Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and use clearer sentence structure: start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific details. Correct articles and plural forms (e.g., "the nature" → "nature"; "the tree" → "trees"). Use linking words like "because" or "for example" to connect ideas. Keep answer to 2–3 sentences to sound natural.

Example: I usually sit by the window because I enjoy watching the passing scenery. For example, I like looking at rivers, fields, and trees when I travel by bus or car.

Suggestion: Improve grammar and coherence: begin with a clear topic sentence ("Sometimes" or "It depends"). Use correct verb forms and word order ("if the car isn't moving fast"), and a linking phrase to explain the reason. Keep it brief and specific.

Example: It depends. If the car isn't moving fast, I sometimes take photos, but when the vehicle is speeding it's difficult to get clear pictures because they come out blurry.

Suggestion: Give a direct preference statement and then support it with specific reasons, using varied vocabulary and smoother linking words (e.g., "because", "also"). Avoid repetition ("smells of the sea" said twice) and correct comparative form ("prefer the sea to the mountains").

Example: I prefer the sea to the mountains because I enjoy the fresh sea air and the relaxed beach atmosphere. Also, I like listening to the waves and walking along the shore, which feels more refreshing to me than a dense forest.

× I usually take a seat near the windows because I love to look out when the bus or the car is running on the way and I love to see like a nature outside the window, such as the rivers or the plants, the flowers or the tree.

✓ I usually sit near the window because I love to look out when the bus or car is moving and I love to see nature outside, such as rivers, plants, flowers, or trees.

The sentence has multiple article and word-choice issues. 'take a seat near the windows' is awkward; 'sit near the window' is more natural. 'the windows' and 'the car' are unnecessary definite articles when speaking generally; use 'window' and 'car'. 'running on the way' is incorrect for vehicles in motion; use 'moving'. 'see like a nature' is ungrammatical; use 'see nature'. 'the rivers' and 'the tree' should be plural without 'the' when speaking generally: 'rivers' and 'trees'. Suggestions: remove unnecessary definite articles, use natural verbs for sitting and motion, and match singular/plural nouns to general references.

× It depends, if the car land not much fast I will take or snap some picture of them.

✓ It depends. If the car does not go very fast, I will take or snap some pictures of it.

This sentence shows incorrect verb form and agreement. 'land' is wrong; the verb for vehicle motion is 'go' or 'move'. For negative present simple with third person singular subject 'the car', use 'does not' + base verb: 'does not go'. 'not much fast' is ungrammatical; use 'not very fast' or 'not too fast'. 'some picture of them' mixes singular/plural and pronoun reference; use 'some pictures of it' (the scenery or 'them' could be 'pictures of the views', but 'it' refers to the scenery/the view from the car). Suggestions: use auxiliary 'does not' for negatives in present simple, correct verb 'go'/'move', and ensure noun-pronoun number agreement.

× If the car runs fast it's hard to take them without shaking photo.

✓ If the car runs fast, it's hard to take photos without them being blurred by shaking.

The sentence has tense-related phrasing and word-order issues. 'shaking photo' is not idiomatic; use 'photos being blurred by shaking' or 'shaky photos'. 'take them' is unclear; specify 'take photos'. Keep present tense 'runs' consistent. Suggestions: use natural collocations like 'shaky photos' or 'photos being blurred', and ensure clear noun references.

× I prefer seas than the mountains because I love the atmosphere of the sea and the smells of the sea and I love the beach.

✓ I prefer the sea to the mountains because I love the atmosphere and smell of the sea, and I love the beach.

The phrase 'prefer seas than the mountains' uses incorrect comparative construction and quantifier. Use 'prefer X to Y' not 'prefer X than Y'. 'seas' is plural and awkward here; use 'the sea' as a general concept. Repetition 'the atmosphere of the sea and the smells of the sea' can be combined. Suggestions: use 'prefer A to B' structure and choose singular 'the sea' when speaking about the concept in general.

× The mountain is kind of like in the forest.

✓ The mountains are kind of like being in a forest.

Article and number agreement issues: 'The mountain' sounds specific; speaking generally use 'the mountains' or 'a mountain'. Also 'kind of like in the forest' lacks a verb; use 'being in a forest'. Suggestions: match singular/plural to intended meaning and include appropriate verb forms for clarity.

× I don't like that feeling much.

✓ I don't like that feeling very much.

This sentence is mainly fine but needs the adverb 'very' for natural emphasis. 'that feeling' correctly refers back to being in the forest. Suggestion: use 'very much' for natural spoken emphasis.