Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more direct and grammatical. Start with a clear topic sentence that answers the question, then add one or two supporting details. Use correct verb forms and correct pronouns (e.g. "I" not "our"), and avoid redundancy. Also keep it within 3–4 short sentences and use a linking word when adding detail.

Example: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by car. For example, I often bring my camera, so I stop to take photos of interesting views. Because I enjoy photography, I try to capture scenes like countryside fields or old buildings.

Suggestion: Answer directly and correct grammar and vocabulary. Say whether you take photos often or not, then give a reason and a result. Avoid repetition and fix collocation errors (e.g. "interested in photography", "take photos"). Use linking words like "but" or "however" correctly.

Example: Not very often, but I do bring my camera with me. Because I'm interested in photography, I sometimes take a few pictures of nice scenes and then share them with my friends.

Suggestion: Give a clear, grammatical preference statement and support it with specific reasons. Use past tense correctly when referring to childhood and use linking words such as "because" or "since". Avoid unclear phrases like "sensory of environment"; instead describe what you like (e.g. peace, fresh air, scenery). Keep it to 2–3 concise sentences.

Example: I prefer the mountains because I grew up near big hills and feel comfortable there. The mountains are peaceful and have fresh air, which I find relaxing and inspiring.

× Sometimes our watch out the scenery out of the window while I was traveling by car because I usually will take my camera with me and record some photos.

✓ Sometimes I watch the scenery out of the window while I am traveling by car because I usually take my camera with me and record some photos.

Original sentence uses 'our' instead of 'I' and has extra/misplaced words. The noun/verb agreement and pronoun are incorrect: 'our watch out' should be 'I watch'. Also 'while I was traveling' shifts past tense; context indicates habitual action so use present continuous 'while I am traveling' or simple present 'when I travel'. Remove 'will' after 'usually' because 'usually' pairs with simple present. Suggestion: use 'I watch' or 'I look at' and keep tense consistent for habitual actions.

× To be honest not as much but I'm quite friend in photograph so I will will I will always bring my camera with me and take some photo and share with my friends.

✓ To be honest, not as much, but I'm quite fond of photography so I always bring my camera with me, take some photos and share them with my friends.

Multiple structural and word-choice errors: 'I'm quite friend in photograph' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'I'm quite fond of photography' (adjective + preposition + noun). 'I will will I will' is a repetition and unnecessary; habitual action uses simple present 'I always bring'. 'Some photo' should be plural 'some photos' and include object pronoun 'share them'. Add commas for clarity. Suggest practicing common collocations like 'fond of' and using simple present for habits.

× I prefer a mountains because in my childhood I like enormous hills and it's. And is really sensory of environment.

✓ I prefer the mountains because in my childhood I liked enormous hills, and they are really scenic environments.

Errors include wrong article usage 'a mountains' (plural requires no 'a' or use singular 'a mountain') and tense inconsistency: 'in my childhood I like' should be past 'I liked'. 'it's. And is really sensory of environment' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'they are really scenic' or 'it was a really sensory environment'. 'Scenic' is the correct adjective for visually attractive landscapes. Suggest: 'I prefer the mountains because when I was a child I liked enormous hills; they are very scenic.'