Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Улучшите структуру ответа: сначала прямо ответьте на вопрос, затем приведите 1–2 конкретных примера или причины. Избегайте лишних повторов и грамматических ошибок (например, «when I visited another country by plane»). Используйте связки (for example, because, so) для логики и не больше 3–4 предложений.

Example: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car. For example, on a recent trip I enjoyed watching the changing countryside and small villages pass by. I find observing scenery relaxing and it helps me notice details I would miss otherwise.

Suggestion: Сформулируйте ответ кратко и грамотно: сначала скажите «No, I don't», затем объясните причину одной-двумя связными фразами. Уберите тавтологию («by plane, by car, by bus») и исправьте ошибки в глаголах (например, «I don't like taking photos»).

Example: No, I don't usually take photos from vehicle windows. I find the reflections and motion make the pictures unclear, and I prefer to enjoy the view directly rather than focus on my phone.

Suggestion: Дайте чёткий выбор в начале (I prefer the sea/the mountains), затем объясните почему с одним или двумя конкретными аргументами. Избегайте неясных фраз и опечаток («if I shoot choose only one», «choose C»). Используйте релевантную лексику (relaxing, refreshing, scenery, hiking).

Example: I prefer the sea because I find the sound of waves very relaxing and it improves my mood. For instance, when I stay at the seaside I like walking along the beach at sunset and it helps me feel rested.

× So of course I usually look out the window, especially it was when I visited other country by plane, because for me there are a lot of interesting views and for me it's very stunning and thrilling.

✓ So of course I usually look out the window, especially when I travel to another country by plane, because there are a lot of interesting views and I find them very stunning and thrilling.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly and uses unnatural phrasing. Use present simple 'travel' to match 'I usually', change 'it was when I visited' to 'when I travel to another country by plane', and correct 'other country' to 'another country'. Replace 'for me it's very stunning' with 'I find them very stunning' to refer to the views. Suggestion: keep tense consistent, use clear subject references, and avoid redundant 'for me'.

× So I can say that I don't like take photos and that's why I have never been to photos of the scenery outside the car windows or another other one like by plane, by car, by bus and other transportation, because for me it's very unusual.

✓ I can say that I don't like taking photos, and that's why I have never taken photos of the scenery outside the car window or from other transport like planes, cars or buses, because for me it's very unusual.

After 'like' the gerund form 'taking' is required, not the base verb 'take'. 'Have never been to photos' is incorrect; use 'have never taken photos'. 'Car windows' should be singular 'car window' when speaking generally, and 'another other one' is redundant. Also use 'from other transport' or 'by plane/car/bus'. Suggestion: use the gerund after 'like', correct perfect tense 'have never taken', remove redundancies, and use parallel lists for transport modes.

× So actually I think that these kinds of traveling are interesting for the same time, but I can say that if I shoot choose only one, I think that I can choose C because for me it's very relaxing and stunning for both my mind and my mood.

✓ Actually, I think all these kinds of travel are equally interesting, but if I had to choose only one, I would choose the sea because it is very relaxing and uplifting for both my mind and my mood.

The original mixes awkward phrases and incorrect modal/conditional forms: 'these kinds of traveling' should be 'these kinds of travel' or 'these types of travel'; 'for the same time' is incorrect—use 'equally'. 'If I shoot choose' is garbled; use a second conditional 'if I had to choose' with 'would choose'. 'C' is unclear; replace with 'the sea' if context implies choice; keep adjectives accurate: 'uplifting' fits better than 'stunning' for mood. Suggestion: use correct noun forms ('travel'), proper conditional structure for hypothetical choices, and clear vocabulary for emotional effects.