Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make your response clear, grammatical and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one specific reason using a linking word. Avoid repetition and fix verb forms and prepositions (e.g., 'watch' -> 'look', 'when I traveling' -> 'when I travel'). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Example: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy watching the city and its buildings. For example, I like to notice different shops and street scenes as we pass by.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence and follow with one specific detail or example. Correct phrases and collocations (e.g., 'breathtaking' not 'breath talking'). Avoid vague references like 'this'. Use linking words such as 'because' or 'so' and keep it concise.

Example: Yes, I often take photos of scenery outside the window because I find it breathtaking. For instance, I photograph interesting buildings or sunsets and sometimes post them on social media.

Suggestion: Answer directly which you prefer, then give one or two clear reasons with specific details. Fix grammar (e.g., 'I prefer the mountains to the sea', 'breathtaking'), avoid repetition and irrelevant fragments. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example'. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Example: I prefer the mountains to the sea because I enjoy hiking and the views from the peaks are breathtaking. For example, when I climb a mountain I can see wide valleys and forests that I love exploring.

× Yes, I am always watch around the city at the landscape when I traveling by bus or car, because when I meet at of the bus or a car, I always look at this look at the window to see.

✓ Yes, I always watch the scenery around the city when I travel by bus or car, because when I get off the bus or car, I always look out the window to see it.

Errors: incorrect continuous construction 'am always watch' should be simple present 'always watch'; 'when I traveling' missing auxiliary and should be 'when I travel'; 'meet at of the bus or a car' is incorrect collocation, intended 'get off the bus or car'; 'look at this look at the window' is redundant and ungrammatical, should be 'look out the window'. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions (I always watch, I travel), use correct phrasal verb 'get off', and use 'look out the window' for viewing outside.

× Yes, I always take photos of the landscape outside the car window because it's very breath talking.

✓ Yes, I always take photos of the landscape outside the car window because it's very breathtaking.

Error: 'breath talking' is a wrong form; correct adjective is 'breathtaking'. Suggestion: use correct adjective to describe something that impresses you: 'breathtaking'.

× It's like a big building and I really like to take photos of this to see and to post.

✓ There are big buildings and I really like to take photos of them to look at later and to post.

Errors: 'It's like a big building' isolates a single subject while context implies multiple sights; 'this' incorrectly refers to plural 'buildings'; 'to see' is awkward—use 'to look at later'. Suggestion: match pronoun number to noun (them for plural) and use clearer verbs for purpose.

× As me, I refer the mountains then at sea, because I really like to climb the mountain.

✓ As for me, I prefer the mountains to the sea, because I really like to climb mountains.

Errors: 'As me' should be 'As for me'; 'I refer' is wrong verb, should be 'I prefer'; 'then at sea' incorrect prepositions and structure, use 'to the sea'; 'climb the mountain' sounds specific—use plural 'mountains' for the general activity. Suggestion: use correct introductory phrase 'As for me', verb 'prefer', comparative 'prefer X to Y', and pluralize for general statements.

× And when when I climb the mountain, I can see a breath talking sight.

✓ When I climb a mountain, I can see a breathtaking view.

Errors: duplicated 'when when'; 'a breath talking sight' incorrect word order and form—use 'breathtaking view'. Suggestion: remove duplication, use correct adjective 'breathtaking' and noun 'view' for clarity.

× And in this I can, uh, explore some experiment on the sea, a lot of trees.

✓ Also, while there I can explore the coastal area and see many trees.

Errors: 'explore some experiment on the sea' is ungrammatical and unclear; likely intended 'explore the sea' or 'coastal area'; 'a lot of trees' needs better placement and agreement. Suggestion: rephrase to express intended meaning clearly: 'explore the coastal area' and 'see many trees'.