Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the answer more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Use correct grammar (articles, verb forms) and suitable linking words to connect ideas. Avoid redundancy like repeating transport types and phrasing such as “surrounding by nature trees.”

Example: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car. For example, I enjoy watching forests and rolling hills because they feel peaceful, and I often try to notice seasonal changes, such as autumn colours or spring blossoms.

Suggestion: Give a direct topic sentence and clarify the reason with one or two coherent supporting points. Improve grammar (past habits vs present, reduce wordiness) and use linking words like 'but' or 'so' correctly. Be specific about when or why you stopped taking photos.

Example: I used to take many photos when I was younger, but now I prefer to enjoy the view without taking pictures. For instance, I find it more relaxing to remember special landscapes in my mind, and sometimes I feel photos don't capture the atmosphere anyway.

Suggestion: Answer directly and avoid repetition. Provide one clear reason and a brief example or comparison. Correct grammar (singular/plural, article use) and avoid uncertain phrases like 'sometimes I do' that weaken the response.

Example: I definitely prefer the mountains because I grew up surrounded by forests and hills. For example, hiking and listening to birds in the mountains feels familiar and relaxing to me, whereas I find busy beaches less peaceful.

× Yes, I love looking around at the scenery when I'm traveling by bus or car or even by train and enjoying the view around, especially when I'm traveling through places surrounding by nature trees.

✓ Yes, I love looking around at the scenery when I'm travelling by bus, car or even by train, and enjoying the view, especially when I'm travelling through places surrounded by natural trees.

Incorrect use of verb forms and word choice: 'surrounding by nature trees' is ungrammatical; correct passive participle 'surrounded' is needed (Grammar Problem Type 8 and 9). 'Nature trees' is incorrect collocation—use 'natural trees' or better simply 'trees'. Also add commas and parallel structure: 'travelling by bus, car or even by train' and 'enjoying the view' should be parallel to 'looking around'. Use consistent spelling (traveling/travelling) depending on variety; keep one form. Suggestion: use 'surrounded by trees' or 'surrounded by nature' and keep parallel -ing forms.

× It's really an amazing.

✓ It's really amazing.

Incorrect article usage: 'an amazing' requires a noun after the adjective (e.g., 'an amazing experience') or remove the article to use the adjective predicatively. Here 'amazing' describes the situation, so 'It's really amazing' is correct. Suggestion: either say 'It's really amazing' or 'It's really an amazing experience'.

× Actually before when I was younger I used to take a lot of pictures but now at my age I don't get more take care about taking pictures but more enjoying the views and keep them in my mind because I have learned that pictures can be deleted and removed.

✓ When I was younger I used to take a lot of pictures, but now I don't pay as much attention to taking photos; I enjoy the views more and keep them in my mind because I have learned that pictures can be deleted.

Multiple grammatical issues: awkward phrasing and incorrect verb usage. 'Don't get more take care about' is ungrammatical; use 'don't pay as much attention to' (Grammar Problem Type 26 and 11). Use parallel structure: 'enjoy the views more and keep them in my mind' uses base forms 'enjoy' and 'keep' rather than gerunds. Also 'deleted and removed' is redundant; 'deleted' suffices. Maintain tense consistency: present perfect 'I have learned' is fine. Suggestion: simplify phrases, use correct verbs ('pay attention to'), and maintain parallel structure.

× I prefer the mountains absolutely because I have grown up in a places field of mountains, nature and trees.

✓ I absolutely prefer the mountains because I grew up in a place surrounded by mountains, nature and trees.

Incorrect article and noun form: 'a places field' mixes singular/plural and articles (Grammar Problem Types 1 and 22). Use 'a place' (singular) or 'places' (plural) consistently. Also 'I have grown up' is acceptable but 'I grew up' is more natural for a finished background; either is possible (tense issue). 'Surrounded by' is better than 'field of'. Suggestion: use 'a place' or 'a place surrounded by mountains' and correct tense to 'grew up' for past background.

× I have also grown up in a house that was filled of nature, trees, plants.

✓ I also grew up in a house that was filled with nature, trees and plants.

Wrong preposition: 'filled of' is incorrect; use 'filled with' (Grammar Problem Type 11). Also 'have also grown up' vs 'also grew up'—use simple past for past life situation. Remove the comma before 'plants' when listing. Suggestion: use 'filled with' and prefer 'grew up' for completed past situations.

× So I do prefer mountains more than sea, sometimes I do.

✓ So I do prefer the mountains to the sea, sometimes I do.

Incorrect comparison structure: use 'prefer X to Y' rather than 'prefer X more than Y' (Grammar Problem Type 25). Also include articles: 'the mountains' and 'the sea' are specific general places and require 'the'. Suggestion: use 'prefer X to Y' and include definite articles when speaking about general categories like 'the mountains' and 'the sea'.