Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Speak more clearly and organise your answer: start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid filler words (uh, um) and unclear phrases. Use linking words like “because” or “for example” to connect ideas. Keep it under 4–5 sentences.

Example: Yes, I do. I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus because I enjoy seeing the changing landscapes. For example, I like watching fields and small towns pass by, which makes the journey relaxing and interesting.

Suggestion: Give a clear direct response and one specific reason or example. Reduce repetition and correct word choice (e.g. “city” or “countryside”). Use a linking word like “because” or “so” to explain why you take photos. Keep sentences short and natural.

Example: Yes, I often take photos from the bus window because the countryside and city views are interesting. For example, I take pictures of rivers and old buildings to remember the trip and share them with my friends.

Suggestion: Answer directly naming your preference, then give two clear reasons using linking words like “because” and “for example.” Use correct words (mountains/sea, fresh air, peaceful) and avoid vague terms. Keep response to 2–3 sentences.

Example: I prefer the mountains because the air is fresh and the scenery is peaceful. For example, I enjoy hiking and listening to birds, which helps me relax and feel refreshed.

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✓ Yes, I do. I love travelling when I go to TPA; at that time I look out of the bus window to see the scenery.

The original sentence has multiple sentence structure and word choice problems: unnecessary fillers, incorrect articles, wrong verb forms, and unclear phrases. I removed filler words, changed 'a travelling' to 'travelling' (no article), used 'look out of the bus window' for correct preposition and noun phrase order, and simplified 'looking these scenery reborn' to 'see the scenery'. Suggestion: speak in shorter clear clauses, avoid filler words, use correct noun phrases (e.g., 'the bus window') and present simple for habitual actions.

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✓ Yes, I do. I often look out of the window when I travel by bus, especially during the day. I enjoy watching the city scenery and taking photos; it helps me relax during the journey.

The original contains run-on sentences, incorrect word order, wrong verb forms ('I watching'), and awkward phrases ('indoors scenery city plantation', 'reliance get there some'). I corrected preposition to 'by bus', used 'during the day', changed 'watching' to 'watch' or 'enjoy watching', and replaced unclear words with 'city scenery' and 'relax'. Suggestion: use simple present for habits, correct prepositions ('by bus'), and choose common nouns (scenery, photos, relax).

× Yes I love SCC looking this amazing scenery. When I set my mind I go to SC. Help me a good fresh and yard. So I love a scenario.

✓ Yes, I love looking at the amazing scenery in SCC. When I decide to go to SC, it helps me feel refreshed, so I really enjoy the scenery.

Original has fragmented sentences, missing prepositions and articles, and incorrect word choices ('set my mind', 'Help me a good fresh and yard', 'scenario'). I added 'looking at', 'in SCC', changed 'set my mind' to 'decide', and 'feel refreshed' for natural expression. Suggestion: use complete sentences, correct verb phrases ('decide to go'), and common collocations ('feel refreshed', 'enjoy the scenery').