before 'very hard question' (article error) and awkward modal 'can choose' — 'would choose' is more natural for preference (tense/modal). 'It's in the summer' is unclear; replace with 'I like summer' for clarity. Remove filler 'uh' and prefer 'enjoy when it's hot'. Suggestion: Use 'It's a very hard question' and 'I would choose the sea because I like summer.'