Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve grammar and conciseness. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail. Correct small errors (e.g., "It distract me" → "It distracts me"). Use a linking word to connect example (e.g., "for instance" or "for example"). Keep to maximum 3–4 sentences.

Example: Yes — I often look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because the scenery is calming. For example, after a stressful day at work I watch trees and buildings pass by, which distracts me and helps me relax. This simple routine makes the journey feel shorter and more peaceful.

Suggestion: Clarify meaning and fix word choice and grammar. Avoid confusing or incorrect phrases like "oppressive pressure memories" and "what I'm expressed." Use precise vocabulary (e.g., "special moments or memories") and correct verb forms. Keep answer natural and limited to 3–4 sentences, using a linking word such as "also" or "sometimes."

Example: Yes, I often take photos from the car window to capture special moments and memories, and I sometimes share them with friends so they can see what I saw. If the light is especially beautiful or the landscape is striking, I will ask the driver to stop for a few minutes to take better pictures.

Suggestion: Make your preference clear with a concise topic sentence, give specific reasons, and avoid unclear expressions like "It feels climbing." Use linking words (e.g., "because," "also") and more precise descriptions (e.g., "calm," "vast"). Keep it to 2–3 sentences for clarity.

Example: I prefer the sea because I love the color blue and the wide, calming view it offers. I also enjoy how the horizon makes the sky and water look like one, which feels more peaceful to me than the rugged landscape of the mountains.

× It distract me and helps me relax.

✓ It distracts me and helps me relax.

Subject-verb agreement in the present simple requires the verb to take -s with third-person singular subject 'It'. Change 'distract' to 'distracts'. Suggestion: Remember to add -s for he/she/it in present simple verbs.

× to capture special moments and oppressive pressure memories, and I usually share them with friends so they can feel what I'm expressed.

✓ to capture special moments and memories of stress, and I usually share them with friends so they can feel what I experienced.

Word choice and form are incorrect: 'oppressive pressure memories' is awkward; use 'memories of stress' or 'pressing memories'. 'what I'm expressed' is ungrammatical: the intended meaning is past experience, so use 'what I experienced'. Also match noun phrase forms. Suggestion: use clear noun phrases and correct verb forms for past experiences.

× I often take photos from the car window to capture special moments and oppressive pressure memories, and I usually share them with friends so they can feel what I'm expressed.

✓ I often take photos through the car window to capture special moments and memories of stress, and I usually share them with friends so they can feel what I experienced.

Preposition 'from the car window' is not wrong but 'through the car window' is more natural when taking photos; also adjusted surrounding words for clarity. Suggestion: choose prepositions that match the action (taking photos through a window).

× If the light is especially beautiful or the landscape is striking, I will stop the car for a few minutes to take more pictures.

✓ If the light is especially beautiful or the landscape is striking, I will stop the car for a few minutes to take more pictures.

No grammatical change needed; sentence is correct. Included to indicate pronoun usage is fine. Suggestion: none.

× It feels climbing and more beautiful to me than the mountains.

✓ It feels calmer and more beautiful to me than the mountains.

'Climbing' is incorrect as an adjective to describe the sea's feeling; likely intended 'calming'. Use 'calmer' or 'calming' depending on structure. Here 'feels calmer' fits. Suggestion: choose adjectives that match intended meaning and collocate correctly with 'feels'.