Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make your response more natural and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g., 'definitely' twice) and correct verb forms (use 'passes' and 'look' -> 'look' or 'looking').

Example: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because the passing scenery is often beautiful. For example, on my last trip I enjoyed watching fields and small villages, which helped me relax and notice local life.

Suggestion: Correct pronoun and tense errors and make the idea concise. Begin with a direct answer (Yes/No), then give a reason and a brief example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' appropriately and avoid extra words such as 'use my eye to capture those' — say 'I prefer to remember it with my eyes.'

Example: No, I don't usually take photos from a moving car because pictures often come out blurry. Instead, I prefer to watch the view with my own eyes and remember the scene, for example when driving through the countryside last month.

Suggestion: Give a clearer structure: state your preference (both), then contrast with specific reasons using linking words like 'while' or 'whereas'. Correct grammar (e.g., 'mountain views', 'you feel free', 'your eyes can see far'). Keep it to 2–3 sentences and add a short example to illustrate each preference.

Example: I prefer both the mountains and the sea because they offer different experiences: the sea makes me feel free and relaxed, whereas mountain views feel refreshing and expansive. For example, at the beach I enjoy listening to waves, but in the mountains I like long walks with wide views of the valley.

× I will definitely look out of the window at the scenery when I travel because I think the view pass by is very beautiful and I want to capture every moment, so I'm definitely look out at the window.

✓ I will definitely look out of the window at the scenery when I travel because I think the view passing by is very beautiful and I want to capture every moment, so I'll definitely look out of the window.

Issues: (1) 'view pass by' uses base verb 'pass' where a present participle 'passing' is required to describe ongoing action (Verb + -ing form, ID 8). (2) 'so I'm definitely look out' mixes 'be' + base verb; for future intent use contraction 'I'll' or 'I will' plus base verb (Future tense issue, ID 7). Suggestions: use 'passing' to modify 'view' and use 'I'll definitely look out' or 'I will definitely look out' for correct future construction; also keep 'out of the window' or 'out of the window' consistent (prefer 'out of the window' or 'out the window').

× AI would not take the photo at the scenery outside the card window because I think when the car is moving you can't capture clearly the scenery outside of the car. So I want to use my eye to capture those, not use take photos.

✓ I would not take photos of the scenery outside the car window because I think when the car is moving you can't capture the scenery clearly. So I want to use my eyes to take in those views, not take photos.

Issues: multiple grammar problems: (1) 'AI' seems wrong pronoun/typo for 'I' (Incorrect use of pronouns, ID 12). (2) 'card window' is a typo for 'car window' (not a listed type but corrected). (3) 'take the photo at the scenery' uses incorrect preposition and singular/plural: use 'take photos of the scenery' (Singular and plural issue ID 1 and Incorrect use of prepositions ID 11). (4) 'capture clearly the scenery' has adverb placement: 'capture the scenery clearly' (Incorrect adverb placement, ID 20). (5) 'use my eye' should be plural 'eyes' and 'not use take photos' is wrong verb form; corrected to 'use my eyes to take in those views, not take photos' (Incorrect use of pronouns ID 12 and Verb structure issues ID 8/26). Suggestions: replace 'AI' with 'I', 'card' with 'car', use 'photos of' and plural 'eyes', place adverb after object, and simplify final clause to parallel verbs 'use my eyes to enjoy, not take photos.'

× I prefer, uh, both of them because I think the Mountain View and the sea view are totally different.

✓ I prefer both of them because I think the mountain view and the sea view are totally different.

Issues: Capitalization and article/capitalization misuse: 'Mountain View' and 'sea view' should be lowercase common nouns when speaking generally (Article errors/usage, ID 22). Also unnecessary comma after 'prefer'. Suggestions: remove filler comma, use lowercase 'mountain view' and 'sea view' when not referring to a proper noun, and keep parallel structure 'the mountain view and the sea view.'

× One is blue, one is green, and when you a see the sea, you felt very freedom, but when you see the mountain, your eyes very clear and you can see very far.

✓ One is blue, the other is green. When you see the sea, you feel very free, but when you see the mountains, your vision is very clear and you can see far.

Issues: (1) 'a see' is incorrect word order/typo (Sentence structure errors, ID 26). (2) 'you felt very freedom' mixes tenses and uses wrong word forms: past tense 'felt' should be present 'feel' to match 'when you see', and 'freedom' is a noun but adjective 'free' is needed (Present tense issue ID 6 and Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs ID 13). (3) 'see the mountain, your eyes very clear' lacks verb 'are' (Sentence without a verb / sentence structure error ID 23/26) and 'mountain' should be plural 'mountains' when generalizing (Singular and plural issue ID 1). (4) 'you can see very far' is acceptable but 'see far' is more natural. Suggestions: split into two sentences for clarity, use consistent present tense 'feel', use adjective 'free', include verb 'is' or 'are' for 'vision is clear', and pluralize 'mountains' for general reference.