Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cải thiện: Trả lời chưa rõ ràng và nhiều tiếng ắp, ừm. Nên mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp (Yes/No + brief reason), sử dụng câu ngắn gọn không quá 5 câu, và thêm một vài chi tiết cụ thể để làm rõ (ví dụ: thời điểm/địa điểm bạn thích nhìn). Tránh lặp từ và sửa ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'when I go shopping' thay vì 'go shop').

Example: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy landscapes. For example, I like to see high mountains and beautiful beaches when I visit the countryside or the coast. It helps me relax and shows me local scenery.

Suggestion: Cải thiện: Câu trả lời có nội dung rõ và phù hợp, nhưng ngữ pháp và từ vựng cần chính xác hơn (ví dụ: 'scenery' không đếm được; 'one of the best ways' thay vì 'one of the most way'). Nên dùng liên từ để nối ý rõ ràng hơn và giữ tối đa 3 câu hiệu quả.

Example: Yes, I do. I often take photos of the scenery because it is one of the best ways to preserve memories. I also share these pictures with my friends and family so they can see where I have been.

Suggestion: Cải thiện: Câu trả lời lộn xộn, nhiều tiếng ậm ừ và lỗi ngữ pháp/văn phạm khiến ý không rõ (ví dụ: 'Yes' không cần khi câu hỏi yêu cầu lựa chọn; 'I enjoy swimming' thay vì 'who like swimming'). Hãy bắt đầu trực tiếp ('I prefer the sea because...'), giải thích rõ bằng một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: 'I like swimming and walking on the shore'), và tránh nói lúng túng.

Example: I prefer the sea because I love swimming and relaxing on the beach. For instance, I enjoy walking along the shore and listening to the sound of the waves, which makes me feel calm.

× Maybe just, uh, I also want to see the scenery up, uh, when I go shop, when I go traveling, I like seeing the high mountain or the beautiful beach.

✓ Maybe, I also want to see the scenery when I go shopping or traveling; I like seeing tall mountains and beautiful beaches.

Original sentence has awkward word order, missing gerund forms, incorrect noun forms and unclear phrases. Use gerunds for activities after 'go' (shopping, traveling), use plural nouns for general things (mountains, beaches), and reorder for clarity. Suggestion: use clear coordination ('or') and parallel structures ('go shopping or traveling').

× Yes I do. I like taking photos, the sceneries because I think it is one of the most way to keep my memory and I can share the picture with my friends or my family.

✓ Yes, I do. I like taking photos of the scenery because I think it is one of the best ways to keep memories, and I can share pictures with my friends or my family.

Errors include incorrect article use ('the sceneries' -> 'the scenery' or 'photos of the scenery'), wrong superlative phrase ('most way' -> 'best ways'), countable vs uncountable ('memory' -> 'memories'), and plural agreement ('picture' -> 'pictures'). Also add necessary preposition 'of'. Suggestion: use 'photos of the scenery', 'one of the best ways', and plural nouns when speaking generally.

× Yes, I prefer the sea because I'm a person who like swimming.

✓ Yes, I prefer the sea because I'm a person who likes swimming.

Relative clause subject 'who' refers to 'a person' (third singular), so the verb must be 'likes' not 'like'. Suggestion: match verb form to subject in relative clauses: 'who likes'.

× Umm, I also want to, uh, walking on the, the Y stands.

✓ Umm, I also want to walk on the sands.

After 'want to' use base verb 'walk' not gerund 'walking'. 'the Y stands' seems to be misheard; likely 'the sands' or 'the beach'. Also 'on the sands' is the correct prepositional phrase. Suggestion: use 'want to walk on the sands' or 'want to walk on the beach'.

× Uh, I want to feel the South of wave.

✓ Uh, I want to feel the south wind and the waves.

Phrase 'the South of wave' is ungrammatical. Possibly speaker meant 'south wind' and 'waves'. Use correct nouns and articles: 'the south wind' and plural 'waves'. Suggestion: express sensations with nouns: 'feel the south wind and the waves.'